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Reviewer: Claire Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2005 - 06:18 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

I love this story, especially the line about homonal vampires! Claire

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2005 - 01:17 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

This story gets more complex and interesting with every chapter. You're doing a great job calling Willow on her actions, and I really like Tara speaking her mind. Willow has been particularly villainous the past couple of chapters, I can't wait to read her reaction to Buffy's news and getting asked to leave the house. Dawn is lovely to read, and her search for her origins is a nice plot point. Buffy back from the grave is being well written and her relationship with Spike has grown organically in the face of her dependence on him.

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2005 - 11:45 pm Title: Innocence creates my hell

Finally!! please post soon

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 11:03 pm Title: Innocence creates my hell

If Wesley is right – it could be possible for Spike to get Buffy pregnant, too. And Willow chicked out telling Angel. Well, that’s not bad. Quit that – she told about Buffy being back, but not about Buffy being with Spike. That’s good for now. And I’m glad that Buffy did find the courage to tell Willow too. It will help her heal (Buffy). And it’s good when Willow goes. Maybe it will help her. When it is not too late for that.

Reviewer: Gail Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 05:31 pm Title: Innocence creates my hell

This story keeps getting better and better. I love your characterizations of everyone -- they are very believable. I always hate to see the chapter end.

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 01:46 pm Title: Innocence creates my hell

Great Chapter. CAn't wit for the next chapter. Please continue to update soon and often

Reviewer: jane Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 01:07 pm Title: Innocence creates my hell

Yeh I'm so glad they finally confronted Willow. Update soon can't wait for the fallout.

Reviewer: TheBear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 12:21 pm Title: Innocence creates my hell

Oh my, how's Willow going to take this? And I suppose we'll be seeing Angel soon. Story just keeps getting better.

Reviewer: AmyB Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 08:10 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

Niamh, you just keep amazing me with this. And I love this revelation, because as much as I liked OMWF, it irked me that everyone jumped to support Willow when it was Buffy that needed the comfort. And Angel...well, petulant is the least of what he is, but I love the way his attitude shows through here. Excellent work!

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 05:13 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

Dawn wasn't mincing words when she said 'Showdown,' was she? Wow, kick butt chapter! I'm already feeling the adrenaline rush from an on-coming battle. "Welcome to Thunderdome...." Can't wait for more...especially on that pregnancy front...oh, am I seeing some foreshadowing?

Reviewer: songgal1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 04:22 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Rana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 03:40 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

Wow. Just wow. So much revealed in one chapter. Spike's reaction to hearing of Darla's pregnancy was just priceless. LoL. And I would have loved to have seen both Spike and Giles' faces when Wes told them that the prophecy might extend to Buffy. *snickers* Man, is Buffy gonna freak or what? Too much stress in one day, I say. The Willow confrontation would wipe me out. Poor Tara. Lovely work, NIa, keeping all these plot-threads finely woven together. How you master that, I'll never know. I'm hoping you can keep Angel away for just a little bit longer. At least until Willow moves out and Buffy is told of the news of Darla's pregnancy and the prophecy. Holy cow. No wonder Buffy is clinging to Spike like he's a life preserver. If I had to deal with all the drama they're going through right now, I'd cling to him too. Well... I'd cling to him anyway, but that's irrelevant. Dawn stepping up like that, to tell Willow she needs to go was so mature! Go Dawnie! *claps* She's really taking on some adult responsibilities - calling Angel, researching her background, supporting Tara and Buffy during their hard time. She's not a little girl anymore. *sniff, sniff* Joyce would be so proud of her girls. Great chapter Nia! Each one just keeps getting better and better! I can't wait to see Spike tell Buffy about the prophecy.

Reviewer: Addie Logan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 03:14 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

Well, Willow being gone will probably reduce the tension in the house for now, but I'm predicting badness somewhere along the line. And mystical pregnancies, huh? Wonder where you're going with that. lol Looking forward to more. :)

Reviewer: Patti Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 02:59 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

Wow! Why do I think Willow isn't going to take this well??? Updates soon, please! I love assertive, not-so-self-involved Dawn.

Reviewer: blacknblue2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 02:13 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

I just have to say that I really love this story. I always thought that a lot of stories just made Buffy bounce back too easily. I think it's great how you've really captured just how painful and difficult it was for Buffy to drag herself back to being a close resemblance of her old self. Also, yay on them for kicking Willow out. She needs to understand that her actions have consequences. I really think you're a wonderful author. I can't wait to see what's next.

Reviewer: Tam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 01:48 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

yet another great update :) poor Tara!

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 01:18 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

Can't wait to see Willow's reaction, but I like the way they approached this. Really think Buffy's pregnant?

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 01:03 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

OOOHHH YEEEAAAAAA. That bitch. i knew she would try and get ahold of Angel. And then lie about it. Go Dawn, get out willow. That was soooo wonderful. Tara is really starting to come into her own. its just fantastic. Well, the whole Darla pregnancy thing is getting interesting. Good gods it could be possible for spike to get buffy pregnant. *giggles* soooo cute. Another wonderful chapter Nia. Thank-you for writing this. It brings me such joy

Reviewer: cee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 12:30 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

O.U.C.H.

Reviewer: Wolfspider Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 12:26 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

Not sure where to begin in this one.....Angel is just a git that is all there is to it and how selfish of him to just think Buffy would want to see him...I mean duhhhhhhhhh jackass dont' you think she would of had someone tell him before this....dumbass....Wes rocks trying to keep things in perspective and not give away too much info...good ole chap he is....Kudos to Tara for sticking up to the blundering poor excuse for breathing Willow....Buffy needed to say more but I believe that will come....HUGE points to Dawn for settling the deal "Willow get out"....YEAH good but I don't think the red dipshit will leave willingly without working some serious dangerous magicks....grrrrrrrrrrrr....The storm is building and a few lightening strickes have begun to come down...let's hope one hits willow in the head and the other one to Angel....Excellent tieing of the threads and yet making more....WHOA!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Diabola Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 12:10 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

Oh god, they kicked her out, they really did it! I was so hoping for this to happen. I can't believe Willow even tried to deny calling Angel. Didn't she just think how it was a good thing to call him and thet Buffy would be happy about it? If she really believed that, why would she deny it? The girl is so seriously messed up! Love the interaction between those left at the house though. Nice to see Tara gets the support she deserves instead of Buffy clinging to her old friendships as if it didn't matter how they all changed. I've always hated that on the show. No matter if they where all best friends once upon a time, it shouldn't be used as an excuse to let them do what they want. In a way that's like saying you have to stay in a relationship with an abusive partner because you laved each other once upon a time. It's simply stupid! Really loved this chapter (and the ones I didn't leave a rev for too, sorry bout that, don't always remember *blushes*).

Reviewer: Shelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2005 - 11:56 pm Title: Innocence creates my hell

This is such a fabulous story. I have been addicted to it since you started. So complex, yet, compelling. You have made the characters come to life. I can't wait for the confrontation between Angel and Buffy/Spike. Once area I am very curious is the origin of the key and from who it was made from. That will be interesting. Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: Kate Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2005 - 11:54 pm Title: Innocence creates my hell

Awesome! More new twists and tangles to worry about regarding prophecies and babies; Angel now knowing Buffy's back and chomping at the bit and of course Willow. I'm glad someone kicked her out. I'm glad someone is going to point out (even if it doesn't penetrate) the wrongness and consequences of what she is doing. Again, you are develing into the plot points and character paths left undeveloped by the show and doing a fantastic job of it!

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