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Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2005 - 06:40 pm Title: The space between your heart and mine

Loved the chapter! On one side - Dawn told Xander the truth - maybe he'll believes it now. And Tara telling the reast. The other side - Buffy choosing Spike over Angel. Well, technically she did it a long time ago. But this now was just for Angel :-D

Reviewer: jane Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2005 - 04:59 pm Title: The space between your heart and mine

Well that told him. Brilliant chpt great standoff at the end. Giles was so cool

Reviewer: Gail Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2005 - 05:58 am Title: The space between your heart and mine

This was a great continuation and enhancement of the previous scene -- and VERY cathartic. The tension in the last two chapters has been palpable. Good job! Loved Buffy's "crumbs" comment, and that S&B completely deflated Angel's power play by just leaving. Your Anya is so delightful, and am I detecting the beginnings of a little Ganya?!? It would serve Xander right. I'm curious to see if any of Dawn and Tara's truths will penetrate his dense brain. :)

Reviewer: sheila Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2005 - 05:10 am Title: The space between your heart and mine

love that buffy and spike are a true couple now and she was close to telling spike she loved him.love that gile backuo spike instande of angel who he was never a fan of.great chapter

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2005 - 04:45 am Title: The space between your heart and mine

hands down great chapter! I didn't like Angel with Buffy either because they just didn't do it for me, unlike Spuffy who sizzled with heated looks. YUM! Much preferred Angel with Cordy, so I'm wondering if that'll happen in your story too. Can't wait to see the Xander/Willow talk, Giles/Anya possiblities, and more on Dawn's origin.

Reviewer: Rachel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2005 - 02:12 am Title: The space between your heart and mine

Yay, and he's getting pushed out the door by everyone and it's all great! I love Anya's comments on Angel and Spike - very typical Anya, just great! The tension between Spike and Angel was well written, just wonderful. LOVE this story, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2005 - 02:05 am Title: The space between your heart and mine

Willow and Dawn calmly standing up to Xander was excellent. I can't wait to hear Willow explain herself. I really liked Spike's comfort and support of Buffy, giving her what she needed to regain her balance. Spike's controlled reaction to Angel's anger was also wonderful, and getting that little barb in about Darla and Connor was perfect.

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2005 - 02:02 am Title: The space between your heart and mine

“goodbye Angel.” YEAH GOODBYE ANGEL, and take Willow and Zander with you!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Rana Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2005 - 01:50 am Title: The space between your heart and mine

*does fangirl dance* Woo-Hoo! Goodbyyyyye Angel! Stupid freakin' a-hole. Nice non-violent confrontation between Spike and Angel. Loved, loved, loved that Spike stood up for himself without letting the great foreheaded one get to him. Great, amazing dialogue this chapter. Everything that was said, was said with incredible purpose behind. Intense amounts of emotion. My heart is still beating fast after reading it. Dawn and Tara standing up for themselves and telling Xander the truth was wonderful. I was hoping that Xander would hear the facts rather than Willow's self-serving half-truths. Also loved Giles and Anya's interaction. Anya's lines about choosing Spike over Angel were priceless! That girl cracks me up.. lol! You write a magnificent Anya - blunt, brutal, yet somewhat naive and sweet. The chemistry between those two has never been lacking. Giles would be a very lucky man to have her on his arm. I eagerly await the fallout from this chapter - if Buffy does truly backslide. I sincerely hope her nightmares and panic attacks don't resurface. Goddess what an ordeal! I think I need some comfort food after reading this chapter. It's a good thing I've got some easter candy handy. Thanks for another wonderful, intense chapter Nia. You rock!

Reviewer: Wolfspider Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2005 - 01:35 am Title: The space between your heart and mine

BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nia that was brilliantly written...Xander was a total ass...did they need to give him english lessons before he was able to translate what Dawn and Tara were telling him...DORK...GO Dawn giving it to him good though..Tara coming in to back it all up...though Xander will still be the ass and not understand any of it. "Angel is too brooding and not worthy of good orgasms" OMG roflmao that was fabulous and complete Anya at her best...HURRAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....Of course Angel was being his poor excuse for a vampire self...Spike standing his ground and just telling that git how it is and Buffy sending him off too....YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! go away Angel far far away....GREAT chapter

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2005 - 01:34 am Title: The space between your heart and mine

AH Great Chapter. Loved the way spike and buffy handled angel. Hopefully Angel will wake up and leave . PLEASE update soon and often.

Reviewer: Addie Logan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2005 - 01:24 am Title: The space between your heart and mine

So much in that chapter, what can I say? The Buffy and Spike bits were wonderful. Spike's giving her just what she needs--someone to lean on who won't try to overcrowd her like certain other vampires... And may I just say I loved Anya's little observation about Angel? LOL Dawn and Tara's confrontation with Xander was good, too. Let him think about that for a while if it doesn't make his head explode. And yay Giles for telling Angel what's what. :) As always, great chapter!

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2005 - 01:23 am Title: The space between your heart and mine

Angel has a lot of nerve!! Xander is really pissing me off!! Please let Buffy, Spike, Tara, Dawn, Giles and Anya put him in his place soon. His judgemental ways are driving me crazy. Anways, keep up the great work.

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2005 - 12:59 am Title: The space between your heart and mine

another fabulous chapter. i hope xander can process all this information and finally realize what willow has been doing and stop trying to blame spike for everything. wiked confrontation between spike and angel. ooooo...that was just fantastic, and way to go giles. you tell 'em. funny, funny convo between giles and anya. interesting that angel saw them standing so close together and wondered if that was really anya. hhhmmmmm.......they would be good together. always thought that. thanx for the update as always Nia

Reviewer: Shelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2005 - 12:39 am Title: The space between your heart and mine

I so love this story. Something tells me that we probably haven't seen the end of Angel. I agree, I never got the so-called "chemistry" between him and Buffy. I always found him to be arrogant and self absorbed. I always love your own comments and thoughts at the first of the chapters. So many times you stated what I have always thought about particluar situations and characters. More, more, more.

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