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Reviewer: Gail Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 06:22 am Title: Never break the chain

No way is the story too long! Wonderful exchange between Buffy and Tara about the latter now being one of Spike's. Sweet S&B. Stupid, stupid Xander. Can't wait to see the eruption with the coming of Angel.

Reviewer: sheila Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 03:54 am Title: Never break the chain

so buffy wouldn't mind having spike child yes go buffy just win there geting closer angel just has to come and mess thing's up.our at least try to cause buffy in not interested in him anymore.great chapter

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 03:40 am Title: Never break the chain

loved it!!! i'm glad buffy wasn't mad about the darla being pregnent thing. please post soon. i really want buffy to give xander a real good talking to. he NEEDS to be set staight

Reviewer: Addie Logan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 02:04 am Title: Never break the chain

Ooh...I know the song! Granted, I was named after a Fleetwood Mac song, so suffice to say I sort of grew up with it...lol Anyway, good chapter as always. Xander is a moron. He needs to have Bad Things happen to him. Poor Anya having to put up with his pointless yammering. Willow and Tara's break up Spike's fault? The craziness that is Xander logic... Really liked the last scene with Spike and Buffy, too, getting a little more out on the open.

Reviewer: Ruadh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 01:57 am Title: Never break the chain

Too long? Who said it's too long! If you're not tired of writing it, we're not tired of reading it.

Reviewer: Kate Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 01:49 am Title: Never break the chain

The ending was so sweet...I like how they didn't make a big deal out of the revelation, just quietly accepting it. Love Dawn's pov on the Willow-Tara sitch as well.

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 01:37 am Title: Never break the chain

fleetwood mac.....with that said, this was another fabulous chapter. boo-hoo-hoo...poor willow...NOT. lol at dawn standing gaurd, not caring about a crying willow. you go girl. it was so cute that buffy told tara spike considered her his. "it's a thing". that it is, that it is. Gods if i was giles i would have punched xander years ago. the headaches that man must get. and anya, i don't know how she can be with him. it must be the orgasms tho he can't be that good. LOL knew angel wouldn't wait. *shakes head*...better to get it over with now tho and i wanna see buffy give it to him good cuz you know hes gonna say something stupid. bufffy saw a babys face...*VBG* Nia, don't make us wait to soon. don't think my heart can handle it

Reviewer: Patti Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 01:19 am Title: Never break the chain

ooooh, great new chapter, Niamh. Do I sense a baby in the Spuffy future? And now Angel's on his way there? That can't be good.

Reviewer: Rana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 01:16 am Title: Never break the chain

It's raining babies! Or, I wish it was. I hope it will. Oh, you know what I mean. Awwwwww, how cute was the end of this chapter? So precious! I'm so glad Buffy isn't wigged by the prospect of having a little Spike or Buffy. How cute would their little one be? So adorable - with chubby cheeks, blue (or hazel) eyes, curly hair and dad's pouty lip. I hope Angel's theory is correct. I also hope Angel doesn't make it to Sunnydale until Buffy and Spike have gone patrolling. Eee gads. Xander's rant was just perfect - for his character. You were dead on when you mentioned Xander and thinking were unmixy. Very unmixy - at least where Buffy's love life is concerned. It's as if Xander believes Buffy doesn't deserve unconditional love from any source, unless it's his love. Man, he needs to get over his Buffy fixation. Anya is a complete goddess for putting up with his shit. I really felt the discomfort and unease that you were displaying this chapter, especially with Willow's departure from the household. I felt like I wanted to get out and hit something. Everything about this chapter was pitch perfect Nia. It just keeps getting more and more exciting. I can see how you are finely weaving all your plot threads together. And I'm so excited to see where those threads take the characters!

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 01:15 am Title: Never break the chain

Love the chapter. Hopefully things will straighen out soon. please continue to update soon and often.

Reviewer: Rana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 12:48 am Title: Never break the chain

Haven't read the chappy yet, but I wanted to guess the band behind the title. Is it Fleetwood Mac? I don't know what albumn, and I could be totally wrong. But this is my guess. :)

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 12:48 am Title: Never break the chain

Crap are they gonna have to use condoms now?

Reviewer: Wolfspider Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 12:48 am Title: Never break the chain

First off it is Fleetwood Mac who sang the song and damn it kicks ass even today....Good for Willow I hope she chokes on her tears and gets snot on her shirt *grins*....Tara being so surprised at Buffy's words to her about being on of Spike's girls...of course she is i mean he would not protect her for nothing....Poor Giles having to deal with that git Xander and Poor Anya trying to keep the language simple for him to understand....That's a girl Buffy not being thinking it a bad thing that she could get pregers from Spike...Ohhhhhh what a beautiful baby...now let's get to the part that helps that along *laughs* That was a great segway for things to come...Angel that idiot I hope he doesn't get to sunnydale but i fear he will and good then he will see Buffy with a real vampire and a real man...good for him that ass....

Reviewer: slackerace Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 12:42 am Title: Never break the chain

Fleetwood Mac? Progress at whatever speed you feel comfortable. You write 200 chapters, I'll read 'em!!

Reviewer: Shelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 12:38 am Title: Never break the chain

This story just gets better and better. Facinating. I was please to see that you are going to continue it. You are a true talent. Please, more!!!!

Reviewer: Lyns Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2005 - 04:53 pm Title: Shadows taller than our souls

not read the chapter yet, but wanted to say i thought your quoting of the rede was very well placed.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2005 - 01:17 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

This story gets more complex and interesting with every chapter. You're doing a great job calling Willow on her actions, and I really like Tara speaking her mind. Willow has been particularly villainous the past couple of chapters, I can't wait to read her reaction to Buffy's news and getting asked to leave the house. Dawn is lovely to read, and her search for her origins is a nice plot point. Buffy back from the grave is being well written and her relationship with Spike has grown organically in the face of her dependence on him.

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2005 - 11:45 pm Title: Innocence creates my hell

Finally!! please post soon

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 11:03 pm Title: Innocence creates my hell

If Wesley is right – it could be possible for Spike to get Buffy pregnant, too. And Willow chicked out telling Angel. Well, that’s not bad. Quit that – she told about Buffy being back, but not about Buffy being with Spike. That’s good for now. And I’m glad that Buffy did find the courage to tell Willow too. It will help her heal (Buffy). And it’s good when Willow goes. Maybe it will help her. When it is not too late for that.

Reviewer: Gail Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 05:31 pm Title: Innocence creates my hell

This story keeps getting better and better. I love your characterizations of everyone -- they are very believable. I always hate to see the chapter end.

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 01:46 pm Title: Innocence creates my hell

Great Chapter. CAn't wit for the next chapter. Please continue to update soon and often

Reviewer: jane Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 01:07 pm Title: Innocence creates my hell

Yeh I'm so glad they finally confronted Willow. Update soon can't wait for the fallout.

Reviewer: TheBear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 12:21 pm Title: Innocence creates my hell

Oh my, how's Willow going to take this? And I suppose we'll be seeing Angel soon. Story just keeps getting better.

Reviewer: AmyB Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 08:10 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

Niamh, you just keep amazing me with this. And I love this revelation, because as much as I liked OMWF, it irked me that everyone jumped to support Willow when it was Buffy that needed the comfort. And Angel...well, petulant is the least of what he is, but I love the way his attitude shows through here. Excellent work!

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 05:13 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

Dawn wasn't mincing words when she said 'Showdown,' was she? Wow, kick butt chapter! I'm already feeling the adrenaline rush from an on-coming battle. "Welcome to Thunderdome...." Can't wait for more...especially on that pregnancy front...oh, am I seeing some foreshadowing?

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