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Reviewer: songgal1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 04:22 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Rana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 03:40 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

Wow. Just wow. So much revealed in one chapter. Spike's reaction to hearing of Darla's pregnancy was just priceless. LoL. And I would have loved to have seen both Spike and Giles' faces when Wes told them that the prophecy might extend to Buffy. *snickers* Man, is Buffy gonna freak or what? Too much stress in one day, I say. The Willow confrontation would wipe me out. Poor Tara. Lovely work, NIa, keeping all these plot-threads finely woven together. How you master that, I'll never know. I'm hoping you can keep Angel away for just a little bit longer. At least until Willow moves out and Buffy is told of the news of Darla's pregnancy and the prophecy. Holy cow. No wonder Buffy is clinging to Spike like he's a life preserver. If I had to deal with all the drama they're going through right now, I'd cling to him too. Well... I'd cling to him anyway, but that's irrelevant. Dawn stepping up like that, to tell Willow she needs to go was so mature! Go Dawnie! *claps* She's really taking on some adult responsibilities - calling Angel, researching her background, supporting Tara and Buffy during their hard time. She's not a little girl anymore. *sniff, sniff* Joyce would be so proud of her girls. Great chapter Nia! Each one just keeps getting better and better! I can't wait to see Spike tell Buffy about the prophecy.

Reviewer: Addie Logan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 03:14 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

Well, Willow being gone will probably reduce the tension in the house for now, but I'm predicting badness somewhere along the line. And mystical pregnancies, huh? Wonder where you're going with that. lol Looking forward to more. :)

Reviewer: Patti Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 02:59 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

Wow! Why do I think Willow isn't going to take this well??? Updates soon, please! I love assertive, not-so-self-involved Dawn.

Reviewer: blacknblue2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 02:13 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

I just have to say that I really love this story. I always thought that a lot of stories just made Buffy bounce back too easily. I think it's great how you've really captured just how painful and difficult it was for Buffy to drag herself back to being a close resemblance of her old self. Also, yay on them for kicking Willow out. She needs to understand that her actions have consequences. I really think you're a wonderful author. I can't wait to see what's next.

Reviewer: Tam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 01:48 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

yet another great update :) poor Tara!

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 01:18 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

Can't wait to see Willow's reaction, but I like the way they approached this. Really think Buffy's pregnant?

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 01:03 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

OOOHHH YEEEAAAAAA. That bitch. i knew she would try and get ahold of Angel. And then lie about it. Go Dawn, get out willow. That was soooo wonderful. Tara is really starting to come into her own. its just fantastic. Well, the whole Darla pregnancy thing is getting interesting. Good gods it could be possible for spike to get buffy pregnant. *giggles* soooo cute. Another wonderful chapter Nia. Thank-you for writing this. It brings me such joy

Reviewer: cee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 12:30 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

O.U.C.H.

Reviewer: Wolfspider Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 12:26 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

Not sure where to begin in this one.....Angel is just a git that is all there is to it and how selfish of him to just think Buffy would want to see him...I mean duhhhhhhhhh jackass dont' you think she would of had someone tell him before this....dumbass....Wes rocks trying to keep things in perspective and not give away too much info...good ole chap he is....Kudos to Tara for sticking up to the blundering poor excuse for breathing Willow....Buffy needed to say more but I believe that will come....HUGE points to Dawn for settling the deal "Willow get out"....YEAH good but I don't think the red dipshit will leave willingly without working some serious dangerous magicks....grrrrrrrrrrrr....The storm is building and a few lightening strickes have begun to come down...let's hope one hits willow in the head and the other one to Angel....Excellent tieing of the threads and yet making more....WHOA!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Diabola Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 12:10 am Title: Innocence creates my hell

Oh god, they kicked her out, they really did it! I was so hoping for this to happen. I can't believe Willow even tried to deny calling Angel. Didn't she just think how it was a good thing to call him and thet Buffy would be happy about it? If she really believed that, why would she deny it? The girl is so seriously messed up! Love the interaction between those left at the house though. Nice to see Tara gets the support she deserves instead of Buffy clinging to her old friendships as if it didn't matter how they all changed. I've always hated that on the show. No matter if they where all best friends once upon a time, it shouldn't be used as an excuse to let them do what they want. In a way that's like saying you have to stay in a relationship with an abusive partner because you laved each other once upon a time. It's simply stupid! Really loved this chapter (and the ones I didn't leave a rev for too, sorry bout that, don't always remember *blushes*).

Reviewer: Shelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2005 - 11:56 pm Title: Innocence creates my hell

This is such a fabulous story. I have been addicted to it since you started. So complex, yet, compelling. You have made the characters come to life. I can't wait for the confrontation between Angel and Buffy/Spike. Once area I am very curious is the origin of the key and from who it was made from. That will be interesting. Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: Kate Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2005 - 11:54 pm Title: Innocence creates my hell

Awesome! More new twists and tangles to worry about regarding prophecies and babies; Angel now knowing Buffy's back and chomping at the bit and of course Willow. I'm glad someone kicked her out. I'm glad someone is going to point out (even if it doesn't penetrate) the wrongness and consequences of what she is doing. Again, you are develing into the plot points and character paths left undeveloped by the show and doing a fantastic job of it!

Reviewer: Jade2099 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2005 - 09:31 pm Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

Oh Queen of Evil cliffhangars...I'm on pins and needles waiting to see what Willow concocts - the girl is dangerous and I'm worried ol' Buffy and Spike are going to be in for a rough ride. It's interesting how you're pulling Angel into the mix and what's happened with Darla. Brilliant. :) Absolutely brilliant! :)

Reviewer: zanthine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 11:51 pm Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

Really enjoying this one. Anxious to see what Willow's up to, especially to see how it involves Wesley!

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 10:58 pm Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

Xander is getting on my last nerve. willow is pissing me off and i'm sure angel is gonna get on my bad side in the next chapter too. It's still a great fic. Please post soon. I love it

Reviewer: Addie Logan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 02:40 pm Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

Well...looks like I owe *you* another cliffhanger now. Just wait until I post something... LOL Can't wait to see what Buffy has to say about that last statement of Giles'. And I'm also looking forward to finding out what Wesley's theory is. Poor Buffy having her secret spilled like that, but it's probably for the best. Tara needed to know what Willow really did, even if it was painful to deal with. And speaking of Willow, she and Xander better behave themselves... Great chapter!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 09:19 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

Great chapter and good written. And several hints of what to come (maybe). Xander is so blind, following Willow's lead. I'm glad Wes did answer the phone.

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 07:30 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

Oh this is getting more and more interesting and I hope the payment is a little red head name after a certain tree and misuses her magic.....badly.....bad witch needs to pay...... And when is Xander going to stop being led by his not so nice friend.

Reviewer: songgal1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 05:56 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

well I hope you will be a fan of C/A and B/S angst cause this could get fun1

Reviewer: Gail Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 04:28 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

Wonderful chapter! Great job with the unraveling of Buffy's secret and everyone's subsequent reactions. The intricacies of the plot with the inclusion of the situation in LA and W&X's machinations are quite compelling. More, please.

Reviewer: Pipergirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 02:52 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

I really like the role you've given Wesley in this fic--he seems to be an outside observer, but he has so much influence on which direction all the action could go. Great chapter! (oh, and you quoted Rush--go you!)

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 01:25 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

I like this much better than the fade out and never discuss again that happened on the series. People should have been saying a lot of I'm sorrys, but they just never did - at least not enough. I liked this much better. And I always wondered why (other than the obvious network issues) nobody from Sunnydale ever knew what was going on in LA... like Darla

Reviewer: Patti Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 12:51 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

Wonderful new chapters, Nia! Somehow I had 3 to catch up on! What I get for switching between sites for updates; I miss stuff. So, the secret's out and Willow and Xander are getting scarier....

Reviewer: Rana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 12:43 am Title: Mere white truth in simple nakedness

WTF?! Oh boy, oh boy. Darla is still human? She wasn't turned by Drusilla, or died from Syphilis? Damn. Boy does this complicate things. Whooo. As if things weren't complicated enough. Holy Moses. Wesley has found something regarding a "hybrid" being impregnated by a vampire? Not a child being born of two vampires? 'K. I think I've assimilated all the changes. Drastic, revolutionary changes. Holy Crap! This is going to change everything we know. Damn, Willow and Xander called to speak to Angel? That takes balls - to contact the ex for help in removing the only support Buffy seems to want or need during this horrific time for her. I'd really like to smack those two upside the head. Hard. So glad that Dawn shared (tattled) Willow's sordid spying. Spike's reaction to Willow's use of Tara, Buffy, and Dawn (and Willow's spying) was perfect. I'm in Spike's corner. A little vengence on Red would make the perfect appetizer. *licks lips* Xander can be dessert. I'm thinking those playful pups can serve as the first course, followed by draining Red of all her powers as the main meal. *stomach growls* Um, anybody else hungry? Guess I should eat before I review. Great chapter Nia. Loved the scene of Buffy comforting Tara. It mirrored the Buffy/Spike scene in Afterlife, not only in the physical placement, but in the emotional depth of the scene. Really moving hon. So many revelations these last two chapters! My head is spinning with all the dramatic goodness. I love it! I can't wait to see if Wes is able to get ahold of Giles, and if Xander and Willow are able to contact Angel. Oh my goddess! It's like Passions, Sunnyhell style! Simply fabulous!

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