Name: Essi (Anonymous) · Date: 01/23/2005 - 07:15 pm · Chapter: Chapter 8
I so loved that. It was funny and hot. I loved Buffy's sexpert talk and condom shopping. You're chapters are so long that I have to start doing lists so I can tell what I love. You do this so well. *sigh*

Name: Cordykitten (Signed) · Date: 01/08/2005 - 04:06 pm · Chapter: Chapter 8
Awesome! Buffy defending William against the cashier girl, and than the Sexpert letting William explore all “down under”. lol – and Buffy was worrying if the flashlight would go out ;-) Loved it!

Name: Diabola (Signed) · Date: 01/07/2005 - 12:31 pm · Chapter: Chapter 8
Oh god! Wherever did you come up with the flashlight idea? I read this last night and couldn't even review, 'cos I couldn't stop laughing every time I looked at the fic... Still having difficulties with that by the way. I mean, it was cute and all, but to think Buffy actually came up with that idea and somehow told him *lol*. Loved the little scene with the cashier by the way. Nice to see Willian so forceful for a change. And well, the McDonalds stuff was just adorable! Great chapter!

Name: jane (Anonymous) · Date: 01/07/2005 - 06:34 am · Chapter: Chapter 8
Excellent truly stonking chapter>

Name: songgal (Signed) · Date: 01/07/2005 - 03:34 am · Chapter: Chapter 8
That was so awesome....I love how Buffy was so gentle with William and talked him through it!

Name: William's Girl (Anonymous) · Date: 01/07/2005 - 02:37 am · Chapter: Chapter 8
I am absolutelly loving this! I think that you've done a fabulous job of capturing William. The vulnerability and the way you are portraying his discovery of Buffy, sex, and love is so entirely sweet....I just want to eat him up. The scene with the flashlight was completely origninal and completely believable. Loved it!

Name: Brat (Anonymous) · Date: 01/07/2005 - 01:38 am · Chapter: Chapter 8
I just love them together. Both of them exploring and learning about each other. Even though it isn't Buffy's first time, it's like it is and its refreshing. Great job.

Name: blondiebear (Signed) · Date: 01/07/2005 - 01:26 am · Chapter: Chapter 8

Name: Allison (Signed) · Date: 01/07/2005 - 12:48 am · Chapter: Chapter 8
This chapter was both hilarious and sweet- great job!:)

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