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Reviewer: Katie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2010 - 06:47 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

I'm so entertained by your chapters it's crazy! I can hear the characters voices in my head when reading your dialogue. Keep up the great work!

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Date: 02/22/2010 - 01:29 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I like your version of Dawn better than the real thing!

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Date: 04/01/2008 - 11:20 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Love smart and not annoying Dawn!

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Date: 04/01/2008 - 11:20 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Love smart and not annoying Dawn!

Reviewer: Lilly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2006 - 07:03 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Skilled to draw a parallel between Dawn's and Buffy's fake memories. Man, I like Dawnie. She's so damn clever - I'm glad she exists.

Reviewer: Lulu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2006 - 04:04 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

oooohhh Dawn is so cool. Love how you wrote her here.

Reviewer: WolfSpider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2005 - 12:27 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

ohhhhhh you are so lucky you did not stop this story...i mean damn this is so damn good and besides i am marathoning this thing to get caught up. my ass is almost numb sooooooooooo bloody well keep writing or I will sic you know who on you *grins*

Reviewer: BloodThirstyGooddess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 07:53 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I still love this story! Great chapter by the way.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 04:47 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

NOOOOO. don't cut back on the whole posting everyday thing. i like that. please post again soon. great job. buffy is being an ass and so is spike. make it better soon. loved it. great job.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 04:41 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

I have to say that I LOVE the frequent updates... but it is a bit of a 180 from the every few months update. But I promise I'll do better, and check every night! And this chapter. Boy, is Dawn being way super insightful, and being quite the matchmaker! I have faith that her and Spike can work it. I, for one, wouldn't be opposed to another magic book... But I will follow your muse anywhere. Love, LOVE this story. And please, update soon!

Reviewer: timeofchange Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 02:46 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Please don't stop updating....it can take me awhile to catch up but I'm thrilled if I find more than one chapter. I adore this story. The pirate world was so wonderful that maybe some people are still stuck in that emotionally and haven't moved back into the "real" world yet, but the story is still great and I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Reviewer: 3988Akasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Evil, evil you! I need more. You can't just leave me hangin' like that. Yay for Dawn and Spike getting together to make Buffy see the truth!

Reviewer: heathert@earthlink.net Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 09:14 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Hi--I'm really enjoying the story, any reason its not on your own site? Of course I'm also thinking if you wanted to keep the story going, you could weasel a Buffy pregnancy out of the deal ;) Hope the muse keeps with the inspiration & thanks for the story! Heather

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 07:54 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

;-) 42 instead of 18 know :) I'm back.. okay - first: I would love if you could to keep the updates as quick as they are now :)) To the chapter: Loved Dawn trying to ment what Spike and Buffy had broken. If they would only understand that they are both full of fear to get rejected and that they love each other. Loved Dawn trying to beat some sense in Spike *grins* I hope she did suceed :))

Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 06:45 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

GREAT STORY!!! OMG! I LOVE The idea of them being trapped inside a book, and the writing is sooo touching. It's so sad that they never realize they're in love.... As to your question, I'm guessing on the updating too frequently, although too many updates is never a bad thing.... I find it hard to write reviews when there's still more story to read! Goodl luck with the rest of the story!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 04:40 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

You are definitely not updating too frequently! I love this story, am completely addicted and can't wait for more. I really like Dawn in this story. Usually people make her so whining. It's nice to see her determined and taking initative, Buffy and Spike really need it!

Reviewer: Elaine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 03:59 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I read the whole story today... fantastic. Loved the plot twists and turns, the dialogue was incredibly well writen. the "major wiggens, majorly wiggy with the wiggens" "overcompensating" part was comic genius.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 03:38 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

No. DON'T STOP UPDATING DAILY. I LOVE IT! It's the just the summer slumps that have the reviews trailing off (people on vaca, not able to get to the net, etc.) Please don't think there's no interest. Loved the last chap, especially Dawn smacking Spike around (pretty funny - usually I hate Dawn, but in this tale, I love her "get off you duff and do something about it" attitude!). More please.

Reviewer: jeni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 03:31 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

no!! keep with the posting. I'm sure it was the weekend, next chapter please. Want to see buffy get smacked in head now.

Reviewer: lynn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 01:03 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I wonder what the plan will be. Don't stop updating. I like this story. Frequent updates are great. I like Dawn's more mature side she always insisted was there.

Reviewer: Kar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 11:48 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Great past couple chapters.

Reviewer: Karen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 10:06 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Please update whenever you can. I'm so into this story that I was thrilled to see another update. So glad Dawn is trying to help out the stubborn Buffy and Spike.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 10:02 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Hehe.. what a little message can do (not to update because of missing reviews) - you got almost twice as much as on the previous chapter! You'll get my feedback in the evening. TTYL

Reviewer: Pattie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 08:39 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

I love this story. You are definitely not updating too frequently. I can't wait to see how these two inact their plan cause I know it'll work. Keep writing and posting! Great stuff.

Reviewer: chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 08:14 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

I'm still interested - please don't give up the story,and update as often as you like - almost daily is fine by me :) I want to see Spike get his girl.

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