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Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2007 - 01:51 pm Title: Part Eleven

Oh I hate Angel

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2005 - 09:24 pm Title: Part Eleven

And Angel is still trying to break Spike and Buffy apart..

Reviewer: alexandrea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2005 - 10:46 pm Title: Part Eleven

I HATE angel and i hope buffy kicks his silly ass no a matter of fact i hope she kills him this. chapter was really good i cant wait for the next one

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2005 - 05:56 am Title: Part Eleven

Excellent chapter. I knew Spike wouldn't leave. This is probably gonna piss a few people off but I'm saying it within the context of this story, not about the character of Angel in general: He doesn't deserve the soul that he was cursed with. Not when he can call into question Spike's behavior without a chip or a soul when he hasn't been around Spike in the pst few years. Angel needs to get over the fact that just because he was an evil, unloving asshole without a soul that Spike is one as well. Also, I'm thinking he has an ulterior motive for trying to get Spike out of the picture. I'm not buying the "it's best for Buffy is you leave" thing. Okay, that's my two cents. LOL! Now that I've written a small novel for a review, I'll be going. Mark of excellent writing that you got me thinking about the situation outside of the words on the page. Job well done!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2005 - 02:48 am Title: Part Eleven

i have never wanted to stake angel as much as i wanted to in this chapter. i hope buffy finds spike and i hope that she doesn't stop believing in him. angel is just jealous. great job. keep up the great work.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2005 - 02:00 am Title: Part Eleven

I hate Angel. At least (this time) Spike killed the demons and freed the humans. That's gotta be worth something (at least it will be to Buffy if she finds out). More soon please.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 10:07 pm Title: Part Eleven

The line "Buffy deserved better than what he could offer, but that didn't mean Spike was going to stop offering what little he had. It wasn't the size of the sacrifice that mattered..." beautifully encapsulated both Spike's insecurity and his tenacity. Thank you for making it clear that Spike recognizes Angel's mind games and is standing firmly at Buffy's side. This chapter spelled out Spike's motivation and determination clearly. It seems that Angel can't get over that he and Spike are nothing alike.

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 08:15 pm Title: Part Eleven

come on , kick some angel ass. i love this story so far please update really quickly LOVE IT!!!!!!

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