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Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2007 - 01:16 pm Title: Part Eight

well that was an easy 20 wonder how she figured it our exactly, even though she said he looked her in the eye did he not do that the past year.

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2005 - 05:58 pm Title: Part Eight

i think you have several of the funniest lines i could have ever seen in a fic before...and the more...they could have perfectly fit the series mood...you're doing a fantastic job...keep it up thanx...hope you update soon

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2005 - 08:43 am Title: Part Eight

Another wonderful chapter. I really love all the characters in this one...and that's saying something. I usually find Dawn and Xander irritating, but I find myself actually enjoying them in this story. Looking forward to Part Nine.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2005 - 09:04 pm Title: Part Eight

spike should get his soul back because he wants to not becuse it will make buffy feel safter. as for Dawn and Spike i hope they can become friends again because i really wish that had been resolved during season seven i would love to see them as they were before. can't wait to see angel's reaction update soon please.

Reviewer: songgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2005 - 12:34 am Title: Part Eight

I think you did fine with Giles...good job over all!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2005 - 10:51 pm Title: Part Eight

Loved the Car - part and the Bet, too
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Reviewer: blondiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2005 - 10:21 pm Title: Part Eight

I know Spike really did a bad thing but he went to get his soul back for Buffy. Giles and Dawn should just give him a break. He's earned it. Keep up the great work. loved it.

Reviewer: anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2005 - 08:55 pm Title: Part Eight

very good fic so far =) wold love to read more ;)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2005 - 07:51 pm Title: Part Eight

This story is smart and entertaining. The dialogue and characterizations are excellent and I love the premise. Giles may be cautious and overly critical of Buffy's choices, but he is acting in character. Dawn is very well written, whiny and pouty and manipulative. I enjoyed her interaction with Spike in the diner, especially the way she and Spike played Buffy for the extra ten bucks - Evil! Spike and Buffy are well realized, too. I can't wait for them to check in with Angel - the Wolfram and Hart situation will be a shock.

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2005 - 07:25 pm Title: Part Eight

I so want Spike and Dawn to be friends again. I loved the scene with them talking. It was sweet. And it's great the Dawn didn't freak out about the lack of soul. Good chapter

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