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Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2007 - 01:31 pm Title: Part Nine

Oh I loved it, but Spike is right in a way about Angel.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 07:44 pm Title: Part Nine

The confrontation between Buffy and Angel was really well written, and I loved the line "The other day you said he wsa in your heart, not your pants." Buffy's speech defending Spike was an excellent platform to let the soul information slip. I like the tension between Spike and Buffy, too. Spike with balls is a lot of fun to read.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 12:57 pm Title: Part Nine

I'm glad the "end" thing was a joke.
In Buffy's case - I wouldn't have give in to Angel. He has no rights over her by now. I'm looking forward to see this story continued.

Reviewer: songgal1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2005 - 05:49 am Title: Part Nine

why if you're doing the au or off canon thing don't you have Cordy there as well. In ATS she would be in a coma by now; but you could use her as a buffer between angel and spike plus some cordy/buffy angst about angel is always of the good.

Reviewer: melissa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2005 - 05:28 am Title: Part Nine

love this story. i wasnt sure if i was gonna read it or not n then i decided to n im really glad i did. great job. u really scared me with the "the end" lol. loves it.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2005 - 01:13 am Title: Part Nine

Great chpter. Keeping an eye out for that sneaky Angel. I agree with Spike. ANgel is such a sore loser when it comes to Spike.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 11:39 pm Title: Part Nine

that was a great chapter. angel however could of been a little less of a jerk but oh well he'll get over it. i have a feeling as to whats to come at least i think i do anyways. can't wait to see how this is going to turn out. keep up the good work.

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