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Reviewer: Shayhop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 01:07 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen

Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed your story. Great job with staying with the characters. Very believable.

Reviewer: Kristin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2005 - 10:34 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen

ahhh i loved it!! it was soo cute!! u should do a sequel!!! hehe

Reviewer: Gwendolen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2005 - 11:43 am Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen

Very satisfying working through with all the characters of what to do about Spike's missing soul. This was a good read.

Reviewer: Pam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2005 - 05:14 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen

Enjoyed the story. Glad you left it open. I prefer _____.

Reviewer: kat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2005 - 05:41 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen

loved the story, I've been following it from the beginning and constantly checking for updates:) You write them well(spike and buffy)I don't know;there's just something about them together isn't there? It's really nice to read a story with a good plot,good characterization,action and romance;and your story has it all; so thank you very much for entertaining me with every word and please, keep writing.............Don't forget about the Big Easy either eh'......I like that one too.::))

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2005 - 05:34 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen

err hate that she didnt except him at first without the soul and only wanted to be with him if he had one, its so stupid every one could tell that he changed but there all stuck up bastards . i love this story and am happy i read it. thanks for writing it i enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of your stories in the future thanx again

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2005 - 12:03 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen

Excellent open ended finish. You're right, the journey was not about Spike getting his soul restored. Having Buffy accept that she is in love with Spike with or without the soul is more dramatic. I enjoyed the entire story, your handle on the characters was excellent.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2005 - 09:58 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen

Magnificant ending! I love that you left up to your readers to decide for themselves what Spike chose. Personally, I think he chose to get it back, not because Buffy needed it, but because it is HIS and he wanted it to help HIM in any future choices he might make in his life (unlife). I'm so glad that Buffy finally decided that the soul wasn't what allowed love, just the man! Great tale, great ending, great author! Thank you so much for sharing your talent.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2005 - 03:54 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen

No problem for me with that open end - because they are together. Soul or not soul - Spike was good without it - and loved Buffy before he had the soul. TNX for writing!

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2005 - 07:33 am Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen

Love the way you left it open. It really works to get your point across that she truly loves whether he has the soul or not. Thanks for sharing your story. Of all the post-Season 7 fics I've read thus far, I've enjoyed this one the most.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2005 - 07:02 am Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen

Briliant. Super story with great characterisation and that all important issue of trust. Loved the ending - you were so right to do it that way. Looking forward to more from your pen soon. Yeah, I'm one of them lurkers! LOL. Many thanks.

Reviewer: MG Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2005 - 05:38 am Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen

Great story, lovely ending.

Reviewer: missy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2005 - 11:48 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen

awesome ending. i really like how u didnt tell us what he chose. really glad that buffy could tell spike how she felt. awesome job. loved it.

Reviewer: Pam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2005 - 11:13 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen

All that is important is that she accepted him...with or without. I agree with your ending.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2005 - 10:39 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen

i loved this story !

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2005 - 09:30 pm Title: Part Twelve

Sorry to see in which direction the story is heading.. a not so happy chapter. Sad.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2005 - 09:24 pm Title: Part Eleven

And Angel is still trying to break Spike and Buffy apart..

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2005 - 12:33 am Title: Part Twelve

Excellent chapter. "This is me, and I’m sick of apologizing for it..." Perfect line. Anxious to see where they go from here.

Reviewer: Lynda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2005 - 10:20 pm Title: Part Twelve

I just love this story so much. I could not stop reading. I hope you will update soon. I cannot wait to finally see Buffy accepting Spike as is. Because lets face it, he has changed. Great wonderful story.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2005 - 05:44 pm Title: Part Twelve

Phew, it looks like Spike took Dawn's advice and grew some balls. Excellent job with his "I'm sick of apologizing..." speech, it hit all the right notes. I'm also really enjoying Dawn being the voice of reason. I'm looking forward to Buffy's next conversations with Spike and Xander, they'll be entertaining!

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2005 - 05:43 pm Title: Part Twelve

Buffy ... Buffy ... Buffy ... Let me count the ways I want to slap you upside the head. No wait ... it would take to long to count. {chuckles} Good writing, and I hope that Buffy wises up real soon. She is always so stupidly blind. Xander is going to be right on the stake him bandwagon probably, and unless Giles has wisened up he probably will be too. {Sighs} I hope things start to turn around for the better. Look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Ariel Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2005 - 03:36 pm Title: Part Twelve

Ahhhh! she has to to go after him, stupid Buffy! Great chapter! Update soon!

Reviewer: alexandrea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2005 - 10:46 pm Title: Part Eleven

I HATE angel and i hope buffy kicks his silly ass no a matter of fact i hope she kills him this. chapter was really good i cant wait for the next one

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2005 - 05:56 am Title: Part Eleven

Excellent chapter. I knew Spike wouldn't leave. This is probably gonna piss a few people off but I'm saying it within the context of this story, not about the character of Angel in general: He doesn't deserve the soul that he was cursed with. Not when he can call into question Spike's behavior without a chip or a soul when he hasn't been around Spike in the pst few years. Angel needs to get over the fact that just because he was an evil, unloving asshole without a soul that Spike is one as well. Also, I'm thinking he has an ulterior motive for trying to get Spike out of the picture. I'm not buying the "it's best for Buffy is you leave" thing. Okay, that's my two cents. LOL! Now that I've written a small novel for a review, I'll be going. Mark of excellent writing that you got me thinking about the situation outside of the words on the page. Job well done!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2005 - 02:48 am Title: Part Eleven

i have never wanted to stake angel as much as i wanted to in this chapter. i hope buffy finds spike and i hope that she doesn't stop believing in him. angel is just jealous. great job. keep up the great work.

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