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Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2005 - 02:00 am Title: Part Eleven

I hate Angel. At least (this time) Spike killed the demons and freed the humans. That's gotta be worth something (at least it will be to Buffy if she finds out). More soon please.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 10:07 pm Title: Part Eleven

The line "Buffy deserved better than what he could offer, but that didn't mean Spike was going to stop offering what little he had. It wasn't the size of the sacrifice that mattered..." beautifully encapsulated both Spike's insecurity and his tenacity. Thank you for making it clear that Spike recognizes Angel's mind games and is standing firmly at Buffy's side. This chapter spelled out Spike's motivation and determination clearly. It seems that Angel can't get over that he and Spike are nothing alike.

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 08:15 pm Title: Part Eleven

come on , kick some angel ass. i love this story so far please update really quickly LOVE IT!!!!!!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2005 - 08:47 pm Title: Part Ten

I would call this Angel a Bastard. He knows very well what he does; he's trying to separate Buffy and Spike. And just now it seems as if it could work.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2005 - 01:16 pm Title: Part Ten

That Angel is truely is a wanker! Yay, Buffy and Spike - more chapters with their goodness in and, not wanting to sound too vicious but, a large dollop of pain for Angel wouldn't have me weeping into me 'anky! Love this fic and always want more - gosh you're good! Thanks Sue & The Gyp

Reviewer: melissa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 09:29 pm Title: Part Ten

stupid angel. i really hope spike isnt stupid enough to listen to him. good chapter tho. cant wait for more.

Reviewer: 1461283551 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 11:58 am Title: Part Ten

Great chapter. Excellent writing. I can tell by how much I want Angel to have bodily harm inflicted upon his person. Please tell me that Spike gets to kick Angel's ass before this is all over. 'Cause if he doesn't, I think if we all gang up on him, we just might be able to take him.

Reviewer: 1884787013 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 05:57 am Title: Part Ten

oh my!! please someone shoot angel for me?? like that 's going to get rid of him... god he is good playing at mind games...well you are, really, you being the writer and all... it was really good...i'm liking this more and more...please don't let spike listen to any word angel said!!! i'm trusting you ;) hope you update soon thanx Mariana

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 07:55 pm Title: Part Ten

Oh, Angel is devious. I hope that little speech gets back to Buffy. Angel wants Spike to leave her for her own good? That's worked really well in Buffy's past. This is excellent.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 07:44 pm Title: Part Ten

really good chapter but for the record i hate angel witha a passion. just because he screwed up his relationship with buffy doesn't mean that spike will. i hate when he does stupid crap like that. all in all though it was a really great chapter and can't wait to see whats happending next.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 07:44 pm Title: Part Nine

The confrontation between Buffy and Angel was really well written, and I loved the line "The other day you said he wsa in your heart, not your pants." Buffy's speech defending Spike was an excellent platform to let the soul information slip. I like the tension between Spike and Buffy, too. Spike with balls is a lot of fun to read.

Reviewer: SpuffyLovingJess Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 07:15 pm Title: Part Ten

Awesome story! Can't wait to read more ! :)

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 12:57 pm Title: Part Nine

I'm glad the "end" thing was a joke.
In Buffy's case - I wouldn't have give in to Angel. He has no rights over her by now. I'm looking forward to see this story continued.

Reviewer: songgal1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2005 - 05:49 am Title: Part Nine

why if you're doing the au or off canon thing don't you have Cordy there as well. In ATS she would be in a coma by now; but you could use her as a buffer between angel and spike plus some cordy/buffy angst about angel is always of the good.

Reviewer: melissa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2005 - 05:28 am Title: Part Nine

love this story. i wasnt sure if i was gonna read it or not n then i decided to n im really glad i did. great job. u really scared me with the "the end" lol. loves it.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2005 - 01:13 am Title: Part Nine

Great chpter. Keeping an eye out for that sneaky Angel. I agree with Spike. ANgel is such a sore loser when it comes to Spike.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 11:39 pm Title: Part Nine

that was a great chapter. angel however could of been a little less of a jerk but oh well he'll get over it. i have a feeling as to whats to come at least i think i do anyways. can't wait to see how this is going to turn out. keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2005 - 05:58 pm Title: Part Eight

i think you have several of the funniest lines i could have ever seen in a fic before...and the more...they could have perfectly fit the series mood...you're doing a fantastic job...keep it up thanx...hope you update soon

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2005 - 08:43 am Title: Part Eight

Another wonderful chapter. I really love all the characters in this one...and that's saying something. I usually find Dawn and Xander irritating, but I find myself actually enjoying them in this story. Looking forward to Part Nine.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2005 - 09:04 pm Title: Part Eight

spike should get his soul back because he wants to not becuse it will make buffy feel safter. as for Dawn and Spike i hope they can become friends again because i really wish that had been resolved during season seven i would love to see them as they were before. can't wait to see angel's reaction update soon please.

Reviewer: songgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2005 - 12:34 am Title: Part Eight

I think you did fine with Giles...good job over all!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2005 - 10:51 pm Title: Part Eight

Loved the Car - part and the Bet, too
:-D

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2005 - 10:21 pm Title: Part Eight

I know Spike really did a bad thing but he went to get his soul back for Buffy. Giles and Dawn should just give him a break. He's earned it. Keep up the great work. loved it.

Reviewer: anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2005 - 08:55 pm Title: Part Eight

very good fic so far =) wold love to read more ;)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2005 - 07:51 pm Title: Part Eight

This story is smart and entertaining. The dialogue and characterizations are excellent and I love the premise. Giles may be cautious and overly critical of Buffy's choices, but he is acting in character. Dawn is very well written, whiny and pouty and manipulative. I enjoyed her interaction with Spike in the diner, especially the way she and Spike played Buffy for the extra ten bucks - Evil! Spike and Buffy are well realized, too. I can't wait for them to check in with Angel - the Wolfram and Hart situation will be a shock.

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