Date: 08/21/2005 - 11:15 pm Title: ch 24
HI, I JUST READ YOUR STORY THE PROTECTORS AWESOME LOVED JUST LIKE YOUR STORY DOMESTIC SHADOWS,I AM HOPING YOU WILL BE ABLE TO UPDATE SOON ,NICE LONG CHAPTERS.IN THE MEANTIME I WILL READ SOME OF YOUR OTHER STORIES JUST FOUND YOUR SITE ,..THANK YOU AGAIN FOR SOME GREAT READ HOPE TO READ MORE ON THE OTHER TWO STORY SOON....MAGGIE
Date: 07/30/2005 - 09:31 pm Title: ch 24
Great chapter. I am glad that Buffy and Spike are mated. Good ending for this chapter. Please update soon. Since this story is following canon, somewhat, I am assuming that Buffy is going to die. Will Spike through the claim find out when Buffy is brought back?
Date: 07/30/2005 - 05:18 pm Title: ch 24
I love this fic! I'm so glad that you've kept us in suspense about whether or not the end is going to be like the series. *crosses fingers* I'm still pulling for a happy ending!
Date: 07/30/2005 - 02:45 am Title: ch 24
Wow! This was an excellent chapter. Just wow. Loved it to pieces. Can't wait for more.
Date: 07/29/2005 - 09:28 pm Title: ch 24
Great chapter. I hope everything works out for our fav couple! Can't wait to read more.
Date: 07/29/2005 - 06:34 pm Title: ch 24
YAY! Bitey claims always of the good!
Date: 07/29/2005 - 02:54 pm Title: ch 24
Update! :) I think Tara did know where Glory was - she would have found their way without consciousness. Awe - Buffy did want to be mated to Spike! Know lets just hope that it won't end like in the series! Neither Buffy nor Spike being killed.
Date: 07/29/2005 - 02:20 pm Title: ch 24
Looks like there's a daughter to save, a god to kill (or a human man), and a claimy-love affair to get to. Can't wait for more. great update, so glad Buff is fighting back. more please.
Date: 07/29/2005 - 05:35 am Title: ch 24
loved it!! just loved it!! i'm just crossing my fingers right now so it doesn't end quite like the series...thanx so much!! hope you update soon ;)
Date: 07/29/2005 - 05:32 am Title: ch 24
a totally great hapter!!! cant wait to see whats gonna happen next...
Date: 07/29/2005 - 04:49 am Title: ch 24
I'm on the edge of my seat! can't wait to see what happens!
Date: 07/29/2005 - 04:39 am Title: ch 24
Please update really soon, it is so great
Date: 07/29/2005 - 04:24 am Title: ch 24
"He couldn’t pretend and he knew Buffy couldn’t either."--It's so sad, to know the world may be falling down outside, and that their little girl may fall down with it... and that the odds of both of them surviving the coming battle...It was a wonderful chapter. Please, update soon!
Date: 07/29/2005 - 03:00 am Title: ch 24
hope this ends better than the show did. i don't think i can handle buffy dying but if that's what must be done...I'm with ya and i'll just have to have faith in the spuffyness. great job. can't wait for mroe. keep up the great work. please post soon.
Date: 07/29/2005 - 02:08 am Title: ch 24
This is a very powerful chapter. Very well written.
Date: 07/29/2005 - 02:06 am Title: ch 24
OK.. .I'm gonna nit-pick slightly because of the post-child birth grinding. Not very realisitic unless you"re built up a slayers healing excuse ahead of time you could even let her have an orgasm since they are very closely related to uterine contractions but grinding isn"t very possible I had 2 very easy childbirths more so than anyone else I knew and I couldnt have done the grinding> Other than that great as usual.
Author's Response: I know I was pushing it there. But I wanted to do it so bad. I really wanted a full-blown love scene actually but knew I couldn't. So I went with the grinding, and yes I know right after giving birth, but she IS THE SLAYER afterall so I went with it.
Date: 07/29/2005 - 02:03 am Title: ch 24
Love it, I hope no one dies and everyone has a happily ever after. Lol!! ~Ashley~