Date: 01/18/2005 - 01:15 am Title: Chapter 9: One day in Peru
Grrr, mean person. shouldna have left it there
Date: 01/16/2005 - 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 9: One day in Peru
great! very exciting
Date: 01/16/2005 - 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 8: Blood and phone calls
Your plot is intriguing and this is a good story. It could be a fantastic story; however, you need a beta that knows the difference between your and you're, to and too, who's and whose (etc...I could go on and on). These little grammatical errors detract somewhat from the story. So, please get a beta.
Author's Response: My beta Eternal and I work on these stories very early in the morning. We shot the story back and forth updating it with each revision and sometimes we slip up. Sorry about that, our main goal to to have a quality story and there is no excuse for those errors. We both promise to be more diligent in the future :)
Date: 01/16/2005 - 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 9: One day in Peru
Bloody hell you can't leave it there. Great gnashing of teeth in frustration. update soon please.
Date: 01/16/2005 - 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 9: One day in Peru
This just keeps getting better. i love how the plot just gets even more better than before. i can't wait to find out what happends next. please update soon.
Date: 01/16/2005 - 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 9: One day in Peru
The plot continues to get better and better. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 01/16/2005 - 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 9: One day in Peru
wow great chapter im so excited to see wat happems next. i cant wait please update soon its really startin to get good and i want to read more thanx
Date: 01/16/2005 - 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 9: One day in Peru
Wow. Another great chater. Love the way this is roceeding. Please continue to ukpdate soon and often.
Date: 01/16/2005 - 01:43 am Title: Chapter 8: Blood and phone calls
You going at a nice pace, things are going pretty slick. I got a vamp movie for ya 'The Addiction' its vamps trying to live a normal life resulting with the amazing blood orgy at the granduation party, very Buffy like.
Author's Response: Ohhh one I haven't seen...must run and check it out now :) Another good one is Vlad or possibly Dracula with the same guy as Dracula in BTVS. It's more about the man that was Vlad and it's really neat.!
Date: 01/15/2005 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 7: Sweet Seduction
Loved the thing with the painting too (The story in the story.). And thanks for reminding me how to get to the poll :-D
I was a good written chapter - really awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks...I'm touched by how many people are into this story :) It makes me smile and act all chirpy :)
Date: 01/15/2005 - 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 8: Blood and phone calls
Aha is this something she did in a previous life maybe as the slayer.
Date: 01/15/2005 - 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 8: Blood and phone calls
i really like this story its really good and its getting really interesting please update soon thanx i cant wait to know more pleae make it soon thanx
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad your liking it so far :)
Date: 01/15/2005 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 8: Blood and phone calls
i found this chapter very humorous. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for updating the story with two chapters. Its rare but appreciated. This story is getting better and better. I can't wait to find out what Buffy did that causing the new danger. Look forward to the next update or two :)...lol
Author's Response: I was really in a laughing mood, just a bit of funny before the big bad revelation :)
Date: 01/15/2005 - 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 7: Sweet Seduction
I f***king loved it...no pun intended because I'm sure they both did. This was powerful chapter especially about the painting connecting them. This was a great way start the journey of their love. You've only confirmed why I voted for this story on the weekly poll. You deserve more nominations.
Author's Response: Aww, now I'm all blushy and stammering :) I figured it was about time to revel the dark insidious plot and I thought hey...this story really needs a touch a Dru and ta da, the painting was concieved :)
Date: 01/12/2005 - 05:04 am Title: CHAPTER 6: Desire Sated
is he going to really claim her though? or just bitey goodness!
Author's Response: Just a bit of bitey goodness...more of branding her as his which ticks off another vamp later in the series...but then again...maybe that doesn't happen...forget I said that :)
Date: 01/12/2005 - 02:18 am Title: CHAPTER 6: Desire Sated
HOT DAMN! That was, well, HOT! I bow to your awesome writing skills!!
So Xander's got a girlfriend huh? Is it someone new??? When are we gonna find out... not the next chap i hope. PLEASE reserve that one for Spuffy!!!! But I do wanna know eventually!!
As promised.. *bows*
Author's Response: Don't bow...you can't read on your knees :) I am not worthy of your praise my writing skills are mediocre at best but I got a bit of shine every once in awhile...Next chappy...all about the Spuffylove :)
Date: 01/12/2005 - 01:54 am Title: CHAPTER 6: Desire Sated
now that was hot great writing. i really like this story and cant wait to read more please update soon.
Author's Response: Wow...thanks so much :)