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Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2006 - 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 19: 'The Question is.....?'

Hate to say this but damn even I could come up with reasonable doubt in this case. The only thing they have is that Amy was placed at the scene of the crime close to the time of the death of the victims. I know that the American justice system is ficle but damn even a half assed lawyer would be able to blow Angels case out of the water. You really need to punch up the evidence part of the story to make it belivable. I'm having fun reading the love part between Spike and Buffy but I find myself giggling at the whole crime thing, feels more like the cops in sunnydale just arrests the person closest to the crime scene when there is a murder and then charge them with it.

Maybe there is evidence and you just haven't bothered to mention it but still if you make some sort of suspense/thriller/cop drama all those things are really important to make it belivable.

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 05:05 am Title: Chapter 19: 'The Question is.....?'

I was kind of surprised when Buffy didn't push the subject of finding out about the money or the will, considering everything she's done or tried to do for Amy, but I know there's a reason behind it, so I'll just have to wait impatiently for the resolution :-)

Author's Response: Yes, it pans out later in the fiction. Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2005 - 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 19: 'The Question is.....?'

Mmh? Maybe there's more behind the stuff Spike inherited.... TNX for the update!

Author's Response: Spoiler; Yes, there is more involved with what Holden left Spike. Spike and Buffy just have to figure it out! thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2005 - 05:27 am Title: Chapter 19: 'The Question is.....?'

Great chapter! I love how you're working things into the story and adding in details and everything- it's perfect:) And kudos on the Harley-Davidson...my dad works for them and I'm from Milwaukee (Harley City LOL) so that made me grin!

Author's Response: Thanks...I love Harley's too! My own 'Spike' owns one and I'm the chic on the back!!!! Okay, seriously, the Harley Davidson will play into Spuffy later. Promise. Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Author's Response: Oh, on that note...my 13 year old claims that she knows for certain that James owns a Harley. (my 13 year old seems to have an inside track on alot of the cast from BTVS/ATS???)I know Freddie Prinz Jr. does, he rides every year in the Bikers Charity Ride up to Castaic Lake by the 5 Freeway in So Cal. Jay Leno hosts the event, usually, the ride is one of those charity's where you pledge money for the amount of miles each biker rides. It's a big even in So Cal. Starts in, I believe Century City, or Hollywood, then everyone rides up to Castaic for a Bar-b-que and to listen to music. Rock bands, country bands and jazz bands play all day. It's a children's charity and draws about 20,000 to 30,000 bikers a year! Wonderful, wonderful people bikers! Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: pj Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2005 - 03:21 am Title: Chapter 19: 'The Question is.....?'

now you have me super curious about why Holden left it to her...at first, I thought it might be because he knew Spike would go for Buffy, but then Spike didn't even know Buffy before...lol i must be confused...I'll just have to wait and see! Or go read over some chapters after I'm done with my midterms ;)

Author's Response: A hint, Holden feels guilty about Buffy, terribly guilty. Turns out old Hold was somewhat of a human being after all! There's more twists a commin', so, hold on. Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2005 - 01:38 am Title: Chapter 19: 'The Question is.....?'

Hmmmmm..... where will this go?

Author's Response: On forever if I don't start updating faster!!!LOL Okay, it's going somewhere, promise. Thanks, Luv, Spuf

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