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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2012 - 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 3: 'Don't Ever Go Away From Me'

Ok, I'm having trouble with this. I understand that Buffy can love him and be righteously pissed about his attitude, but, since she's sensible enough to get pissed about it, why would she even ASK PERMISSION to have a life? She should be pissed at the thought of even asking if it's OK.

A note: it sounds like you are using "liberal arts degree" as if it's a degree in the arts... it's not; my Political Science degree is a liberal arts degree. See htp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Liberal_arts for more info.

And there are plenty of spelling/grammar errors that are jarring as I read; I've been trying to ignore them, but the last part of this chapter is especially bad (should be: "precautions," "prescription," and "prophylactics," for examples).

And having the doc be "Alexis Denisof" seems kinda creepy, like it's the actual actor guy, not a character.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2007 - 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 3: 'Don't Ever Go Away From Me'

Oh so no job but a college course almost just as good. I wonder what she will do if she does become pregnant

Reviewer: Natalie Brownell Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2006 - 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 3: 'Don't Ever Go Away From Me'

How cruel is spike its against the law i hope she leaves him hes a control freak you needs to learn a lesson

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2005 - 03:58 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Don't Ever Go Away From Me'

I like it, I don't know why but I like Spike as an asshole you know? I mean not a big one but like this, it adds a little spice and drama to the whole thing. Make sure that Buffy doens't forgive too much, too soon though, I know she loves him but she shouldn't just be okay with everything he does. Great story I want more.

Author's Response: Thank you. This is far from over I'm afraid. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: katj Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2005 - 06:31 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Don't Ever Go Away From Me'

Oooh, this is so good so far! Please update soon! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Actually, like I responded above, this story is finished (about 35 chapters). I will be submitting the remaining chapters on a daily basis, if time permits. thanks agian, Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Elanor Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2005 - 06:25 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Don't Ever Go Away From Me'

LOVE this story! (I don't whether I hate or love Buffy and Will, though! :) lol) Can't wait to see what happens, I hope not TOO much angst! (But then again, how couldn't there be! :) )

Author's Response: They're a pair, aren't they? Tee Hee. There's angst, but again, I'm Spuffy through and through, promise! thanks again, Luv, spuf

Reviewer: PsychoPromQueen7 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2005 - 04:14 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Don't Ever Go Away From Me'

hey, just wanted to say I LOVE your fic! keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: songgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2005 - 04:03 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Don't Ever Go Away From Me'

if she loves him so much what is the problem and she wouldn't just be his mistress!

Author's Response: Thank you for keeping with this fiction. When I got to this chapter on another site, I lost alot of readers and angered some others. I love Spike, I love Buffy...I loooovve Spuffy! I'll assure you, Buffy loves Spike in this (well she loves William eternally) she's afraid of his 'other' side. Please stick with it, let's see how it turns out? Thanks again, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2005 - 03:31 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Don't Ever Go Away From Me'

I REALLY LOVE THE STORY. I'M NOT A BIG FAN OF HOW SPIKE LIKES TO CONTROL BUFFY BUT HE MEANS WELL. I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE. KEEP IT UP.

Author's Response: Actually, this story is all written and complete. It's about 35 chapters long. The thing about this fiction, is Spike is very, very controlling, so sometimes he's not really likable. Thank you, Luv, Spuf

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