Reviews For 'Rebel Hearts'
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2013 - 07:59 am Title: Chapter 2: 'Visions and Ghost'
Date: 11/18/2013 - 07:59 am Title: Chapter 2: 'Visions and Ghost'
I like the story so far, but there are some things a good editor could fix for you. One problemin this chapter is your use of the word "peckish." You've used it to mean "annoyed," I think, but to, my knowledge, it's only ever used to mean "hungry."
Reviewer: Brat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2005 - 01:06 am Title: Chapter 2: 'Visions and Ghost'
Date: 01/21/2005 - 01:06 am Title: Chapter 2: 'Visions and Ghost'
Wow. That was...wow. Spike is so intense. I LOVE IT! lol. I cannot wait to see them meet up again! So I am off to the next chapter...
I think some of the speech might be a bit modern for the time period..other than that, I think you're doing a great job.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm debating on whether or not to continue posting this here. It might not be everyone's cup of tea?
Thanks again,
Luv, Spuf