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Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 10:44 am Title: Chapter 19

Magically aided acceptance and bliss, even if its nothing more than a magical place to be blissful in. That seems to make this all work to me. I've been looking for a reason that the three of them can be ok together. This all seemsto work now.

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 09:02 am Title: Chapter 19

Again another wonderful chapter, LOVE IT!!!! Please continue!

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2005 - 10:42 am Title: Chapter 18

I love this new twist.

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2005 - 09:40 am Title: Chapter 18

OH WOW!!!! IT gets better and better!!! LOVE the familial claim. And the part where Xnader just charged through the back door.CAnt wait for more!

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2005 - 03:38 am Title: Chapter 17

WOW! unexpected, sweet, beautiful and HOW THE HELL are you going to pull this off? Great chapter.

Author's Response: well i have a plan so hopefull things will all fall into place as we move through the story. Just rememberr there is a reason for EVERYTHING

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2005 - 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 16

Ouch! One Redwulfs trough Spikes chest, one through his back – that should have hurt. … The Penny from Bo was funny – and a good way to start the talking. And oh – can it be that Hoston is Giles Granddad? Well, we’ll see.

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2005 - 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 16

I really like what the difference in time does for the story. It makes me feel better about Anya and Giles. I also like that Samuel lived a human life. As criticism, I would say that the crescent birthmark on Samuel's hip should have been somewhere else - unless the location is somehow significant in the story. Why would a great(grand) nephew know about a birthmark under this man's clothes? But that is a small detail. Great chapter. I really like the flow of this story.

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2005 - 10:38 am Title: Chapter 16

WOW another wonderful chapter!!! LOVE IT!! keep up the good work! cant wait for more!!!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 15

Ah yes – Hoston – Rebecca’s watcher. Training in Midian is a nice trick: The slayer would never be gone for long – and had time enough to train.
Isabo being a vampire was a good trick. I liked that Spike has a gem of amara now. :-D And to be honest – if I didn’t know that the Spuffyness will come (maybe) I maybe wouldn’t dare do read that fic. I can be a coward sometimes *smile* but I’ll try to be a fighter.

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 11:54 am Title: Chapter 15

Another cool chapter. I really like Rebecca, but I want the story to move forward. I feel conflicted. Hmmmm....

Author's Response: I know what you mean Franchesca, I found though that the story wants to write itself most of the time and I'm just along for the ride

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2005 - 07:48 am Title: Chapter 15

Love the part of the Amaran Ge, the story is getting better and better as the chapters go by!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2005 - 02:52 am Title: Chapter 14

The tickling part was absolutely hilarious! And who is Hoston? Darn ....Please update soon the suspense is killing me...

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2005 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter 14

loved it!! please post soon

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2005 - 01:12 am Title: Chapter 13

that was very big of buffy but please PLEASE let them be together soon. maybe this was buffy's punishment for what she had done to spike. i think she's learned her lesson. keep up the great work.

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2005 - 01:07 am Title: Chapter 14

Still here. Amazing.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 14

Told you about the tickling before :-D My internet got wonky when I waited for the review to open so I read ch. 15 too *Big Smile*
Coming to think - it's good that R. Hoston is there - he know the old ways too - what the younger have forgotten.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 14

Told you about the tickling before :-D My internet got wonky when I waited for the review to open so I read ch. 15 too *Big Smile*
Coming to think - it's good that R. Hoston is there - he know the old ways too - what the younger have forgotten.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 13

PS: I just friended you (LJ)

Author's Response: Ohhh New friend *runs to check LJ*

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 13

That's beautiful sad... I don't think I could be that what Buffy does.
BTW- I love ticklish Spike *sniff* Reading on help. A bit.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 12

Don't tell - but I kinda read the last chapter (22? 21?) and know about the non/or not so non-Spuffyness.

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 13

Ans enchanted forest.... WOW love they way you describe them... Fells likeas if im there... and i love the conversation that SPike and Buffy had at the end of the chapter. waitin gfor more.

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 03:30 am Title: Chapter 13

Although it's very nice and sweet, it's hard for me to buy Buffy being quite that nice about all of this. It's a good story and I'll be here until the end, but it's going to take me a while to get used to Buffy being THAT wonderfully understanding.

Reviewer: Raspy_luv Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 02:07 am Title: Chapter 13

This made me cry.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2005 - 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 11

This story is good - but it's still hard to read for me with this first chapters - Spike being only with Rebecca, and not with Buffy. Sorry - I can only thing how hard it must be for her - it's if you're living with your ex and his girlfriend in the same house. That's what it is. So I'm looking forward to the other chapters

Author's Response: Sorry to say I'm not a fan of making things easy for Buffy...gotta make the girl wait for her man. But just to put your mind at ease, and if you don't like spoliers close your eyes now... there will be Spuffyness EVENTUALLY and lots of it.

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2005 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 11

I know Buffy deserves it but it hurts to see spike with someone else. PLEASE MAKE THEM MAKE UP SOON!!!! THEY BELONG TOGETHER!!!!!!!!!!!!

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