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Reviewer: Jamie C Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2005 - 12:22 am Title: Chapter 15: 'Liuth Doruinn' (More Pain/Torment)

really good chapter! i think they way u made spike was a really good way. he should stay like that for a while.

Author's Response: Thank you. Spike is a paradox, always was. He's hurt, his pride is shattered. However, he loves Buffy and that will help them. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 15: 'Liuth Doruinn' (More Pain/Torment)

i had a feeling that he was going to be upset bud i didnt think that he was going to force into it

Author's Response: Upset would be an understatement. He and Buffy have a lot to forgive each other for now. Thanks, luv, Spuf

Reviewer: melissa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 15: 'Liuth Doruinn' (More Pain/Torment)

wow mean words. great chapter though. cant wait for the next to see what happens between buffy n spike.

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought the words were pretty bad too. The next chapter is up. Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: bex makes u fly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 15: 'Liuth Doruinn' (More Pain/Torment)

TAME!! if that was tame id like to see what would be worse!! did like the progression af the chapter and sooo hating william right now!! bastard!! brilliantly delt with the seriousness of the situation and love the way you put so much emotion in to the charecters!! ur evil for ending it there lol! hope u do another chapter soon!!

Author's Response: Spike is a mess, emotionally right now. Buffy isn't in much better condition. It's going to take an act of desperation on Buffy's part to really bring on the catalyst needed for these two to reconcile. Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 04:50 am Title: Chapter 15: 'Liuth Doruinn' (More Pain/Torment)

Definitely not too bad, but I wish it would have been longer (even though it was really long, but I'm being greedy LOL). Spike's going to have a lot of redemption for that little stunt. Even if he was drunk- Buffy lied by omission, but he obviously knew what he was doing, since he pushed 'the poet' away and let Spike take over. Please, please, please update really soon!

Author's Response: I was going to make it worse, alot worse, but changed my mind. Too much angst can make my head hurt? Actually, there's something else Buffy has been keeping from Spike, and I was going to bring that into the mix of the rape, but changed my mind. Thanks, luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 04:10 am Title: Chapter 15: 'Liuth Doruinn' (More Pain/Torment)

I'm glad you gave us the tamer version. I'm not crazy about rape in fanfic, especially the idea of Spike raping Buffy. So even though I see that is is neessary for your plot, I'm glad you made it short and not terribly graphic.

Author's Response: I know, I'm not a fan either, but I felt this was the only way to reveal exactly how 'enraged' Spike was. He was wrong, of course, to do this, but I needed something really awful for hiim to have to be forgiven for. Thanks, Luv, Spuf

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