Reviews For Tour-bus Turmoil
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Reviewer: Jason P Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2005 - 08:46 pm Title: Tempted By The Devil

Beautiful

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2005 - 03:23 am Title: Tempted By The Devil

loved this chapter cant wait for it to be continued

Reviewer: pj Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2005 - 12:12 am Title: Tempted By The Devil

I truly am dreading the sex scene I have to write, so I completely understand. I think it would have been better to have another chapter before this one to transition into this sudden spuffy, but I didn't think your sex scene sucked :) Hopefully, you feel better!!

Author's Response: hey! i originally had another chapter before this one, but it really seemed like filler, so i decided to omit it. and actually, when thinking about the future chapters, the suddeness of them hooking up is crucial LOL and good luck with your scene!

Reviewer: BINT Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2005 - 11:43 pm Title: Tempted By The Devil

OMG YOU STOP THERE NOOOO YOU HAVE TO HAVE MORE NOWWWW I L-O-V-E IT SOOOOOO SOOOOO SOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2005 - 11:09 pm Title: Tempted By The Devil

I'll e-mail later- running late. Great chapter- loved the fountain show and how sweet Spike is being, setting everything up for her. Loved their interaction- talk to you soon!

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