Reviews For Tour-bus Turmoil
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Reviewer: Jason P Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2005 - 08:49 pm Title: Game Over

Typical... gets her, then loses her.

Reviewer: Kar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2005 - 05:56 pm Title: Game Over

Oh no! Spike really bollocks it up, didn't he? Just started to read last night. Great story, very entertaining.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2005 - 01:20 am Title: Game Over

I would have hauled off and decked him a la Slayer Buffy with that line. His ass would have been on the ground.

Reviewer: BINT Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2005 - 12:19 am Title: Game Over

MORE NOW PLEASE I L-O-V-E IT !!!!

Reviewer: pj Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2005 - 10:56 pm Title: Game Over

i love this chapter! lol. totally worth the sudden spuffy to have the angst come back :) i think the other readers might hit me though...*looks behind me* lol. yay, please write more when you get better! oh and Spike ended up thinking he messed up, but I still think Buffy is being the inconsiderate one...she did say she regretted it first! somehow her tears always make us forgive her :(

Reviewer: Jennice Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2005 - 10:35 pm Title: Game Over

I think it was a good choice to skip the details of the night of sex since you are uncomfortable writing elaborate sex scenes. A cut to the morning after always adds more anyway. You don't always need to know the gritty details. The angst should be interesting as the two of them continue their tour. It wouldn't be much of a story if they were happy ever after the minute they decided to like each other. Hmm wonder what Spike is going to do on their next tour stop. ::;grin:::

Author's Response: thank you for your review! i definitely agree that the story wouldn't have as much of a kick if they continued on their merry way together, happily ever after

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2005 - 10:09 pm Title: Game Over

*pouts* Couldn't you have given them a little time before everything went wrong again? *sigh* It was a good chapter though. Please update soon.

Author's Response: don't worry- i believe in happy endings, so things will get better sooner or later:)

Reviewer: Alicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2005 - 10:00 pm Title: Game Over

Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one :)

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2005 - 09:14 pm Title: Game Over

please tell me that they will try to talk things out and work on their relationship and not throw it away

Author's Response: no need to worry, dear- things may not be looking good for them right now, but i plan on improving things fairly soon

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2005 - 07:28 pm Title: Game Over

i love the story..... i cant get enough of it! -waiting for more!!

Reviewer: shippy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2005 - 07:27 pm Title: Game Over

More angst to come you promise, that's not really a selling point for me sorry. Sorry too to see Spike behaving like a jerk.

Author's Response: as much as i love writing angst, the rest of the story won't be filled with it. yes, some chapters will have it (be it a lot or a little), but i'm fairly certain things are really going to pick up for buffy and spike

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