Reviews For Tour-bus Turmoil
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Reviewer: fallen_angel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2005 - 09:19 am Title: Do Your Homework

the only problem i have so far with this story is the name you gave Angel. O'Conner is such a stereotypical and overused name when it comes to his character, it gets irritating to see it in ever stiry you read. It's so cliche and unoriginal now. As i said that's my only problem. On regards the rest of the story i think it has a good start, there is a good amount of detail and i think it has the potential to be really good. I look forward to more.

Author's Response: the only reason why I used O'Connor is because it's been my experience that people don't like seeing non-traditional names for characters, and the last few times I've seen someone not use O'Connor, or Connor, or something else similar, people have left them reviews like, "why did you give him that name? I don't like it"...i'm not much of a fan of Angel in general, and since he's not a big character really, i just gave him the usual last name i use and went with it. besides, it's kind of a thing I have with my best friend since her last name is O'Connor- lots of love to you, Katie! so, yeah, it may be trite and not creative at all, but i have my reasons

Reviewer: Jane Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2005 - 05:32 am Title: Four Guys, A Girl, and a Tour-bus

i can't wait til more! hope you update soon!

Reviewer: songgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2005 - 03:09 am Title: Four Guys, A Girl, and a Tour-bus

well isnt xander lucky? Thanks for intro'ing willow!

Reviewer: Alicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2005 - 10:15 pm Title: Four Guys, A Girl, and a Tour-bus

Great chapter! This is interesting....Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2005 - 09:40 pm Title: Four Guys, A Girl, and a Tour-bus

thanks for the update

Reviewer: Abbyland Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2005 - 09:36 pm Title: Four Guys, A Girl, and a Tour-bus

Really enjoying this fic. Sounds like it's going to be quite an adventure for Buffy. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: what girl wouldn't want to be on a tourbus with James Marsters?! LOL but since that's not going to happen (to me, at least), I'm choosing to live vicariously through Buffy in this fic:)

Reviewer: Christina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2005 - 09:04 pm Title: Four Guys, A Girl, and a Tour-bus

Aw, I love this! Hope Spike isn't that big of a man whore though, cuz that just gets gross. Can't wait to read more, this story is awesome

Author's Response: Spike won't be that bad in the story...he will of course have a groupie or two, but that won't be discussed much LOL it's just for the sake of more UST and having Buffy treat him bad some more :)

Reviewer: spike_love Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2005 - 08:47 pm Title: Four Guys, A Girl, and a Tour-bus

love it..can´t wait to see a little spuffy

Reviewer: Enchantress Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2005 - 08:11 am Title: What's A Band-Aid?

damn u for leaving it at that! i can't wait for chapter three :-) and make the spuffiness sooner than eventually!!

Author's Response: i'll see how fast i write in the Spuffyness...i know of a few scenes before that which I really want to write in first...but there will be Spuffyness undoubtedly, most likely on the bus LOL:)

Reviewer: Enchantress Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2005 - 08:08 am Title: Do Your Homework

great story so far :-)

Reviewer: songgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2005 - 04:31 am Title: What's A Band-Aid?

I feel sorry for the guys who don't have girlfriends/wives so I hope you will be intro'ing them soon!

Reviewer: aribelle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2005 - 01:36 am Title: What's A Band-Aid?

This looks like a great story. I love when authors take inspiration from a story and run with their own ideas

Reviewer: Alicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2005 - 10:04 pm Title: What's A Band-Aid?

Loved it! Well done :) Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2005 - 09:43 pm Title: What's A Band-Aid?

loved it

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2005 - 09:36 pm Title: What's A Band-Aid?

i can't wait to read the next chappie. please update and soon, i want to know what was happening!!!

Reviewer: spike_love Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2005 - 09:31 pm Title: What's A Band-Aid?

love it..keep it up

Reviewer: Essi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2005 - 04:45 pm Title: Do Your Homework

Oooops, chapter 2, sorry... stupid head thinking in Finnish

Reviewer: Essi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2005 - 04:44 pm Title: Do Your Homework

I definetly like the start. Starting with Buffy/Spike dislike is always fun to read, especially if there is lots of UST :) I hope you'll post two chapters, I'd love to read more soon.

Author's Response: thank you! i love building up the UST LOL

Reviewer: songgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2005 - 06:56 am Title: Do Your Homework

can't wait to see if you bring in any other females!

Author's Response: I promise that Willow is definitely going to come up, and maybe we'll have some guest appearances by Anya, Cordelia, and Drusilla...maybe

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2005 - 01:55 am Title: Do Your Homework

great looking so far

Reviewer: Alicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2005 - 08:38 pm Title: Do Your Homework

Great start! Interesting plot.....Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Reviewer: spike_love Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2005 - 08:35 pm Title: Do Your Homework

like the beginning..keep it up

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2005 - 08:35 pm Title: Do Your Homework

i love this story, i can't wait until they meet. please update and soon!!!i i can't wait!!!

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