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Reviewer: Caitie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2005 - 08:55 pm Title: Displaced

These last two chapters have been awesome! Sorry that I didn't get a chance to read chapter 14 before today... Anyways, in terms of what I hope hapens: Spike tells her that he wants her back & she forgives him (although not immediatly) Keep it up - I'm hoping for another update tonight, or tomorrow at the latest!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2005 - 05:51 am Title: Express Yourself

You're right that was very evil ending there. And I happen to like long chapters, very long chapters. I was wondering how you were going to get them to talk again without it being weird, but I think you did a great job of that. Update soon.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2005 - 04:14 am Title: Express Yourself

I'd probably come out with a smart ass remark for Buffy. Like..."Well, I guess being a 'rock star' explains the flaming asshole vibe you give off." Or, "So what's your excuse for being such a dick?" I'd think she'd be a bit offended by that remark! He was an ass to her, and I think that even if they were both shitty to each other, she doesn't have to take his lip without giving some back. Besides, it wouldn't be Spuffy without the snarkiness lol.

Reviewer: Kar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2005 - 01:48 am Title: Express Yourself

Gah!! You left us there? Naughty writer! Please more, I beg you

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2005 - 12:43 am Title: Express Yourself

Yay, Spike's back! I dunno, I kind of envisioned her trying to play it cool for a little while - acting like he didn't really affect her that much (but she'd give in, of course :) ) that's really the only suggestion I can think of - but I'm sure whatever you come up with will be great! So, great story and can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: BINT Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 10:20 pm Title: Express Yourself

MORE PLEASE I LOVE IT SO MUCH AND SPIKE IS BACK ITS SO CUTE MORE NOW!!!!!

Reviewer: Alicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 09:19 pm Title: Express Yourself

Aww what a cliffhanger!! Great chapter! Looking forward to the next update

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 09:00 pm Title: Express Yourself

I knew it! I KNEW IT!! Didn't I tell you I don't like cliffhangers, unless I'm the one writing them LOL! Just kidding!! Great chapter and I can't wait for the next update, because that was just mean :-)

Reviewer: pj Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 08:36 pm Title: Express Yourself

ahhhh what a cliffhanger! totally threw me off guard, good job ;) I think Buffy would logically be shocked that he's there, kinda angry and embarrassed that he was listening, and trying to pull away from the whole situation even if she does want to see him! cant wait :)

Reviewer: pj Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 08:28 am Title: The Long Way Home

awww wheres spike? lol I know I have to be patient. Thanks for updating, it helped me foul mood :(

Reviewer: BINT Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 01:33 am Title: The Long Way Home

MORE PLEASE AND HAPPY B-DAY TO ASHLEE!!!!!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2005 - 11:36 pm Title: The Long Way Home

happy birthday ashlee and thanks for this update

Reviewer: Caitie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2005 - 09:59 pm Title: The Long Way Home

I loved this story so far!!! It seems like it went by in the blink of an eye!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!

Reviewer: Alicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2005 - 09:05 pm Title: The Long Way Home

Great chapter! Well done! Looking forward to the next one :)

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2005 - 07:32 pm Title: The Long Way Home

You really are too sweet! And I loved the chapter! But that's not new, since I've loved every chapter :-) I can't wait to see how you're going to plan their next interaction!

Reviewer: Kar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2005 - 07:18 pm Title: The Long Way Home

If I scream more, will you get my drift? MOREEEEEEE!!!!!!! Great chapter. Hope Buffy goes after Spike and brings the friends together

Reviewer: pj Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2005 - 04:08 am Title: The Implosion

Ahhh! I wasn't expecting a band breakup or Buffy going home! I'm stuck in my own trap of wanting angst...I hate to be typical, but please update soooon!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2005 - 12:46 am Title: The Implosion

please dont let him quit

Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2005 - 12:23 am Title: Do Your Homework

Maybe I'm a dork, but I like you using "dissolving." I'ts what JM said about GotR. And I love this story, please update soon.

Author's Response: thank you for saying that! i purposely used that word because of JM and the demise of GOTR because hearing that he quit the band really bothered me

Reviewer: BINT Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2005 - 11:11 pm Title: The Implosion

OH WOW I SO DIDNT SEE THAT COMMING WOW ITS SOOOOO GOOD MORE PLEASE SOON!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Alicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2005 - 09:47 pm Title: The Implosion

Great chapter! Keep up thr good work :) Looking forward to the next update

Reviewer: allie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2005 - 08:26 pm Title: The Implosion

i'm loving your story please continue i'm looking forward to seeing where it goes

Reviewer: Essi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2005 - 08:17 pm Title: The Implosion

Wow, this turns really interesting. I like the way you write this. Give us little happiness and then turn it all into angst. And I really love your angst. You make me want to step into the fight and make them see what they are doing and saying wrong. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Kar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2005 - 08:11 pm Title: The Implosion

Still awaiting more, loved it. I think I was spoiled, reading a bunch of chapters at once. Now I want to know what happens next

Reviewer: Caroline Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2005 - 07:59 pm Title: The Implosion

OH! So good!! I totally love this story. Please update soon!!

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