Date: 11/19/2013 - 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 5: Part II
Story is cute so far, but needs a good beta. You have such a wonderful talent for storytelling and it would be so nice to read this with the syntax, and especially the word usage fixed; there are a number of words used incorrectly, the worst of these is using "then" (indicating time) instead of "than" (indicating a comparison).
Date: 06/30/2007 - 09:25 am Title: Chapter 5: Part II
yep really getting into the story.
Date: 02/02/2005 - 03:11 am Title: Chapter 5: Part II
loving it!!! damn....i can't ever guess who the robbers where...huh? anyhow...i'm just loving it...and how they both interact
thanx so much hope you update soon
Author's Response: They will be semi-revealed soon.
Spike has a few enemies in Cheyenne (not many though) and loving Buffy will put her in danger later in the fic.
Thanks,Luv, Spuf
Date: 02/01/2005 - 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 5: Part II
Ohhhh.... I love the flirting! This is so much fun. I just read this story up to date today, and I can't remember if I reviewed any of the other chapters. I can't wait to see where this story goes. So, is this one of your PG turns 18 or NC-17 or will it be a strictly PG story?
Author's Response: I'll respond on this review.
Actually, this story runs a little long and varies between PG/18 and a little NC-17, depending on your perspective.
This was a real labor of love for me as it sprinkles in certain aspects of my Mother's family history in it. The characters just seemed so perfect from BTVS/ATS for this one!
I am seriously thinking of beginning to submit the first Spuffy fanfic I ever wrote...
Buffy's Revenge Sunnydale Style
Now, this is definitely a major NC-17 rating fic, especially when Spike finally enters the picture.
The problem with this fiction is a I got some real 'slap' reviews at another site because Buffy is less then likable in this one, especially at the beginning.
Angel is a total creep...everyone, including Spike (at first) are pretty obnoxious. I was thinking of maybe submitting the Summary and first chapter, then seeing what readers thought?
Sorry this is so long.
In the other fiction (which I intended on submitting as soon as Rebel Hearts was finished) Buffy is betrayed by Angel (Fantasy/AU) and decides to stick it to him, literally, with other men. So, unfortuately, it means Buffy with other guys, however, temporary. I did keep the 'affairs' with the others (it was more the who the other guys were that bothered some readers) very non-graphic.
The only real graphic sex in this fiction is Spuffy sex, period. And, again, Spike is not a real stellar guy at the start either as he is holding something over Buffy's head and using it to get her into bed?
Anyway...I wonder if I should submit this here?
Thanks,
Luv, Spuf