Date: 08/04/2008 - 05:32 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
i know this is an older fic...a fic that i have read before but... "I know. But I'm a woman now." Perfection spelled differently, i swear. I just love that line.
Date: 06/20/2007 - 12:48 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
That last line is a classic. Perfect.
Date: 06/27/2006 - 02:15 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
"You told me once you'd always be my girl."
"I did. But I'm a woman now."
That is soooo true i could so of seen that happening in the show. If only it had of happened.....A girl can dream
Date: 01/23/2006 - 03:21 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
Only one left? damn. I just want this story to keep going. . . .
Date: 12/04/2005 - 12:32 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
"I did. But I'm a woman now."
Wow, probably best line in any fic I've ever read!
Date: 10/07/2005 - 01:16 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
I think that this story is very well textured and well-rounded. This has become one of my favorite stories.
Date: 10/06/2005 - 02:55 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Loved the im woman now. Very clever. Fantastic job. Glad Buffy told Angel how she felt.
Date: 07/31/2005 - 12:49 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
Loved how Buffy told Angel that Spike was the man for her whether or not the prophesy had been fulfilled for either person. I was reading and thinking go Buffy. Great job.
Date: 07/27/2005 - 04:02 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
[Quote]"You told me once you'd always be my girl." "I did. But I'm a woman now." Buffy walked out then, into the daylight. [End Quote] OMG...I thin that is the *best* answer/repsonser I've ever heard or read. Perfect! Absolutely perfect because it is so true. She was girl then and she's a woman now. Perfect! Loved the whole chapter. So well done.
Date: 07/27/2005 - 02:34 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
So glad she faced Angel and told him in no uncertain terms that Spike was the one for her! GREAT CHAP, great tale. gonna hate to see this one end. bring on the last chap.
Date: 07/26/2005 - 07:42 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Awe, Proposal :)) Lovely chapter. Good answer to Angel's question: You told me once you'd always be my girl." "I did. But I'm a woman now" Loved reading it.
Date: 07/26/2005 - 09:47 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
Loved the chappie, but if Angel happned to trip over his feet and land on a stake I would send you a virtutual chocolate chip cookie :P
Date: 07/26/2005 - 07:40 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
Oh, cute proposal! Like this chapter very much indeed. Also loved the resolution with Angel. I adore Angel, but let's face it; he and Buffy have both moved on. He doesn't always do "gracious looser" very well; even though it seems to be Cordy he's in love with these days! ""You told me once you'd always be my girl." "I did. But I'm a woman now." Buffy walked out then, into the daylight." Loved this part!
Date: 07/26/2005 - 04:52 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
Wonderful once again! I love the sharp insights you have into the meaning of the B/A relationship in contrast with S/B. Very realistic to have Spike still be insecure about Buffy going to Angel as well as Buffy trying to sneak off to see him. They're not quite there with letting go of all bad habits but are working towards it. I'm so happy Buffy is so confident and secure of and in her feelings -- something she never achieved in canon IMO. The parade Spike predicted must be marching by. :) It was great to have her be so unwishy-washy with Angel. And great line about being a woman now.
Date: 07/26/2005 - 03:58 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
"Good, cause I'd have to kill any bloke that tried to get you away from me, and I'm not supposed to be doing that anymore."--I loved the proposal. And the references to them being engaged for four years. And the bit with Angel, that was some pretty cool closure. And Angel asked her a really good question. But, I would have liked to have a bit of a sidebar about her breakup with the immortal... and I'm sad that there's only one more chapter... But the whole thing is so darn fabuous. Wonderful job! Please, update soon!
Date: 07/26/2005 - 03:28 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
I really enjoyed this chapter! I hope you included their wedding in the last chapter! I can't wait to see what thats like!
Date: 07/26/2005 - 03:02 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
I LOVE that last line, "I'm a woman now" That's great. Like it's finally time for her to "put away childish toys." We get to see the wedding, right?????? please?? Update soon!
Date: 07/26/2005 - 02:04 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
loved this chapter. cant' wait for the next. great job. wonder how you're gonna end it. please post soon. great job. loved it.
Date: 07/26/2005 - 01:42 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
I really liked the last part about how Buffy once said she'd always be his girl, but she responded that she was a woman now. That was so perfect. Great way to end the chapter.
Date: 07/26/2005 - 01:30 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
i did like the direction you took this. i also loved this chapter. buffy was able to tell angel to back off the way a "woman" would. no miscommunication at all. loved it loved it loved it!!!
Date: 07/26/2005 - 12:20 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
No need to fret. This one is lovely. The interplay between Spike and Buffy while they were in bed was great. 'Is this a date?" "No. . . do you want it to be?" transformed beautifully into "is that a proposal?" "No. Do you want it to be?" Oh sweetie. Gorgeous. And hey, nice conversation between Buffy and the butthead. Very nice. Alas, though, I too am sadly deficient in the banner making, but you know I'd make you one if I could.
Date: 07/25/2005 - 11:21 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Good chapter, sorry the story has to end. A bright ending is much better than what we had on the TV series.
Date: 07/25/2005 - 10:43 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
I loved this chapter, Addie. Excellent! It was a nice tie in and tie up to the previous chapters with its own flair of emotions in it. I loved it. I am sad to see it end, but I look forward to the last chapter.
Date: 07/25/2005 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Good chapter - liked the way Buffy went to see Angel and cleared things up. Glad to see she would've still chosen Spike :) Looking forward to reading the final chapter :)
Date: 07/25/2005 - 09:54 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
I loved the last line! I really like how you've betrayed Angel. I think it's true to the character, he's a good guide, but he has a VERY hard time not being stubborn and closed minded. It will be sad to see this story come to end, but it's been fun while it's lasted. Glad you brought Cordy back!