Date: 03/23/2005 - 08:43 am Title: Chapter 15
OH DAMN!!!!!! Oh no, oh man, oh jeez!! Please don't leave it there!! Post again, post MORE!!!! This whole chapter I was on the edge of my seat with goosebumps!!! SOOOO good!!! Pretty please update REALLY soon!!!! Sorry about no reviews from me last chapter... I could SWEAR I reviewed.... dunno what happened. But here is this one. *grins*
Author's Response: Oh, beg my baby,beg me, I like it....
Date: 03/22/2005 - 06:14 am Title: Chapter 14
Wesley and Cordelia are dead! Curse that Angelus! That really sucks. More heartache on top of some major grade tension. The whole AI team is pretty much gone. That is so sad. However, that leaves me to wonder what Darla is up to. Can't imagine she's all that happy about her man being staked. Wonder when she'll be showing up. So many things going on. Love the bit with the tape measure, too, so classic male that is. Wonderful chapter.
Author's Response: Wow, BuffyRat, I don't think I've ever had such a thorough reveiw as what you given over the past few days. I just wanted to say thank you, I'm glad that you are enjoying this story. It's wonderful to get feedback on what other people think. So thank you, you really made my day :)
Date: 03/22/2005 - 05:57 am Title: Chapter 13
Stupid scabby demons. But, if we get through all the major plot points, that means soon there will be nothing left to get in the way of the smut... Well, wonderful story regardless. I, myself, am also looking foward to the big showdown.
Date: 03/22/2005 - 05:42 am Title: Chapter 12
That was some very enjoyable smut. About time for those two. Also thought the bit about Glory's spell and how it didn't work on demons was a pretty good theory too. Got to say that the phone call with Giles, also priceless. Can't wait to see what he says when they finally make it to the Magic Box. Wonderful job!
Date: 03/18/2005 - 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 14
Best bloody story i've read!
Date: 03/16/2005 - 05:33 am Title: Chapter 11
Bloodlust, that must really suck. She'll learn to deal, hell, if Spike said I could, I'd probly believe I could fly... Great Chapter.
Date: 03/16/2005 - 05:20 am Title: chapter 10
Wow, the scoobies really are into research overload this time... so much to know. Liked the solution to the Glory/Ben thing (though that was one of my favorite season five scenes, when Spike smacked Xander all upside the head). Glory is so gonna get her ass kicked... awesome!
Date: 03/16/2005 - 05:10 am Title: Chapter 9
Real nice with the squashing of the slime demons. I bed those two are all slimey and gross right now. Too bad that lame ass Glory had to come by and ruin all hope of a joint shower. Oh well, always next time. Great chapter.
Date: 03/15/2005 - 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 8
That was fun. The bit about Spike being in love with Giles was priceless. “Only if you promise not to ask Giles out on a date. I don’t think I would ever sleep again if he said yes,”--great line. The information about turned slayers was pretty interesting too. A different and appreciated change from the norm. Love the sparring too, maybe Buffy's demon is communication through violence...but that's not really any differenct from Buffy and Spike in the past... Great chapter!
Date: 03/15/2005 - 05:40 am Title: Chapter 7
“And now I’m a vampire, and I couldn’t even get that right. . . What have I got? A pile of guilt and self-pity to match my fangs and bloodlust!”--Wonderful line, great way of summing up all her fears and angst. Loved Spike's argument, and maybe she doesn't listen to much he says, but he seems to be getting through a little. And the dream sequence, fabulously scary. Really wonderful chapter.
Date: 03/15/2005 - 05:28 am Title: Chapter 6
Strong Buffy. Wow. Glory sure has it coming to her. And a ride home with Spike, should we all be that lucky.
Date: 03/15/2005 - 05:13 am Title: Chapter 5
Poor Spike. He actually handled it quite well. Great chapter.
Date: 03/15/2005 - 04:58 am Title: chapter 4
Xander really does a good job looking like and ass some time, but it is in character. Love Dawn accepting Spike as family, smart girl. Good job!
Date: 03/15/2005 - 04:45 am Title: Chapter 3
“Oh yeah, hear bout it all the time, in fact I saw a vamp last week that could fire walk,” --well you ask a dumb question, you get a dumb answer. Chapter was extraordinary!
Date: 03/15/2005 - 04:31 am Title: Chapter 2
Poor Buffy, and even Giles doesn't understand. Bet it has something to do with Spike loving her. But, I want to know anyway. Great Chapter.
Date: 03/15/2005 - 04:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, okay, kinda shocked with the vampire angle and with Spike all dusting Angelus before he even knew who it was... but the heart beat, and breathing, and warm being, that is a new twist. Good chapter, pretty priceless reactions from both of them.
Date: 03/15/2005 - 04:13 am Title: Prologue
Come on Buff, it doesn't end like that! It's your show.
Date: 03/15/2005 - 02:25 am Title: Chapter 14
Ooooh, interesting twist, Temp! And great chapter. "whip out a tape measure" Love it!
Date: 03/05/2005 - 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 13
I'll try that again! Oops forgive the awful typing last time round! What I meant to impart was, in between being green eyed with jealousy of how brills a fic this is for a first timer (envy abounds!) - but love it to bits and am eagerly awaiting the rest of this and your next fic - you are good! Thank you Sue & The Gyp xxx
Date: 03/05/2005 - 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 13
Loe this - yay you - can't wait for more - how vlever you are! Sue & The Gyp
Date: 03/05/2005 - 05:47 am Title: Chapter 13
Don't worry, smut wasn't needed for this chapter to be awesome! Wow, I was wondering what was gonna happen with any info uncovered, and boy you didn't disappoint. I loved the whole thing, and now I'm anxiously awaiting the battle.
Date: 02/24/2005 - 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 12
Haven't reviewed yet because I just read the story up to this point. Great story, plot, characters, GREAT smut. Just enough angst to make Buffy and Spike believable, but not overkill. Great job. More please.
Date: 02/24/2005 - 04:51 am Title: Chapter 12
So proud of you...and I told you not to worry about the smut! You're doing just an excellent job with this fic...I can't wait for every new chap! Wonderful work, sweets! :o)
Date: 02/23/2005 - 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 12
what's this about more smut? Awesome chapter...me likey!!! can't wait for more
Date: 02/23/2005 - 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 12
Smut! Glorius smut! No bribery needed, I have no pride and don't mind begging! Brilliant chappie! I must have more!
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