Date: 02/27/2024 - 03:12 pm Title: Chapter One
I really enjoyed this fic! Wasnt so much a fan of evil obsessive Fred, especially since I loved her character in ATS! I do see how it fit into the story though! Probably dont read the reviews any more, it has been near 20 years since the fic was posted, but in case you do I WISH IT WAS LONGER or had a sequel!!! It was written so well, I binged read it in a single night haha
Date: 01/17/2007 - 01:34 am Title: Chapter One
You did a great job with writting Eric and his response to Spike when he said he chose love&money. Erics response stuck out to me the most being a poet. My favorite part.
Date: 01/17/2007 - 01:26 am Title: Chapter One
I love your use of the characters, fitting them perfectly with eachother.
The realness of the music business is real cool.
Date: 02/08/2006 - 02:13 am Title: Chapter One
OMG! I can't believe how much of an ass Spike just was. I just found this story and am already hooked.
Date: 07/08/2005 - 06:03 am Title: Chapter One
Good so far, but Spike's being a jerk. Hope he'll come to his senses. :)
Date: 03/29/2005 - 02:35 pm Title: Chapter One
Ohhh!! I bet, I bet Riley and Dr. Walsh, later of course! Great chapter... Luv, Spuf
Date: 03/23/2005 - 02:47 am Title: Chapter One
I like how this story is progressing so far. I like how you made all your characters 3-dimensional. They all react like real people would, their understanding and conflicted and angry and sad and syempathetic. You don't let anyone be the supervillian and that's what seperates this story from the rest, everyone is entitled to their own feelings and you don't make them feel guilty about that. This has been an emotional ride and if I had one request it would be this.....have Will keep the child he made with Fred. While his reasons make sense from a man that has been through what he has, I think that is how he will truely get over or make peace with everything that has happened....when he can learn that he can love that little girl as much has he will the twins he made with Buffy. Otherwise I love this story and have from the beginning. Keep it up.
Date: 03/01/2005 - 08:39 pm Title: Chapter One
please please update ASAP!
Date: 02/23/2005 - 09:46 pm Title: Chapter One
So glad you decided to post the chapter and that everyone seems to be accepting of it. This is a wonderful story and you should be very proud. Don't be nervous about the next few updates- you have lots of support!
Date: 02/19/2005 - 05:13 am Title: Chapter One
I just caught up with the story and I'm loving it so far. I like how ES is taking Spike under his wing like a surrogate father so to speak. Also I love the speech he gave to Spike about chosing love or money...excellent. I'm a Riley basher so I'm definitely not going to like it if he and Buffy hook up but I like Doyle so that relationship I can tolerate. Now Miss Fred...what a nut..I like it. Looking forward to the next update. I just love a good dark fic.
Date: 02/18/2005 - 07:16 am Title: Chapter One
forgive the surprise misspeling was copying it from a website..also it's Diamond Rio's
Date: 02/14/2005 - 06:05 pm Title: Chapter One
oh dear...I can see the angst now. Sigh... I will continue to read this story, knowing that Spike must hit rock bottom before he can climb up to Buffy again. How sad, the fact that Buffy can only help our Spike so much, he has to do the rest himself. Good story. Luv, Spuf
Date: 02/09/2005 - 10:32 pm Title: Chapter One
So the break up is the begin...
Hope it won't be to hard for me to read the rest. Loved the way you wrote about Love/Money.
Author's Response: nope.....it's just a catalist to what is to come in a couple more chapters......will have a Spuffy make up session first.....
Date: 02/08/2005 - 06:28 am Title: Chapter One
Thanks for having Angel with Cordy! love A/C fics with B/S and who is Tara with? Is Willow going to be appearing soon? How about Anya?
Author's Response: songgal, other pairings will be revealed. Tara, ahhhh, what about Tara..hmmmm. Maybe Fred is not the only one that will be acting out of character in this one. Anya, well, who else would Anya be with....her soul man Xander of course.
Date: 02/08/2005 - 01:35 am Title: Chapter One
Sigh, I'm always a little leary of Spike cheating on Buffy fics. Although, I know you will handle it with elegance...(because Spike in the show was so devoted to the women he loved)
Anyway, please continue. I'm going to try and get by the bad Fred stuff and see it through.
I just hope Spike doesn't rape Fred or something...that said, please keep updating.
Thanks,
Luv Spuf
That said
Author's Response: spufette, have faith....no Spike raping Fred will happen....rest assured. Just remember, the mind is not hard to manipulate if the timing is just right.
Date: 02/07/2005 - 11:21 pm Title: Chapter One
I like this story! it's different. Please post soon!!
Author's Response: blondiebear, I will be posting another part soon.....and I'm very appreciative of those that have reviewed so far.
Date: 02/07/2005 - 07:25 pm Title: Chapter One
Wow. I enjoyed this first chapter and I'm very much looking forward to seeing where this goes. I loved Racing Hearts and can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Calli
Thanks for reading RH, and this one. I have something to prove to myself, and this story is it.....I promise bandaides at the end.......
Date: 02/07/2005 - 06:12 pm Title: Chapter One
Hey Kimber, just wanted to let you know that I'm a big fan of your stories (Racing Hearts is one of my all-time favorites) and I'm so excited about this new one! I absolutely love these darker stories and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Sevvy
Thanks, I really appreciate you like my stories....and yes this one will be dark and of the heartbreaking kind.....
Date: 02/07/2005 - 06:05 pm Title: Chapter One
I really like this story
Please keep it up
Author's Response: Thanks, I hope you feel that way in a couple chapters, LOL!