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Reviewer: slaye Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2006 - 02:17 am Title: Nightmares and Realities

i love this story ...i read it a while ago and i was hoping that you would update it....it is a shame that this story has not an ending....
sorry if my writting is wrong ...i am studing english
bye

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 10:32 pm Title: Nightmares and Realities

Buffy has lost it but i completely understand what she's going through. me + relationships don't mix well together eiteher. Please post soon!

Reviewer: spufette Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 01:35 pm Title: Nightmares and Realities

First, I cannot stand Harmony! But, I feel better that it's her Spike rebounding with because, hey, can't be serious, right? Anyway, love this...you are doing great with the first person POV! Hope Buffy comes around, soon, and I have to say this seems so realistic, all the regrets and such! Luv, Spuf

Author's Response: I can't stand Harmony either, but she is a persistent pain in the butt and wouldn't go away. I tried, really I did. Thanks for the compliment on the realism of the story.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2005 - 10:14 pm Title: Nightmares and Realities

I like the start! Please coninue :-D

Reviewer: Samolly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 11:54 pm Title: Nightmares and Realities

Good start!

Reviewer: theladyofspike Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 04:47 pm Title: Nightmares and Realities

loved the first chappy!!!! i hope she goes, apologize and then kisses, smuchies... yum yum... you know :P lol

Reviewer: Witchie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 03:57 pm Title: Nightmares and Realities

Wow... Really good. Can't wait for the update. Wake up and smell the coffee Buffy. Good orgasms. Best friend. Great relationship.

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 02:22 pm Title: Nightmares and Realities

Great Start - I can't wait to see where it goes!

Reviewer: dorothee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 11:26 am Title: Nightmares and Realities

Great beginning. Well writen. I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: I'm going to try to update within the next day or so. I know it drives me nuts when there is a big gap between chapters.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 08:40 am Title: Nightmares and Realities

Wow. That is really good! It's well written, intelligent, and with a side of funny. I can't wait to read more of this! Keep going!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I enticed the characters with chocolate so they would come back and tell me more of what happens.

Reviewer: Enchantress Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 07:06 am Title: Nightmares and Realities

great start.. already hooked, can't wait for more :-)

Reviewer: songgal1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 06:57 am Title: Nightmares and Realities

Good for spike for practicing some tough love though!

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 05:59 am Title: Nightmares and Realities

great start (I hope there is more) - really interested in seeing where this can go ......

Reviewer: Addie Logan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 05:50 am Title: Nightmares and Realities

Really liking this so far. I haven't read many first person fics, and you're doing a good job. Hope you continue. :)

Author's Response: I definitely plan on continuing. I already have the ending written it's just stuff in-between that the characters wouldn't be quiet about that I need to add in.

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 05:20 am Title: Nightmares and Realities

OMG that is one angsty ending of the chapter......... Cant wait to see what else u have for this story. as for the angst level go as high as u want just as long as u have a happy ending, with them together*obviously, lol* ;-)

Author's Response: I just have to see how long these two crazy kids are going to keep fighting...

Reviewer: Cali Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 05:01 am Title: Nightmares and Realities

You have me intrigued with this first chapter. Would definitely be interested in reading more. Thanks for sharing your story.

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 04:50 am Title: Nightmares and Realities

I really like this. Please keep it up. This is very "slice of life". Did everyone have a relationship like this or was it just me? What a great place to go with these characters.

Author's Response: Thanks, I wanted to start in the middle of everything and see what happened from there.

Reviewer: parisian Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2005 - 04:35 am Title: Nightmares and Realities

Oh this is good, this is real good... more please :)

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm encouraging the characters to come back and play in my head by enticing them with chocolate. So far it's working. :)

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