This is fast becoming one of my favorite stories. I love the point of view and the fact that the characters are so different compared to other stories. It's very realistic; I feel like I know people just like them. Oh and every time you use the word nesting I crack up for some reason. lol. It's really funny.

can't say she didn't deserve that...she needs a serious dose of reality..and I am so loving will in this fic!

please post soon! i loved it!! hopefully buffy realizes what a mistake she's making in not being with Will.

This is only Buffy fault - she sent Will away. Now she has to live with it - he found a substitute.

Not normally my sort of story, at least I thought so from the summary... but when I peeked out of boredom today, I find you're writing a really cool, first person, take on semi-maturing young adult relationships. You have Buffy down to a tee, and just when I thought you were presenting me with a Love's Bitch Spike/Will you go and give him the balls to scare her into confronting her insecurity! Great start. Now I'm hoping future chapters create the right sort of tension that will enable you to explore the relationship fears Buffy has whilst retaining some of that dry humour you have cleverly incorporated.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you gave the story a try and have enjoyed it, so far. I'm hoping the future chapters do the story justice too. For some reason the Spike/Will who wanted to be in this story told me he wanted to have sex, be a bad ass and of course, brutally honest. Which snarky, honest Spike has always been one of my favorites.

OH the funny..."I can’t believe he put an empty ice cream carton in my fridge"...& the pain..."Harmony and Spike walked out of The Espresso Pump". You definitely still have my attention. Seems like Will/Spike did not waste a bit of time but then Buffy let her fight with her demons drive him away. You have me primed for the next chapter. Thanks for this chapter.