Date: 07/06/2005 - 05:32 pm Title: Passion and Ecstasy Defined
This story has a pretty good plot, but it is very hard for me to get into. The fact that there is no written dialogue makes the characters seem rather lifeless, or hollow. Well, maybe that's just my perception- I don't know- but there just seems to be something missing. I just thought I'd let you know my thoughts. Thanx!
~Raven~
Author's Response: I understand where you are coming from. It has been a challenge to write this without dialogue and believe me I will never do it again. I try to make it so people can still get an idea of what the characters are feeling. Thank you for the feedback.
Date: 02/19/2005 - 06:41 pm Title: Passion and Ecstasy Defined
Forgett reading it slow! i had to read the chapter over twice. it was that good. love it!!. please keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Then I know it had to be hot if you read it twice..lol I'm so glad you enjoyed it that much and thanks for the review
Date: 02/19/2005 - 11:45 am Title: Passion and Ecstasy Defined
You can always write so hot love scenes! They are so in tune with one another - I wished for Buffy that Spike was her husband :-D
Author's Response: I try to keep them hot and fresh. I like a little detail in my smut. A generic smut scene doesn't do it for me except for when there's build up. I kinda like to get straight to it as you can problably tell since you've been reading my stuff since I've been writing. As always Cordy, I'm glad to hear from you. Thanks for the review
Date: 02/18/2005 - 05:05 pm Title: Passion and Ecstasy Defined
really good, so are we gonna find out who her husband is or is that a secret. anways not to rush but can i just say more more more (grins) with spike on top.!!!!
Date: 02/18/2005 - 05:00 am Title: Passion and Ecstasy Defined
Wow. Sexy!! And for some stupid reason, I just now figured out something, you aren't having them actually speak! Your just say what they are saying... am I making sense? Well anyway, that is really cool that you can pull that off, which you are, so, bravo!
Author's Response: Not stupid...you're absolutely correct. Thank you for picking up on that. Your taking a look inside what's going on as their affair progresses. I guess you can say I'm turning you all into voyuers..dirty, dirty..lol. I know I'm taking a risk to a certain extent but for some reason I don't think its necessary to have them speak in this story. Thanks for the review
Date: 02/18/2005 - 03:24 am Title: Passion and Ecstasy Defined
That was some passion, written by an author with passion so naturally it was amazin!!!
Author's Response: I'm gald you thought so. That was the goal I had in mind. Thanks for the compliment Rev and the constant support. You're awesome. Now get back to your brillant writing.
Date: 02/18/2005 - 01:13 am Title: Passion and Ecstasy Defined
you might want to mention what type of birth control they are using so you don't get suggestions of Buffy becoming pregnant on one of these rousts!
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback...all will be revealed slowly but for right now lets just suspend our disbelief and enjoy the spuffy ride.
Date: 02/17/2005 - 10:41 pm Title: Passion and Ecstasy Defined
The coffee house was hot, but now I need wine and that cigarette would also be nice. This was a very steamy chapter. Me want more.
Author's Response: LOL...too bad I smoked them all when I wrote this chapter. I'll be starting a new pack when I write the nex chapter. Still more hot spuffy loving to come...Thanks for the review
Date: 02/17/2005 - 10:35 pm Title: Passion and Ecstasy Defined
You rock at writing scenes like this! You're incredibly descriptive and it's SO sexy! Perfect update:)
Author's Response: Thanks...God knows I try to keep them fresh and hot. Luckily, JM does it for me. Thanks for the review
Date: 02/17/2005 - 10:10 pm Title: Passion and Ecstasy Defined
So obviuosly enjoyed this chapter and yes waiting for more....
Date: 02/17/2005 - 10:02 pm Title: Passion and Ecstasy Defined
Ahh, Damn! Why can't I write sex scenes like these!?
Great, hot, chapter...sigh, I think I'll go pound out another chapter of one of my fics now, thank you.
Please, update soon.
Luv, Spuf
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. I tried to make it hot and judging by your response. It looks like I did. Thanks for the feedback...happy writing Spuf