Reviews For Dance of the Mates
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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2017 - 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'We're Going to Have A Chat'

Story has potential, but needs some editing.

Reviewer: nmcil Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2014 - 08:08 am Title: Chapter 2: 'We're Going to Have A Chat'

NICE

Reviewer: nmcil Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2013 - 12:45 am Title: Chapter 2: 'We're Going to Have A Chat'

I like your "manly" Spike - problem is that, in contrast, Buffy comes across as rather childish.

Reviewer: sharon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2008 - 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'We're Going to Have A Chat'

I Love Spike when he is all manly! I can't wait to see what happens next











Reviewer: Sharon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2007 - 01:27 am Title: Chapter 2: 'We're Going to Have A Chat'

I like it that you made Spike take charge, I think that it was probably the only way they would have talked under the circumstances.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2005 - 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'We're Going to Have A Chat'

Well spuf I love an all Manley Spike.a take charge guy!" Keep writing like this,and you will have me hooked.

Author's Response: Thank you. After the review just below yours? I was going to give up on all my fics. Anyway, the story is finished, actually. What I guess really upset me about the previous review is that I really 'liked' this story myself and enjoyed writing it. That's why I think it hurts so much that someone thought this was horrible? Hemingway, I'm not, grant it, but horrible? Anyway, thanks again and you know what? You've given me the courage to continue my other stories. Thank you so very much. spuf

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 - 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'We're Going to Have A Chat'

yup manly (check) hot (check) takes control (check) want more (check) *l*

Author's Response: Yes, Spike 'is' a manly man! thanks, luv Spuf

Reviewer: songgal1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2005 - 06:18 am Title: Chapter 2: 'We're Going to Have A Chat'

can't wait to hear B's response!

Author's Response: It will be positive, believe it or not! Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Author's Response: It will be positive, believe it or not! Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: bloodshedbaby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2005 - 04:17 am Title: Chapter 2: 'We're Going to Have A Chat'

ooh, liking the rough and tough Spike. Yum.

Author's Response: Yes, rough and tough Spike, mmmm thanks luv Spuf

Reviewer: Tasha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2005 - 03:58 am Title: Chapter 2: 'We're Going to Have A Chat'

More more ... please write more soon. {Smiles}

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I'll be updating daily until I catch up to the unwritten chapters. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2005 - 02:51 am Title: Chapter 2: 'We're Going to Have A Chat'

Thx for the update, and lets hope that they will staty put together in that crypt and suss things out....

Author's Response: Oh, they'll stay put together, for a while that is. Thanks, Luv Spuf

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