
Date: 02/28/2005 - 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
Interesting. I'm curious why Spike was protecting Dawn (the Key?) and Buff & all don't know anything about her at present. Riley seems to be a real wanker already and Graham with a bit of sympathy? I like that idea. Excellent start and I can't wait to read the next installment! Thanks for sharing.
Date: 02/25/2005 - 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
I just noticed that this fic is different - Buffy does not know that Dawn is her sister (maybe she isn't in this fic) and Joyce don't know her. But Spike is protecting her and can send her messages with his mind. Really interesting. Looking forward for more.
Date: 02/25/2005 - 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
Great story and update. It appears that Riley is going to be a bigger jerk than he was in the show. Please update when you can.
Date: 02/25/2005 - 08:21 am Title: Chapter 2
I really like this story. I'm enjoying this different spin on Dawn's arrival. Can't wait for more! :)
Date: 02/25/2005 - 05:17 am Title: Chapter 2
its VERY VERY good so far. Can't wait to see whats going to happen
Date: 02/25/2005 - 04:45 am Title: Chapter 2
DAwn is a human right? And i cant wait to see what's gonna happen next!
Date: 02/24/2005 - 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
damn that was great for just two chapters u already sucked me into wanting to read more and dying to find out wat happens next. i really like this story so far. u definitely cought me by surprise wen u brought in dawn like that. i really liked it. i also like the fact that your making it so rileys bad i like that way better wen people make it xander but that i can understand sometimes. ne ways i like this story and cant wait to read more. please update soon i want to no wat happens next thanx
Date: 02/24/2005 - 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
can't wait to find out how spike has dawn to begin with...