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Reviewer: sharon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2008 - 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 18: 'Cool Feet?'

I am glad you decided to finish this story. I don't know what kind of feedback you got, but I love the way you write.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2005 - 01:50 am Title: Chapter 18: 'Cool Feet?'

Ooh! That sounds like it'll be an interesting chapter to read. Can't wait. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Sorry I haven't responded yet. Thanks for reading, spuf

Reviewer: Infatuation Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2005 - 04:54 am Title: Chapter 18: 'Cool Feet?'

no your not hemingway.... but your just as valid. people want to read your stories thats a gift. most of us go thru life speakin to an absent audience. you have yours and you should be proud. ok i'm done with the inspirational speech... bet you can tell i just re-watched season7 :) Your charecterisation is good, so is your dialouge. But you seem to have incresed the pace of the story somewhat... take your time. your better at this than you think

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I know I can count on the readers here to give me moral support when I need it. I am glad you like my characterization and dialogue. Yes, I moved things up a bit on the pace because I do tend to go on forever if I don't (LOL). I am slowing down again with this however, since I need to get the next chapter of All Manner of Monsters up. I'm going to try and have Spike find out the amazing truth about who Dawn Summers really is! spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2005 - 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 18: 'Cool Feet?'

Hey! You is you - only take good constitutive criticism to your heart! And do what you heart is telling you - not the other ones! :) I still love your writing! *nods*
Loved the outfit! (Buffy, Spike and Jimmy). Travis? I didn't think he would dare to come. And don't worry - I loved this chapter too. Looking forward to the "here comes the bride" :))

Author's Response: Thank you for your support. I thought the whole Anakin Skywalker look would be cool for Spike and little James. I'm not sure where I read this, a couple of years ago but the whole dress thing was kind of a nod to Star Wars and James M. Somewhere, someplace (I think a BTVS chat board) I read that George Lucas' two teenage girls were obsessed with the character of Spike and insisted that their dad 'read' James for Anankin, which he did just to placate the Lucas girls. James was said to have realized he was a bit too 'long in the fang' for the teenage Anakin. Anyway, that in mind, I conjured up the wedding clothes for Spike and James. spuf

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2005 - 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 18: 'Cool Feet?'

HEY I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!dont you dare think for one moment that your not like THE best writter ever!!!!!!!!!!!!! i absolutly CANNOT waite for the next chapter!!!!!!!!! ~ShootingStar0528@aol.com

Author's Response: Well, thank you so much! I will continue with this story. I am at a block wall with All Manner of Monsters for a couple of reasons. I'm really trying to write the next chapter of AMOM in character with Spike and Buffy, but make it full surprises (especially for Spike!) spuf

Reviewer: melissa g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2005 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 18: 'Cool Feet?'

love the chapter . please update soon thanx.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'll try. spuf

Reviewer: Ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2005 - 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 18: 'Cool Feet?'

Yay! Finally an update! It was great, as usual. Keep it up! I hope the writer's block is better!

Author's Response: Yeah, it was tough but I managed! Thank you for your support. spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2005 - 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 18: 'Cool Feet?'

Don't let what others say get to you. Sometimes you can learn from the reviews, even the critical and sometimes they are just downright rude and mean. Keep up what you're doing :) You're doing fine.

Author's Response: Thank you. You have no idea what these supportive reviews do for me! (or maybe you do?) spuf

Reviewer: slinkyPk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2005 - 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 18: 'Cool Feet?'

Well, I think this is an adorable story, Sweetie. Don't listen to anybody who tells you different. Some people are just jerks who get a kick outta being mean to others. Ask yourself when was the last time the nasty reviewers posted anything besides a nasty review. When have they ever put themselves out there in full exposure to be either rejected or revered? It takes alot of courage to leave yourself open to the mercy of reviewers. I've seen scores of authors whose work could be better with the help of a beta or a little brainstorming or soundboarding. Yet, they still keep at it. Never give up!

Author's Response: Thanks. The story is supposed to be funny and kind of campy. Like the orginal BTVS movie was? The reviewer did cut me deeply (it was a review on another fiction of mine) but I've decided to overcome my hurt feelings. Thanks again, spuf

Reviewer: Pam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2005 - 10:53 am Title: Chapter 18: 'Cool Feet?'

Unfortunately, when you place your writing on the web... you leave yourself open for the good and bad.... Maybe your critic can publish some of his/her work so we can critique it. I have been waiting for the wedding ritual. And I am sure you have many more interested in your Buffy/Spike stories.

Author's Response: Too true. I should know this, so I decided to just take the review with a grain of salt and try to get some constructiveness from it. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: beth Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2005 - 09:56 am Title: Chapter 18: 'Cool Feet?'

Don't know what story you got the bad review from, but I know that if I see your name as author it will be worth the read. Unfortunately that isn't true of every author. I love this one. The plot is interesting and intricate, something that's a must for me. You are a wonderful author. Keep up the good worK!

Author's Response: Thanks Beth. Actually, it was Dance of the Mates. I have to agree, especially during the middle of it, it was disjointed and iffy. It's just that I felt the reader who wrote the bad review could have been a little more constructive with the critisism instead of so angry about it? I was stunned, truthfully, however I am trying to take their advice and leave off the 'luv spuf' at the end of everything. Too sugary? Thanks again, spuf

Reviewer: momzilla Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2005 - 08:36 am Title: Chapter 18: 'Cool Feet?'

I've been waiting for this update, so I'm really glad you decided to forge ahead with the writing. Keep the updates coming!

Author's Response: Thank you. Love the moniker by the way! spuf

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2005 - 04:47 am Title: Chapter 18: 'Cool Feet?'

I recently found this story and I find it very entertaining. I think you're doing a great job with it!

Author's Response: Thank you. spuf

Reviewer: Jess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2005 - 04:19 am Title: Chapter 18: 'Cool Feet?'

Love the story - Can't wait for the ceremony! :D

Author's Response: Thanks. That's going to be a little tough, but I hope it works. spuf

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2005 - 03:57 am Title: Chapter 18: 'Cool Feet?'

OH a great chapter. Please continue to write and update soon and often. You are a very good writer and do not let anyone tell you different. It takes a very unique person to put words together and creat the enjoyable stories you write. Regain your self esteam and ignore the negativity. They are jealous of your talent. Don't let it hurt you and take it as a compliment. In life you will come across people that are just plain evil and are not happy unless they are picking on someone. Use it as a learning experience and enjoy the thought that you have something they don't. Readers and other writers that enjoy your hard work.and writing skills. Yes I know I sound like a mom here actually I am a mom I'm 58 years old with experience. and a spike and buffy fan.

Author's Response: Thanks. I am going to continue with all my fics. I decided to let the bad reviews go. I'm a mom too and I really should take my own advice more! spuf

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