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Reviewer: Aisling Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2005 - 06:45 pm Title: Judgments

hey chapter 2 LOL :D off to read 3

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2005 - 04:53 pm Title: Judgments

It's hard to imagine Buffy in that type of relationship, but at the same time, you put it in a way that could be believable. Plus, it's a great setting for an interesting story.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2005 - 04:19 am Title: Judgments

Poor Buffy. Very glad to see that Spike is biding a little bit of time here, gathering intel. Very powerful chapter. Update soon.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2005 - 11:47 pm Title: Judgments

Poor Buffy - that bastard Parker deserves to get his ass kicked so he can see what it's like. I just really hope Buffy is strong and I'll be mad if she pulls one of those "But he loves me" things. Someone who hits you doesn't love you and there's no reason to stay with him! Put that jerk behind bars! (Sorry for the rant, lol.) But anyway you're one of my fave writers and I love all your stories so I'm sure I'll love this one too. Can't wait to read more :)

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2005 - 06:17 pm Title: Judgments

Once again, you take a subject and WAM! everyone loves it and has to start using their brains while reading cause you just put so much into them. I know at some point (with Willow and Spikes help) that Buffy will find the strength to get out of this relationship (she already had a 'spark' of her former self just talking with Spike) and I know you'll make us all go through hell right along with her and we'll all read it and cry out "thank you Ashlee, may I have another, please." so It's GREAT - I LOVE IT and THANK YOU ASHLEE, MAY I HAVE ANOTHER (CHAPTER) PLEASE! and SOON.

Reviewer: Laine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2005 - 02:36 pm Title: Judgments

yay.. new story.. nice new story.. i don't get why Willow would want Spike to help, though. i mean they're not even remotely close. anyway, love it still. i just hate how buffy doesn't fight for herself. but i'm sure there'll be tons of Parker bashing later.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2005 - 08:21 am Title: Judgments

This is really well writen, good to see both sides. Why isnt this on B & S Central?

Reviewer: Nyah Ambrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2005 - 01:46 am Title: Judgments

It was nice to get a look into Buffy's feeling regarding her relationship with Parker. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2005 - 01:38 am Title: Judgments

Like Gunn said i cant wait till Spike gets to Parker's with guns blazing...LOVE IT ! waiting for more!

Reviewer: gattaca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2005 - 12:39 am Title: Judgments

Ooooooooh.......GET HIM! GET HIM!! KILL DOGGIE KILL KILL!! This story is getting good ma gah! Make Spike ram a railroad spike through Parker's head! YEAH! DO IT!! WOO WOO! Or just have him beat the shit outta him. :D

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2005 - 10:58 pm Title: Judgments

good update but she needs to be rid of him once and for all

Reviewer: Renee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2005 - 10:43 pm Title: Judgments

Wow, You have me hooked. Looks like you have out done your self again. Keep up the good work and up date soon.

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2005 - 10:33 pm Title: Judgments

She was limping?? OMG I think I'm gonna cry. That's really sad. Oh but the spark! That last line was so beautiful. I can't wait til Spike saves her, no matter how long from now that may be. =)

Reviewer: Alicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2005 - 08:38 pm Title: Judgments

grrrr that bloody bastard of Parker!! poor Buffy :( Awesome chapter! This fic is really interesting! Looking forward to the next update

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2005 - 07:48 pm Title: Judgments

That bastard, Parker! Please get him out of the way of the Spuffiness! I can't wait for more, so please update soon!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2005 - 07:03 pm Title: Judgments

wow that was really great. i hope that buffy will be ok and that parker will not do anything to badly to her but i'm highly doubting that. i've heard of situations like this before and your doing a great job portraying all the emoitions and the story beatuifully. can't wait for more update again soon.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2005 - 06:06 pm Title: Judgments

I'm sensing a angst-ridden story here... VERY well written though. I like that you are using parker (his name doesn't deserve to be used with a capital) as the bad guy in here. Good choice. I am really excited to see how this whole story plays out!

Reviewer: SoulNyte Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2005 - 04:18 pm Title: Judgments

I only read the summary and that got me uber-hyped about this story so great job there. Also this is a new kind of fic that I haven't seen before and can't wait for it to unfold. It had the balance of dialogue and description and the writing made me feel I was in the story instead of just reading it. Great job.

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2005 - 04:02 pm Title: Judgments

I like the part where you showed Buffy's emotions - nobody know because they're not in her situation. If you can, I think it would help to go into this further. I think people understand that it would be hard to leave if you're married or have kids, the financial and legal attachments in addition to the fear. But Buffy is in college and has no real attachments to him, or so it seems. So, why can't she leave him?

Reviewer: melissa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2005 - 04:00 pm Title: Judgments

aww poor buffy. hope spike will be able to talk to her soon n then beat parker up. hee hee. great job.

Reviewer: spuffette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2005 - 03:29 pm Title: Judgments

How sad, sadly familiar that is. You've caught the 'psyche' of an abused woman (or lover, male or female) so well. Sigh... hope Buffy and Spike can get it together, soon. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: tiff Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2005 - 03:06 pm Title: Judgments

really good more more please

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2005 - 03:04 pm Title: Judgments

Yay, you updated! This was another great chapter. Can something really bad happen to Parker? Pretty please=)

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