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Reviewer: Nyah Ambrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2005 - 01:01 pm Title: Breaking

Poor Buff. Just when things were looking a little brighter Parker comes in like a virus. Looking for to more.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2005 - 04:13 am Title: Breaking

My that Parker is a bastard. Stupid frat house politics. Boys wouldn't even believe her if she came forward. Always like that. Gut-wrenching chapter, but very powerful. Boy appearently has eyes all over campus. Spike better get creative. Good job.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2005 - 02:44 am Title: Breaking

oh, very very powerful! This is a great story!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2005 - 01:41 am Title: Breaking

OMG that was so tearifying for her to go through. i cried for buffy and parker better go to jail real soon before he kills buffy. great update your doing a great job.

Reviewer: pj Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 11:16 pm Title: Breaking

*sniff* POOR BUFFY! That is so cruel and disturbing, but I know it was a needed chapter to show the severity of the problem. Parker is such a sick bastard and I hope he gets beaten to a pulp later on. Fantastic job, keep it up!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 10:47 pm Title: Breaking

i wish spike would have been there to taken her away from him

Reviewer: Alicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 09:22 pm Title: Breaking

Poor Buffy...she has to be strong! grrrr...what a b*stard that Parker. Awesome chapter! Well done :)

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 08:08 pm Title: Breaking

That's just so incredibly sad and heartbreaking!! Oh my... Can Parker please get a major reality check sometime soon? Pretty please? Really good chapter... amazingly written. Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 08:03 pm Title: Breaking

That was really hard to read....so very sad. =( Where's SlayerBuffy when you need her?

Reviewer: Maddie Mae Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 06:34 pm Title: Breaking

Ashlee, another awesome chapter! Keep up the amazing work and I will be anxiously awaiting the next update!

Reviewer: melissa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 06:06 pm Title: Breaking

poor buffy. hope parker gets his booty kicked. great chapter.

Reviewer: Demonica Mills Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 05:31 pm Title: Breaking

ACK! Bad Parker! What a complete schmuck! I hope that Spike kicks the absolute crap out of him, and then sweeps Buffy off her feet. Can'te wait to read more.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 05:25 pm Title: Breaking

Isn't it time yet to write Parker out of this by putting him jail (after Spike catches him punching Buffy and beats him to a bloody pulp!). I always thought Parker was a prick on the series and after what he did to Buffy there, it's real believable to see him in the role you've written for him. Hated him then, hate him even more now. I would love to see Buffy fight back big time and knock him on his ass, but I want to see Spike be a hero even more. Great tale (heart wrenching, but great). Thanks for sharing, please share more soon.

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 05:05 pm Title: Breaking

Oh my, someone better get Parker quick.....

Reviewer: stace Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 05:05 pm Title: Breaking

gah! ick! girl needs some help asap!

Reviewer: Laine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 04:48 pm Title: Breaking

i want to bash parker's head with a shovel... i hope it gets better... love this update even though it is still on the dark side...

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 04:38 pm Title: Breaking

OMG I can't believe that Parker's such a prick!! even OParker on BtVS was better than this! It really tugs at my heart strings to see Buffy being abused by Parker, becaue something similar happened to one of my closest friends... and it was not pretty! Anyways, I'm really hooked on this fic. I can hardly wait for Parker to t his, and for everything else that's gonna happen! Please update soon!

Reviewer: Caatje Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 03:59 pm Title: Breaking

OMG! It's unbelievable how some people can do this to others... it's disgusting. Please update soon! I want to know if Spike fins out or what he or Willow will do!

Reviewer: Juanita Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 03:58 pm Title: Breaking

Don't know how you are at writing fight scenes, but please go into bloody gorey details when Spike finally kicks Parkers ass! Grrrr!

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 03:47 pm Title: Breaking

Oh, somebody get a gun! Please! Doesn't anyone have a 'Cousin Vinny' or something to hire? Okay, I have to admit this, right here, I read these chapters with some reluctance. (Frankly, too many painful memories from that past) but I read them, still, because Ashlee, you have hit the nail right on the head about these kinds of relationships. I only hope that Buffy 'allows' Spike to help her before she ends up dead. Wonderful, albeit disturbing, chapter. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Ash Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 03:39 pm Title: Breaking

Man.. I really hope Spike kick's his ass... This one looks like it's gonna be fun. :)

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