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Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 - 12:30 am Title: Chapter Four - Don't Squat With Your Spurs On

so they are both human with no super powers.

Reviewer: wall_flower Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2006 - 10:51 am Title: Chapter Four - Don't Squat With Your Spurs On

Oh... My... God.... This story is fantastic! I love the idea, and I love the 'innocent bondage' that's already beginning to take place!! Perfect!!

Author's Response: WOW! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: lilkat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2005 - 03:16 pm Title: Chapter Four - Don't Squat With Your Spurs On

no super strength to be had between them...verrry interesting. I like it. Thanx!

Author's Response: Nope, not a super strength between them. Glad you find it interesting -- I thought the premise might be fun and it's turning out to be a real hoot to write. Thanks so much for taking the time to comment.

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2005 - 08:03 pm Title: Chapter Four - Don't Squat With Your Spurs On

Good update. {Smiles} I like the time period that you are working with. Pioneer or wagon train days are some of my favorite to read in other genres. I look forward to what you have for us next.

Author's Response: Thanks -- it's been fun to write :)

Reviewer: storywise Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2005 - 05:00 am Title: Chapter Four - Don't Squat With Your Spurs On

Hope they don't get too soffty with each other too quickly, because then I wonder if it's still Buffy and Spike. Other than that probably annoying suggestion, keep going. It's awesome.

Author's Response: It's not an annoying suggestion at all. In fact it's something I've been trying to keep an eye on and make sure that the pace is slow and builds believably. Thanks for commenting and I hope I can keep the real Buffy and Spike in the story for you!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2005 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter Four - Don't Squat With Your Spurs On

Love the attraction they both feel - even if that's a real mean place to stop. But other told you that before. And both are even now = both are humans. At last no problem with the daylight issue for Spike, than. :))

Author's Response: Had to get around the sun allergy problem somehow. Hard to be a cowboy if you can't go outside during the day :)

Reviewer: Cecilia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2005 - 02:18 pm Title: Chapter Four - Don't Squat With Your Spurs On

Bad cliffy girl, leaving us to wonder--will there be spuffy soon??? Great last line though. Sleep for Buffy is definitely the last thing on my mind too. I love how they're both equal now--no supernatural powers for either one of them. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Anticipation. There will be Spuffy, but not soon enough for some, I suppose. Thanks for commenting it always makes me want to go back and work on the story -- good incentive and all :)

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2005 - 03:05 am Title: Chapter Four - Don't Squat With Your Spurs On

terrific job!!! love the way you're building the story...how you twine the plot...create the characters...and the UST...love the UST...i wouldn't sleep either nor would i turn around if i was buffy!!! great update!! please update soon..thanx!!

Author's Response: Thanks, Mariana -- not so easy balancing that UST as I kinda like to get to the good stuff . Thanks for commenting

Reviewer: megan_peta Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2005 - 01:44 am Title: Chapter Four - Don't Squat With Your Spurs On

Holly directed me over to your fic this morning and I realised I'd read chapter one before. I'm really glad to see some more. You're doing a fantastic job and Ic an't wait to read some more of what you have hiding in your head. I adore time travel fics and I can't wait to see how human Buffy and Spike cope in a western. It has huge potential for amusement.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Coming from you it means a lot -- I admire your work and thank Holly for pushing you in my direction. She's already been a big help to me in betaing the story.

Reviewer: bloodshedbaby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2005 - 01:26 am Title: Chapter Four - Don't Squat With Your Spurs On

WHAT??? You stop it THERE???? GAH!!! And they call ME evil!!! *passes the torch* Tag - you're it. Evil

Author's Response: LMAO -- That's kinda what my beta said to me. Hey, I gotta keep you wanting more, right? Thanks for taking the time to comment -- you're always great about that!

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