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Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 - 10:18 am Title: Chapter Five - Buffalo Gals Won't You Come Out Tonight

OH I loved it, he knew all about them, wonder what he will do now

Reviewer: wall_flower Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2006 - 11:01 am Title: Chapter Five - Buffalo Gals Won't You Come Out Tonight

:) Perfection. I liked Spike's heroism. He's charming! Plus, interesting twist.


I feel like I'm in Frontier Land at Disneyland!!

Author's Response: Hee....well, if I might paraphrase Jurasic Park....when Frontier Land breaks down, it doesn't eat people....wait....

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 04:11 am Title: Chapter Five - Buffalo Gals Won't You Come Out Tonight

So cute how Spike tried saving Buffy from the old man. It's going to be hard for Buffy to get used to not having her Slayer strenght anymore. I'm enjoying the story so far.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad to hear you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2005 - 10:30 pm Title: Chapter Five - Buffalo Gals Won't You Come Out Tonight

wow just wow!! i love this story!! you can't possibly update fast enough ;) i'm so in love with it!! i love what you do with the characters and the story...it's turning out fantastic!! please please update soon!! thanx!!

Author's Response: Thanks, so much. I have two eager betas breathing down my neck, so I'm hoping the updates will be timely.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2005 - 08:08 am Title: Chapter Five - Buffalo Gals Won't You Come Out Tonight

Mmm - they meet a shaman? Wonder if he can help them. And wonder too what “He used to take life and blood; now he will give them.” means. Spike is human now, a normal human. Mmm - possibilities... I think Buffy and Spike know that they have to work together to get through all this - and that means defend the other the came with (from thr future into the past).

Author's Response: What's a western with out a good shaman? Thanks for commenting

Reviewer: storywise Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2005 - 07:44 am Title: Chapter Five - Buffalo Gals Won't You Come Out Tonight

Uh, well, I'm thinking honing his fighting skills over a c-note probably had something to do with him being able to survive the Buffinator too. Unlike the other reviewer I'm on Buffy's side. I've read bitca Buffy b4 and that ain't it. Guy never did anything for her without selfish reason, and suddenly he goes all gallant and defendery of her honor? Excuse her, for not tripping all over herself to show him her utmost gratitude the min he decides to play hero. Anyway, even though he doesn't seem to have gone insane from any guilt, I still wonder if he has a soul now. Hated the idea when the show was stil on, but now I sorta wish he had gotten the full blown shanshue package -- soul, no supa powers, everything that entails being a human in the real world. Great UST. I'm getting impatient, because damn I seriously want to know how these two are gonna come together in that way. It's not usually a big deal in other fics, but the way you're building it up I'm on pins and needles.

Author's Response: Some excellent points and great questions. You're right, there's not reason for Buffy to instantly trust Spike now. As I said earlier to another reviewer, it wasn't that long ago they were at each aother's throats (in that bad, evil kinda way). Slow and steady is the game plan for this fic. It might drive some of the readers nuts, but I can't make everything I want happen, happen if it doesn't grow from reality and reality means they have a bit to come through before they begin to trust and rely on each other. I really do appreciate your insight into this fic -- ever thought about being a beta? (huh? huh?)

Reviewer: bloodshedbaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2005 - 03:20 am Title: Chapter Five - Buffalo Gals Won't You Come Out Tonight

wahoo! New update-age! Still lovin' this fic! Pleeeease update it soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, sweetie, I appreciate the comments. They do give me even more incentive to get back to writing.

Reviewer: Megan/Peta Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2005 - 12:53 am Title: Chapter Five - Buffalo Gals Won't You Come Out Tonight

So, Spike is gonna give blood and life huh? Wonder what that will translate into! I am really enjoying this, despite the long hatred of westerns. I can't wait for you to write more!

Author's Response: No like the western, huh? Well, I'm not big on the John Wayne type western, but this whole story came from envisioning Spike in jeans, chaps, cowboy boots and spurs. Thanks for sticking in there despite the setting.

Reviewer: Pipergirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 11:50 pm Title: Chapter Five - Buffalo Gals Won't You Come Out Tonight

Glad to see you've picked this one back up! Can't wait to see what the Shaman has to say :)

Author's Response: He's say'in it now... only in rough draft so you should be seeing it shortly. Thanks so much for your continued support!

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 11:08 pm Title: Chapter Five - Buffalo Gals Won't You Come Out Tonight

I agree with Spike ... no matter the time period she's still a cold hearted bitch. {shakes her head} Excellent writing. Just want to strangle Buffy sometimes ... well lots of times. LOL. Look forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Ah, now don't strangle her. It hasn't been that long since they were at each other throats... in a bad way :) Hopefully she'll warm up to him a bit.

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