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Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2007 - 10:36 pm Title: Chapter Eleven - They Shoot Horses, Don't They?

oh I am not likeing Katie or Spike right now if he takes her up on that ever.

Reviewer: wall_flower Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2006 - 11:49 am Title: Chapter Eleven - They Shoot Horses, Don't They?

GRr, I sure hate that Katie! Don't fall for her ho-ish charms, please Spike! You need to sweep Buffy off her feet and carry her home!!

Author's Response: Spike has trouble thinking the right head....LOL

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 05:21 am Title: Chapter Eleven - They Shoot Horses, Don't They?

God do I ever hate seeing Spike lusting after someone who is not Buffy :::growls::: Is he that stupid that he would know get that Buffy was jealous? AND that he was embarrassing her by flirting with that woman when everybody thinks they're married? I'm sorry to say , but what a moron. :::shakes head:::

Author's Response: He's a man. Period. For me, that says it all LOL

Reviewer: Storwise Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2005 - 08:43 am Title: Chapter Eleven - They Shoot Horses, Don't They?

Hey. Just caught your reply to me for chapter five only a couple of minutes ago. Oops, my bad for taking so long to check back for a response. You asked me if I ever thought about being a beta reader. Heh, noooo. Sorry, but I'm just a flunking college student. Don't think I'm qualified to help anybody out in the grammar and punctuation department. So the only thing I can do really is give feedback on plot and character development. Don't think that alone would be good enough. And to be honest, I'm way too picky than I feel I have a right to be. Thus I always try to hold back on my full opinion because I don't want to piss anyone off. As for the latest chapters, I'm really happy with where you've been going with it so far. Yes, especially with the most current "dilemma" of poor horny little Spike. :D Go you, for coming up with another obstacle that'll keep the couple we really want to see getting it on from, er... getting it on. LOL. I'm a total dark fic girl, but it's really refreshing to see someone do the romance genre some justice.The over fluffy Spuffy stuff, my eyes, they bleed. Ick. So most of the time I rather just go to the other extreme. I probably wouldn't be so addicted to the miserable fic, if there were more Spuffy writers out there who keep things as balanced as well as you do. Yikes! I talk too much. Forgive me for rambling on like that. ::sheepish grin::

Author's Response: Oh, I love con crit.... I realize not everyone is going to like the story, but it's interesting to me to see WHY they don't....is it something that I as writer need to work on? or just a difference in taste. As for betas, I have several and some only do the plot and character thing, so don't let that keep you from helping some writer out. Most writers worth their salt want to grow in their craft, and you can't do that unless someone is telling you want you did wrong, as well as what you did right. And thanks so much for the comments about dark fic.....I'm definitely a writer of the fluffy variety, but it means a lot that you like the fic enough to read it even though you tend to steer towards the darker stuff.

Reviewer: blue Deja Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2005 - 05:01 am Title: Chapter Eleven - They Shoot Horses, Don't They?

I like this its very inique in Spuffy tales. The stroyline kinda hops a bit but I really like it and hope you add more to it soon. You have a fun cutr writing to your charactors and I enjoy your style 3 stars!!!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: 1880girl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2005 - 07:07 pm Title: Chapter Eleven - They Shoot Horses, Don't They?

What Spike lusts for Katie, how could he, bit annoyed now, but still interesting chapter.

Author's Response: Spike is, after all, just a guy..... LOL

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 04:10 pm Title: Chapter Eleven - They Shoot Horses, Don't They?

Spike is so blind that he can't see that Buffy is jealous hehe. Obviously, to her, he was still just the monster she had to keep an eye on. *grins* If Spike only knew :) Oh, Buffy seems to know that Spike is lusting after Katie, she assumes it. I wonder if Shay will be able to help. Otherwise Spike is in trouble for nothing ;-)

Author's Response: LOL, yes, I think Spike is in for a lot of trouble..

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 01:39 am Title: Chapter Eleven - They Shoot Horses, Don't They?

I love jealous buffy. Can't wait for more of this very intriguing tale.

Author's Response: Yes, jealous Buffy is fun, isn't she?

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 02:14 am Title: Chapter Eleven - They Shoot Horses, Don't They?

God he's so dense! Doesn't he recognize jealousy when it rears its ugly head? dopey man. Still. . . I like this story, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 01:59 am Title: Chapter Eleven - They Shoot Horses, Don't They?

For a man who knows so much about love, it's amazing how blind he is to the ways of jealousy. I guess the women in his life never loved him enough to be jealous., Such foolish women!

Author's Response: Very foolish, indeed!

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