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Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 10:12 am Title: Chapter Fourteen - There's Bound to be Rough Waters

OH what did he see.

Reviewer: wall_flower Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2006 - 12:13 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen - There's Bound to be Rough Waters

Ahh, so sweet. Poor Buffy, having to rely on someone else after being so independant. I bet she misses her family too. I love this Spike though, he's loving and kind, and incredibly charming :) Love it!

Author's Response: Buffy feeling out of place -- just thought that was far too interesting not to look into :)

Reviewer: Pipergirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2005 - 07:14 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen - There's Bound to be Rough Waters

Ah, geez, I really, really like this story. The camaraderie between Buffy and Spike is natural, and flows well. Between Buffy's self-doubt and Spike's growth as a person (ie maturity), this is a refreshing read.

Author's Response: I really appreciate your taking the time to review....so glad to hear you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Mary Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 01:27 am Title: Chapter Fourteen - There's Bound to be Rough Waters

Yeah....it made my day to see this story had been updated! I just love it. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2005 - 03:04 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen - There's Bound to be Rough Waters

This chapter did a good job moving Spike and Buffy's relationship forward. They've been relying on one another, but Buffy finally admitting her dislike of her weakness and thanking Spike for helping showed a new softness, The dialogue was excellent, as usual, and the attention to detail makes the scenes come alive. I especially liked the physical details in Buffy's sunstroke, with Spike ministering to her through her dizziness and weakenss - it made her confession to him come naturally.

Author's Response: I think I love you. No, seriously. What wonderful feedback!

Reviewer: Carri Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2005 - 05:31 am Title: Chapter Fourteen - There's Bound to be Rough Waters

Just found this story and got really into. Excellent writing and an interesting stroyline. I like time travel and especially human Spike. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, Carri and thanks so much for taking the time to comment

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2005 - 11:54 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen - There's Bound to be Rough Waters

Ahhhh, they are soooo sweet together!!

Author's Response: :) Thank you.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2005 - 10:05 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen - There's Bound to be Rough Waters

Good to see Spike and Buffy getting along. I am anxious to see what the coin guy has to say. Good chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2005 - 09:58 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen - There's Bound to be Rough Waters

*gg* Than first my thanks goes to Beanbeans :) So Spike fits in better than Buffy? Understandable because - as you said - Spike is helpful with the horses, but Buffy feels like an outsider. But the time together does them good it seems. They are getting to know each other not only better, the have to work together.. And Spike caring for her a lot . :).

Author's Response: Yes, beans deserves a lot of credit. She asks me all those hard questions and forces me to look at things in a different way. I'm very lucky to have her as a beta!

Author's Response: Yes, beans deserves a lot of credit. She asks me all those hard questions and forces me to look at things in a different way. I'm very lucky to have her as a beta!

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2005 - 09:15 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen - There's Bound to be Rough Waters

Love this story. . . really truly. . . am so glad you found helt getting you back on track.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2005 - 09:02 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen - There's Bound to be Rough Waters

how i just love this fic!!! too bad you don't update often enough :S but if this is the result...it's well worth the wait!! ;)
thanx so much!! as always you did a fantastic job!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much....trying hard to update as often as possible. If I'm late and you see my muse, give him a kick, won't you?

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2005 - 07:10 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen - There's Bound to be Rough Waters

{Smiles} Loved the chapter update. Spike and Buffy are gelling together better our of necessity and tolerance. Look forward to more and seeing them grow even closer. {Grins} FYI - To me it looks like this story was posted twice, but then again it looks like the first review was posted twice too. So, I don't know if it is just a temp glitch that my own system is seeing.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. Yes, for some reason the chapter posted twice... LOL... two for the price of one, but a tad bit repetitive.

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2005 - 06:45 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen - There's Bound to be Rough Waters

Lovely... at last they're communicating without bile. Probably better that you keep Kate out of Buffy's sight, UB. That way the green eyed goddess will stay away and Spike and Buffy can get on with solving the mystery of the coin and their current predicament, and there might be time for some 'making hay while the sun shines', please?!

The Spike/Buffy dialogue is great... you've even got Buffy's halting uncertainty when she's trying to reign in her inner bitch, which she really mastered in S7... and this Spike reminds me of the S7 Spike too... hopefully that bodes well for future chapters.

Great chapter. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback. I'm so pleased you think I'm handling Buffy well -- a character that I love to write, but don't often feel I've got down as much as Spike. I really appreciate your comments

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