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Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 - 12:00 am Title: Chapter 1 - Go West Young Man

Oh that was good, wonder where there adventures will take them.

Reviewer: wall_flower Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2006 - 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1 - Go West Young Man

Oh golly gosh, love it!
This is going to be supremely good, isn't it?

Author's Response: Well, that would be something you tell me....I hope you feel that way, though :)

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2006 - 08:42 am Title: Chapter 1 - Go West Young Man

Terrific update.

Author's Response: Thanks, Jane!

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2006 - 10:22 am Title: Chapter 1 - Go West Young Man

Wow wow wow...

Author's Response: Thanks Thank Thanks :)

Reviewer: Diana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2006 - 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Go West Young Man

I had a day off today & spent a very enjoyable time reading this story again(Chs 16-20). One of my all time favorites! You are a terrific storyteller and do a marvelous job portaying the characters. I especially noticed how well you do the pacing, with the both the plotting and emotional highs and lows. Great job!

Author's Response: Wow, how very kind of you. I really appreciate your comments -- especially about the pacing. I've had some comments on the UST and know that most people want to get down to the nitty-gritty right away, but in this story it just wouldn't hold true....so I'm really happy that the pacing is working for you. You've made my day :)

Reviewer: Pauly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2006 - 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Go West Young Man

Oh my..That was hilarious! I read the chapter in the office and was about to laugh out loud quit a few times. This really is a great story; Buffy in denial and yet totally confused and so much delicious UST...I love it.
Thanks for sharing your tale with us.

Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your comments with me....they are always MUCH appreciated!

Reviewer: Mac 1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2006 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter 1 - Go West Young Man

Need more now. Really like this story, and you are evil for leaving it at that cliffhanger!! :-) Please update soon. Please?

Author's Response: Ah, made you wait, sorry...but a new chapter is up now!

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 03:17 am Title: Chapter 1 - Go West Young Man

Well duh! lol That was actually pretty funny. How to state the obvious. And making wishes while holding some weird Chinese coins... never a good idea ;) That's an interesting start. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: megan_peta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2005 - 06:00 am Title: Chapter 1 - Go West Young Man

I'll say she'll remember when there is an actual kiss. I loved that bit, her thinking that he kissed her when she was only rememebring when he last had. Ic an feel the promise of secrets and little moments of beauty. I can't wait for more...as for the westerns, nahh, didn't like them, don't think I've ever watched a John Wayne flick, but reading about it is totally different. And anyway *whispers, I loved Little House on the Prairie*

Author's Response: Moments of beautfy -- wow, thats nice and I hope to be able to given them to you. Just give me a few more chapters :) As for LHotP -- well, yes, only with time travel, martial arts, vampires, and slayers....okay, so maybe not so LHotP, but I could have her scream out "Oh, Pa!" in a moment of passiond? Nahhhhh Thanks so much for the comments - I always love hearing from other writers :)

Reviewer: rockerbaby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2005 - 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Go West Young Man

awesome start. I am eager to see where this story takes us. Please update soon!

Author's Response: I promise to try to update frequently! thanks for taking the timeto post.

Reviewer: dreamgirl4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2005 - 06:19 am Title: Chapter 1 - Go West Young Man

lol on the plot!

Author's Response: :) Thanks!

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2005 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter 1 - Go West Young Man

OMG! This is so fantastic...and the one thing I haven't read Spuffy in would be an old western. Looking forward to how Buffy copes with the change of scenery, because we know Spike is going to just love it. Hopefully will catch this on LJ.

Author's Response: I just love this time period and the challenge just sort of worked in the western motif. I'm posting here and in LJ and on my website and hope to get a chaper up every week of so from now on. Thanks so much for commenting.

Reviewer: Pipergirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2005 - 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Go West Young Man

Oh wow, this is going to be soo good :D Please, please update soon!! Your Buffy/Spike banter is dead on, your... hell, your everything else is great: Scoobies, grammar/spelling, comedic timing... *sigh*

Author's Response: Wow, thanks... the banter is someting I work hard at and my beta keeps me honest (and is also the one that should get the kudos for the spelling/grammar). Thanks so much for commenting and letting me what worked for you in this story. It does inspire!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2005 - 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Go West Young Man

loving it so far

Author's Response: Hope it stays that way. Thanks for letting me know you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: carrie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2005 - 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Go West Young Man

ooh, i like!! this is the start of a very promising story :) more please!

Author's Response: Thanks -- hopefully this will be updated a bit more frequently.

Reviewer: jen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2005 - 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Go West Young Man

love it

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: bloodshedbaby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2005 - 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Go West Young Man

oh thank god. Something new being posted that doesn't suck. Ooops, that came out bad, didn't it? *sighs* Anyway, looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Oh, I understand what you mean. I appreciate that you think I don't suck -- and if I don't it because of a great beta (and I'm looking for a few more) and getting constructive feedback that makes me think about how I write. Thanks for taking the time to comment!

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2005 - 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Go West Young Man

I love this! It's John Wayne meets the Wizard of Oz:) Great first chapter and I can't wait to see what happens!

Author's Response: LOL, John Wayne meet WoO is exactly what I was going for. Thanks for taking the time to comment

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