Bloody school! I can totally picture it. Giggled my way through the entire chapter. I can't wait to read what's next!

Okay, you know you're one of my bestest friends, so I am so ashamed that I haven't reviewed before this, but you know my internet situation (and the fact that I have to rely on my wonderful friends *cough* you *cough* to give me my internet boost. But I still should have read this one long long ago. I know you're proud of it and I love love love the opening chapter

This was an amazing story, good work.

Oh my, I go away and Angelus comes out to play........bad girl bad girl, great addition to the story.......but would love to know why he decided to make an appearance and how it happened......

OKay, now I'm feeling bad I called Buffy a Bitch, LOL....well sort of.....so hard to forget teenagerville......oh thank God I will not relive that time.....or if I do, someone will shoot me, LOL

How I would love to see Spike as Peter Pan with this little girl. Who would have thought, Buffy's been in love with him since she was one. Fun and wonderful start.

Awesome set up. I think I'm going to like this story a lot. {Smiles}

This is really good so far. I like the brief glimpses into Buffy's childhood. It is kind of weird to get around the idea of Angel being Buffy's father. lol Still, I like how the 'verse has been reworked for this story and that the slayer Angel loved and brought the Scoobies together is from the tie-in novels.

Ahhhhh, I'm hooked........more please.....I love the last thing she told him.....and is Angel going to have a cow, or would a vampire have a cow, hmmmmm.

This is an interesting premise, and as always, your writing and plotting is wonderfully done, but... Well, i have to say, I'm a bit uncomfortable with the possibility of a romantic relationship between Buffy and Spike here. And being that it's a Spuffy site and the rating of the story is NC17, i'm pretty sure that's where you are going :) Just as on Angel, the idea of Cordelia and Connor skeeved me, i feel the same here. Spike is like family, like an Uncle, like a father, possibly, been there her ENTIRE life, it's just... It's a bit incestuous, despite the lack of blood relations. I know, i know, i can just not read this and hey, you are generous enough to always having more than one WIP posted here for all of us to enjoy, so i will have my Ashlee-fix, but... I just felt that i should share this opinion. Not a flame, understand, just an opinion.

Author's Response: Don't worry, I don't consider it a flame and I am well aware that the relationship is a little weird. There will definitely be moments that might seem a little strange, but ultimately, and hopefully, it will be realized that they are friends first, before anything else. I knew this would be too weird for some, but I am a fan of stories like 'Sweet Surrender' (step-siblings) and 'Older' (step-father) but I realize not everyone would care for this type of fic. Thank you for the opinion and the non-objective way you stated it. And for the record, Connor and Cordelia skeeved me, as well LOL! But that was also because I am a Cordy/Angel shipper.

Love this story!!! Please give us more. It's a fantastic story-line, very original. Keep it coming : }

CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!! sounds like this is going to be very different but also very good, just like everything else you write. please please please update soon.