Date: 10/08/2012 - 07:50 am Title: The End
This was really good, especially the beginning. Seemed to lose its way a bit at the turning point (when Willow did the reversal spell), and the climax (at the Intiative) was also quite muddled. Spike & Buffy were so unforgivable, I'm not sure it could have believably been resolved so quickly. Also, seems odd not to have looped back around to Willow to figure out the order of things, and to make clear to all the characters which things were spell-related and to what extent. Dialogue was good, especially the first half, and especially with Spike. Promising writer, just needs some polish to tighten up plot.
Date: 07/11/2005 - 05:39 pm Title: The End
u should write a sequal to this story!
Date: 07/11/2005 - 05:38 pm Title: The End
wow! i just read this story and i couldnt stop reading! it's one of the best stories i've read! love it!
Date: 05/19/2005 - 12:45 am Title: The End
Wow! I actually read this story a LONG time ago. When I very first started reading fanfic. I loved it then and I love it now! Excellent story!! Very well written.
Date: 04/03/2005 - 10:31 pm Title: The End
hey, just wanted to say I LOVED this story!!! great job :)
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much! I appreciate it. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 04/02/2005 - 08:32 pm Title: The End
i read this story long time ago in a different site and i thought it was the best spuffy i ever read,it's original and well writing.... you did a great job :)
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! You have made my day! Thanks!
Date: 03/24/2005 - 11:42 pm Title: The End
I read this story a long time ago. It is one my all time favorite fics.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and reviewed it. :)