Date: 06/05/2006 - 06:57 am Title: Paradise Of The Lost And Found
the end????? i hope not this is really good, although - just a slight criticism, earlier chapters could do wiht a slight beta-ing
Date: 04/04/2006 - 09:51 pm Title: Paradise Of The Lost And Found
That was really good! I was crying after Buffy sang and it is quite a thing to make me cry. Only the ending of House of Flying Daggers made me cry so it's quite an achievement! This is a really good story and I love it to bits! Keep on Writin' !
Date: 04/13/2005 - 02:11 am Title: Paradise Of The Lost And Found
Oh, I'm all teary eyed. I'm off to read your sequel
Date: 03/31/2005 - 08:14 pm Title: Paradise Of The Lost And Found
I just read all 20 chapters and I have to say this story is amazing. There were some dry parts, but most stories have them. I have no idea why you've gotten so few reviews. If you're really interested in getting readers, you could write a few smutty flashbacks and you could up this to an NC17 rating. That alone would get more readers. This is a beautiful story, though, and I wouldn't blame you if you didn't want to change a word. I'm starting the sequel as we speak.
Date: 03/27/2005 - 06:23 am Title: Paradise Of The Lost And Found
(Gasp) this is astonishing, i cant wait for more
Author's Response: Hopefully I will be able to start putting up the next part of the story tonight. It is a work in progress and I hope that you will enjoy it as well. I will let all the reviewers know when I put it up.
Thanks so much for the review I really appreciate it.
Date: 03/25/2005 - 03:03 pm Title: Paradise Of The Lost And Found
just read through all 20 chaps. and loved it . keep it coming
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. This story and its sequal are my babies. I don't have the sequal up here yet but it is up at my website. I hope you enjoy it as well. It is a work in progress, but I'm going to try to get a chapter up a week. Thanks again so much for your comment.
Aerialla