I like this story a lot so far. Great, as always of your other stories. Update soon.

Oh I have feeling that the person in that picture was really Buffy. And could it possibly be Drusilla that wrote those words. Or even Buffy if she has a self confidence issue. I hope Spike gets set straight if that is the case.

Author's Response: Don't worry, Spike will be discovering the truth [whatever the truth may be] veeeeeeery soon. Promise! Thank you for reviewing again s_o, it means a lot to me!! xxx

I loved your introduction to this fiction. I just wonder how long Spike and Drusilla have been broken up until the point of her arriving at where ever they were.
I loved the kind of history you made between Buffy and Drusilla which makes me wonder even more if Spike knows about Buffy but in a different way due to Drusilla. Reading chapter 2 next.

Wait be kind and re-wind. Poor Spike finding out that the reason he mistook his new nanny for his wife was because she's her twin sister and poor Buffy for finding out that her sister had this whole life. What the heck happened to Buffy keeps wandering in my mind. Great chapter.

Okay right off the bat I love the characterization you created for Spike. He has a very deadly and dangerous feel but he obviously seems very committed to Buffy, or at least getting there. I loved the sppech you had Buffy give to Spike about her stands for once when it came to their relationship. Great chapters Update soon.

Author's Response: thank you. I really appreciate that, particularly after reading your fanfic "Mafia Mistress". I've really enjoyed the way Lorne and Buffy have interacted plus the adorable Spuffy relationship. I don't always feel as though Buffy has enough of a voice in this fic so I had to let her blow off steam. Too bad that she's just a tad hypocritical.

I love this story so much, how come no updates?

I loved the ending of this chapter. The parallels between Nazi Germany and the Initiative, priceless and very true. Even made me realize an odd symbolism that Walsh was Blonde and blue-eyed with very German features...thats just my thinking now.

I liked that you tied in things that actually happened, that no one would take into consideration. For example the fact that Buffy DID rely on instinct with threatening Drusilla because of the love with Spike would get him to back down. Never saw it that way. Great job!

Okay I've read the whole story and wow a girl has to reach for a box of tissues when you got to that letter chapter.


Update soon.
~Spuffy_Obsessed

I've read all four chapters and so far you definately have me captivated. That kiss though this past chapter...woo had to turn up the air conditioner.

A great struggle of desires you have created for these two. I like the friendship you made between Cordelia and Buffy I always feel that people always make them out to be enemies. I wonder what could happen next.

The only way to find out is if you grace us with a new chapter. AND SOON!!!
~Spuffy_Obsessed

Author's Response: Wow, what a super great review! Thanks ever so much! I am having a really good time writting this one and have had to force myself to leave it and work on my other one. I know a lot of people don't like Cordy, but I always did. She was a spitfire. Of course, I didn't like it when she poked fun at Willow, but her banter with Xander was great! Thanks again!

Although I disliked that you lead them in this direction, I do like the fact that you gave Buffy a rebelling attitude.

And although she did intiate the first sexual act, you made it clear that she only wanted it one time to get over him. However Spike took it further and although it's not rape and part of her does want it, it's still sexual harrassment.

However, I think you honestly do have a good story going on here, I had no doubt about that and I myself will continue to read it.
~Spuffy_obsessed

First off...there seems to be a fiery raising debate going on with your readers in the reviews...as a writer I suggest you tame it before things get ugly.

In my opinion this story is getting a lot better since Spike's 'options' that he gave Buffy. You're beginning to create more than one side to the characters [conflicting demons at best] which in this type of story needs to occur. And in those conflicts of inner turmoil I'm beginning to see that both characters are equally responsible and brought this on to themselves.

All I have to say is make the chapters a little bit longer.
~Spuffy_Obsessed

Author's Response: Trying to make them longer in the story i'm writting atm. It's just hard cause i don't like to give to much away in one chapter... Thanks for your review though, your opinion means alot.

Haha, well I don't think a Bangel story would have her doubting te relationship and then turning around and having a sneaky sex act with Spike. Great chapter. Loved the biting raw passion that they ended up having in the end.

Next chapter please.

I thought it was a really good ending. Rather sudden...but you ended it well.

~Spuffy_Obsessed