Penname: klylu [Contact] Real name: lisa
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Chirality by yutamiyu Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 224]
Summary: Can five minutes make a world of difference? An alternate spin on S6, starting from the climax of "The Gift." WINNER of Best WIP in round 2 of the Spark and Burn awards as well as Best Episode Stealer in round 19 of Love's Last Glimpse Awards!
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45387
[Report This] Published: 11/24/2006 Updated: 08/23/2008
Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 01/26/2007 Title: Chapter 1: I

that was an interesting twist! i dunno if anyone has done it before, but for me is quite original.

and well written, and promising, and... i loved this first chapter! lol
i don't know why i haven't notice this fic before, but now i've got 8 chapters to read and... that's good! ;P

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like my little story, and I hope to continue to impress you.

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 01/26/2007 Title: Chapter 2: II

loved the dream sequence!

poor buffy, i feel for her know... *jumps on the next chapter to see her reaction* lol

Author's Response: Don't worry. It will get better. :)

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 01/26/2007 Title: Chapter 3: III

"If she’d learned nothing else from her Watcher over five years, it was that."

such a funny line!! lol
so, buffy guessed the truth. and she's gonna tell the others. i'd like to see dawn suffer a little bit at the realization (ok, i'll admit it... not a dawn fan, here... lol)

i liked when she don't want to cry, cuz it would meant giving up

Author's Response: Things between Buffy and Dawn will get better, I promise. :)

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 01/26/2007 Title: Chapter 4: IV

tara's always been one of my fave, and anya as well. you like them too, do you? :D

still wondering about dawn. is she stil angry at spike? does she feel guilty?

Author's Response: Anya's extraordinarily fun to write, although I'm saddened that the way I've set up the story I don't have as much opportunity to write her as I would care to.

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 01/26/2007 Title: Chapter 5: V

i think buffy's not really fine... her life seems to get better, the relationship with dawn less strained, but... she is slighty falling to pieces. like when something big happen to you, and at first you're too shocked to feel the pain.

glad that tara noticed it.

Author's Response: I think Buffy's very good at repressing what she feels; years of hurt will do that to a girl. And I love Tara as a confidante for Buffy.

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 01/26/2007 Title: Chapter 6: VI

buffy's always been great at denial! lol

now i begun to feel itchy waiting for spike's retuning. cuz he is coming back, right?

Author's Response: This wouldn't be much of a Spuffy story if he wasn't coming back... :P

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 01/26/2007 Title: Chapter 7: VII

oh boy! lol

never been so grateful to have another chapter to read!!
just the moment she begun mourning him, he came back!

Author's Response: I couldn't keep you all waiting TOO long! You might give up on me!

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 01/26/2007 Title: Chapter 8: VIII

yeah, that's a good question.

but now that i finished all the chapters, i have to wait till the next update! :( lol

buffy came back for a reason, and now of course there should be one for spike too.

buffy knows she loves him now. and she actually wants to tell him! can't hardly wait to see the "declaration"!!

Author's Response: I'll try to update soon, I promise! I think the declaration will be coming up shortly as well. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

My Story by SpikesSlayer Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 19]
Summary: This is a hard story to tell, but in order for you to understand I have to start at the beginning. Only the beginning is a long story and we don’t have the time to go through all of that. I’ll give you the overview and then get to the real story. Here goes…
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Horror, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3451
[Report This] Published: 11/27/2006 Updated: 02/06/2009
Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 11/28/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

pike? that's gonna be interesting! and even if i'm not so fond of daddy, the brother thing was a great surpirise...
and a crossover? with who?? you really need to update! :D

Torn by Pegasus Rated: AO-AdultsOnly Liked [Reviews - 230]
Summary: In the midst of the Civil war, Elizabeth meets William on a stormy night when he is carried, injured, into her tavern.
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action
Warnings: Violence, Sexual Situations, Child Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37649
[Report This] Published: 11/30/2006 Updated: 09/25/2007
Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 11/30/2006 Title: Chapter 2: Introductions

if i have to judge from the premise... this story is gonna be great! :D

the historical set is fantastic and makes everything seem more real (an less... fictional). elizabeth is strong and caring, and for once her dad seems a nice person. it will be interesting to see william recover...

Second Sight by AJ Hofacre Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Buffy's thoughts before... and after... she dies. Quotes taken from most of Season 5, takes place during the end of "The Gift" and afterwards.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11983
[Report This] Published: 12/02/2006 Updated: 12/04/2006
Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 12/04/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Risk The Pain

wow! i loved this first chap! buffy's rambling during her jump (and her death) are really believable. i liked listen to her while she realized the intensity of spike's feelings.
the last line could have been funny... but maybe it's just a little tragic...

Author's Response: Unfortunately, given how meddling her friends became, it's more on the side of tragic :( But she didn't know it at the time. Poor Buffy. Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 12/04/2006 Title: Chapter 2: Working Through

buffy finally together with his mom it's sweet & tender... and funny. lol
and so she thinks to be a vampire, right? well... given her history, that's an obvious conclusion...

Author's Response: Not to mention one of her biggest nightmares... as evidence by Season 1's "Nightmares." Buffy's biggest fear, aside from her dad not loving her (which unfortunately has been a given since the minute he disappeared on the show) is becoming a vampire and having to crawl from her own grave. I think her panic attack was well worth it.

Summary: S7 angst. Spike is spending the holiday with the FE and Buffy is spending hers with her thoughts. Can souls can connect at this magical time of year? Set between "Bring On The Night" and "Showtime"
Categories: Ficlets/Song Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2780
[Report This] Published: 12/02/2006 Updated: 12/02/2006
Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 12/02/2006 Title: Chapter 1: If Only In My Dreams

wow! that was so... xmas-ty! i loved it...
it was really sad, but there was a hint of hope, and determination, barely concealed. the touches of humor (anya, clem) were cute and not overdone, they made u smile without breaking the spell of sweet sorrow and waiting for something better to come.
buffy's musing were great, and the last scene with spike was so touching. i like to see that the connection between them is so strong. I liked willow too...

Author's Response: Thank you. Sorry for the delay in responding but have had RL and computer troubles. Appreciate your reading and taking the time to review. k

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01/01/1970 Updated: 01/01/1970
Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 12/04/2006 Title: None

for just one sec i feared the worst...
this is a real beauty... you could really feel the connection between the two of them.

and i fell in love with this line...
"Each breath he was taking matched her heartbeat, and suddenly she knew that Spike was residing there, in the unseen- the syncopated space between each beat, the secret she didn’t hear, but knew existed"

Just a Crumb by Devin Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Maybe Spike got his crumb after all... (Post-Crush)
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1087
[Report This] Published: 12/28/2006 Updated: 12/28/2006
Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 12/28/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Just a Crumb

that was really great.
buffy went from bitchyness and denial to a gentle acknowledgement of his love in a natural & believable way.You're right, spike got his crumb.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I was hoping it was believable-- that's one of those things that I get really stressed over. Thanks for the review!

Some Kind of Oil by Devin Rated: AO-AdultsOnly Liked [Reviews - 319]
Summary: William Pratt, a successful European artist, has received an offer from Liam Angelus of L.A. to do a series of nude portraits. Despite his reservations, Spike complies, unaware of the effects that the chosen subject, struggling art student Buffy Summers, will have and the problems she will cause. (All Human Fantasy) Runner-up Best Fantast at the S&B Awards Round 3
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Buffy/Other, Spike/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41379
[Report This] Published: 12/28/2006 Updated: 02/07/2008
Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 01/02/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hi Devin!
i liked so much JaC that i couldn't help trying this one to... lol
and it was a good decision cuz i love it so far! :D
your spike outside but still william inside is good... buffy seems quite an interesting girl... i just hope she will dump riley soon, even if i dread the other in spike's pairing. buffy & giles getting along is always a treat (i must say he wasn't one of my fave characters on the show, but i like him here)
so... i'll go and read the other chaps now! :D

Author's Response: Awww, I'm glad you enjoyed both my fics! :) I wish Giles had been more understanding to Buffy in later seasons... so I'm making him that way, haha. Thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 01/02/2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

that conversation was really funny! i loved it...

can't wait for the interview now...
*runs to the next chap*

Author's Response: I'm glad-- I was afraid the convo would be a bit hokey. *sheepish glance*

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 01/02/2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

wow!
the interview scene was great! i love buffy when she acts so bravely.... i almost didn't miss spike! lol
and i loved so much that you got tara modeling. i really like her character and i do think that doing something like that is totally believable.

Author's Response: Yup, I was thinking about in "Restless" when Willow was painting the poem on her back, and I was like, "Psssh, that's so going to be in my fic!" I really like Tara, too. :)

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 01/02/2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

uhmm... i wonder who the hot stranger was... let me think... riley in disguise? lol
keep up with the good work! :D

Author's Response: Haha, thanks very much for reading and reviewing. :) Who could he be, indeed?

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 01/28/2007 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

that was a great chapter!

i love how you used the earthquake and buffy's death in your story, they fit perfectly. the sharing mood that followed was great too. and, of course, i like even more that spike has finally realized where his heart his going!

again, awesome chapter!

Author's Response: Yay! Glad you enjoyed-- I was a bit apprehensive about putting that in, but I'm relieved that it worked. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 01/30/2007 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

she is not going to run, is she?

good chapter... the drunk banter was quite funny, and the confrontation with riley went... well (not for riley, of course)

will they figure it out before you end the story? lol

Author's Response: Haha, they'll figure it out soon enough! :) Glad you liked the banter, I had fun writing it. Thanks for the review!

Summary: REVISED AGAIN ALTERNATE ENDING!!!Buffy Summers and William Giles were best friends as kids, but at the age of 10 William is forced to move to England with his father. What happens when 10 year old William comes back as 18 year old Spike to visit an old friend?
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41419
[Report This] Published: 01/10/2007 Updated: 06/10/2009
Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 01/10/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Old Friends

that's good!
i always like when buffy & spike were friends as kiddies!

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 01/10/2007 Title: Chapter 2: It's You

the "cutie" scene was brilliant! :D
i loved it!

Summary: Buffy is back in California after spending her summer in Paris falling in love with a shy Frenchman named William. Will their long-distance love survive the test of time or will distance prove too much for them? Third and last installment of the ‘Love’ trilogy. I highly suggest reading in sequence ‘Language of Love’ then ‘Lessons in Love’ before ‘Living for Love’. PWP. Current Nominations: (as of 10/17/2007), Spuffy Awards Round 13.
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9594
[Report This] Published: 01/15/2007 Updated: 02/12/2007
Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 01/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Temps Change Tout (Time Changes Everything)

glad to see your muse finally cooperated! lol
i was kinda expecting some little angst for the long distance, but the dru twist caught me by surprise. I'm with you on the ick factor when spike betrays buffy with her (or chooses dru over buffy), but i can stand as a psycho friendly fashion counselor... lol
and the lying part? that's totally spike's doing! william could never do that! :)
smooches, luv! :D

Author's Response: Yes, he finally decided to play nice. He was so good to me after my hubby left and then BAM - went into hiding for a few days. Yeah, I just can't help but think this series has been pretty much on the fluff factor and given the long seperation they'll have, well, a little angst never hurts. Spike definetely emerges out of the old William and of course, doesn't always make the best choices. Just remember, he's still William on the inside. Thanks for the lovely review hon, kisses.

Summary: COMPLETEDBuffy joins the military and heads off to Basic Training. The Boot Camp experience can be rough enough to endure, but there’s something, or rather someone that will make her time spent becoming a soldier ten times worse - a Drill Sergeant sent straight from the bowels of hell that takes an instant dislike to her mere presence............. Spike. He’s evil, he’s mean, he hates her but even worse... he lusts for her. This is not a military fic or even a fic about the military. The Army serves only as the backdrop-setting to the story, so don’t shy away from reading. Winner of Best Fantasy at Love’s Last Glimpse Awards, round 19. Spuffy Awards Round 13: Judges Choice; Most Original Plot, Best Fantasy Saga. Readers Choice: Best Fantasy We Missed the Bed Again. Judges hand picked for special acknowledgment. Cradle of Humanity awards: Winner - happy workers awards, runner up - best smut
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 141678
[Report This] Published: 01/17/2007 Updated: 10/09/2007
Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked
Date: 01/18/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to Hell

i know, i know... it took me sooo long! :( sorry sweetie!

you were right... this idea's quite original, i don't remember anything like that.
and you were wrong... cuz i didn't find any "dry part", lol
i don't know anything about that kind of life (well, i've seen "An Officer and a Gentleman" - several times - and G.I. Jane... does it count?), so i certainly needed the background.
you know, from the outside, you can look of the funny side of buffy's experiences (the first meeting with spike was hilarious), but i do believe that it could be quite different if you are at the receiving end of it!
i love so much spike's struggle... against buffy's scent... will the mud do the trick? lol
i can't wait to see our little slayer take her sweet revenge... spike really needs some.... "punishment"! lol
(sexual joke apart, we know she's a kick-ass girl underneath the dumb blonde surface.. lol)
smoochies, hon!

Author's Response: Awww, i'm just happy to see you leave me one hon, I adore them. Glad you didn't find any parts too dry, Lord knows the subject can be at times. Oh please don't look at GI Jane and believe some of that stuff, Viggo was horrid to Demi in that movie. Boot is definitely filled with some truly hilarious things and I had many laughs while there but honestly, being on the recieving end of the crap that comes with it - so not pretty. I think you'll be quite pleased with next chapter based on your review and what you'd like to see, giggles, that's all I can say for now. Thanks for the reivew my friend, big hugs.