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Twinnings by Xela Rated: AO-AdultsOnly Liked [Reviews - 101]
Summary: Ochit Duzon asked for something akin to Twinlets, only different. (This fic involves twins, please be aware of that before you venture into read.)
Categories: Porn w/o Plot fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Parody
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Freaky/Kinky
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11726
[Report This] Published: 09/15/2007 Updated: 06/20/2008
Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 01/09/2008 Title: Chapter 5: Five

I suspect they're all doomed! So sad that the real world is intruding on the sexcapades! And don't worry about plot, lack of plot is greatly appreciated also!

Author's Response: Yeah, it is, but I have to give them some semblance of lives. But trust me, the plot? NOT that plotty. More like an excuse for them to have some really fantastic I'm-glad-the-plot-is-out-of-the-way sex.

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 01/17/2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Did you have to mar a perfectly great smut-filled threesome fic with the likes of Darla and a very Angelus-y Angel? Oh well, I do believe I'll get over it if you promise many more brain melting sex scenes involving my favorite threesome of Spike, Buffy, and Liz!

Author's Response: Why, yes, yes I did. lol. Don't worry, they're not going to really be around much. I just needed to get Spike out of the apartment and into the real world as some sort of misguided need to make my characters 'realistic' or something ridiculous like that. And I'll see what I can do about those sex scene lol

Summary: Buffy lives in a universe where vampires are a part of civilized society, and slayers are hunted down as outcasts who don't belong.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Spike/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5475
[Report This] Published: 09/23/2007 Updated: 01/16/2008
Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 01/17/2008 Title: Chapter 2: Is Granted Upon You

Nice fantasy outfit although a little mature for 16! While I'm strangely fascinated with this upside down world you've created, I'm a little bit confused. I get that there is some kind of vampire/human alliance, but I don't get why it seems as though vampires are running the country. Mandatory blood donations from 16 year olds? Vampire news? Spike has a reality show? Then there's this whole hunting down the slayer as if she actually intends to try to slay vamps? I guess I just don't understand how in a world that readily accepts and feeds vamps they can't accept that just because a teenage girl is the slayer doesn't mean she wants to be or plans on acting like it. Don't misunderstand, I really like this story! It's very original, and I'm excited to see what's in store for our favorite twosome. I'm just a little confused and it makes it easier to focus on this great storyline as it unfolds if I don't have to spend time thinking about it. However, if you just haven't got to those parts in the story then I'm more than happy to wait!

Author's Response: I haven't gotten to those parts in the story yet... ;) Don't worry, I've got answers to your questions. I'm flattered that my story has gotten you to think really hard. I think that's a good sign? Thank you so much for reviewing!

Faded Hope by bitchee Rated: AO-AdultsOnly Liked [Reviews - 99]
Summary: In an attempt to get over her grief for Spike, Buffy has cut herself off from her past life, and anything that reminds her of the vampire that's still in her heart.
But when a news story brings her attention to the battle in LA, the Slayer finds herself once again facing old betrayals and old faces.
Returning to LA she finds even newer betrayals in the form of a surprisingly undead Spike and a certain brunette slayer.

Categories: General/Canon
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Spike/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61496
[Report This] Published: 10/11/2007 Updated: 01/13/2009
Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 01/12/2008 Title: Chapter 10: Fists and Fury.

Oh wow! Love Slayer Buffy going all primal because of Spike biting Faith. It's clear Buffy the slayer isn't going to just stand by while Buffy the girl lets Faith take her vampire. And Faith feeling like she wouldn't be walking away from that fight, I almost wish it had actually happened. Surprised Spike didn't catch on to what was happening with Buffy though, he's usually more perceptive than that!

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 01/18/2008 Title: Chapter 11: Confronting the Truth.

Well it's about time! So wish Dawn could've beat Andrew within an inch of his life but at least we know the truth about what's been going on. All I want to know now is why! Glad Dawn is finally confronting Willow and clearing the air about their lack of communication. But what is Slayer Buffy planning on doing with Spike? Can't wait to find out!

When in England by Secrethistory Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Post Wrecked morning after scene, Buffy arrives home to find Giles in her kitchen. Dawn is in trouble. Buffy, Giles and Spike depart for England How far will Buffy go? Will she and Spike grow closer or further apart?
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4852
[Report This] Published: 10/15/2007 Updated: 12/21/2007
Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 12/21/2007 Title: Chapter 3: Three

Whoa, nice revelation/cliffhanger thing you've got going on here! Can't wait to find out the story behind that one! Just started reading and almost wish you would have written the Spike kidnapping Dawn scene b/c I'm sure it would've been hilarious. Hoping Buffy can realize she trusts Spike more than she thinks so she can actually be real with him.

Author's Response: Thanks for a great review! I didn't consider writing the kidnap scene as I was in Buffy POV, but there may be some elaboration at some point.

Quiet Summer by Sotia Rated: AO-AdultsOnly Liked [Reviews - 733]
Summary: Photobucket

23 year-old Buffy has to spend her summer with her teenage cousin Xander and his cousin Will... who's no longer the shy boy she remembers. Or is he?--------------------------------COMPLETE

Note:
Although this started as a 'Romance' it would now better fit the Porn With Plot category (if there was one)... I guess that can be expected when Spike is a teenage hormone bomb!

***Nominated at the Cradle Of Humanity Awards in the Best W.I.P category.

Winner of 'Judge's Choice - THE ECSTASY AWARD' at the Forbidden Awards', Runner Up Best AU at the Indigo Crypt Awards, and Reader's Choice - BEST FANTASY 'WE MISSED THE BED AGAIN' at the Spuffy Awards! ***YAYYYYYY *does happy dance* Thank you Carrie and xenachakram12 (lj), you rock!
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Freaky/Kinky
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86584
[Report This] Published: 11/05/2007 Updated: 05/02/2008
Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 12/17/2007 Title: Chapter 14: 14

Love how in Will's attempt to look older he suddenly became every girl's wet dream... Spike! Of course, who else could he be? And let me guess, Buffy is going to return from the closet with a leather duster that will seem very familiar to us!?! BTW, I've been reviewing as Dom so don't think I've stopped reading. I'm still loving this story and hope this plan to go out in public doesn't backfire!

Author's Response: LOL! Glad you're still reading and liking! Good guess! Of course the plan will backfire *giggles* but only in a good way! :-P Hope you like what's coming!

XXX

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 12/21/2007 Title: Chapter 15: 15

No need to be worried, that was an incredible way to fulfill the promise of smut. Love how the makeover wasn't just physical, and he really adopted the new persona of Spike! And the sex... there are no words just panting, flailing, and drooling! Also, that bit about Parker and Riley was quite humorous!

Author's Response: *Grins* Really? You mean that? (can't do a little dance now, cuz I'm at work, but I'm giddily shaking my legs uder the desk!!! :-P)
Sooo glad you liked it!

XXX

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 12/25/2007 Title: Chapter 16: 16

Willow IS a genius! I'm glad Xander and Willow are on board the Spuffy true love train. Hoping all goes well with this little arrangement!

Author's Response: :-) I like my Willow *grins* Well you never know when something might go wrong with any arrangement :-P No reason for this to be an exception (evil writer, I know... LOL)

XXX

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 12/29/2007 Title: Chapter 17: 17

I was a little worried Dawn was gonna find out, and while I'm sure she'd eventually be a supportive sister, I don't think a phone call is the best way. Glad Willow's plan seems to be working and can't wait to see what Buffy has planned!

Author's Response: Well, I'm writing Dawn a bit after my own younger sis (except for the screeching, lol, mine doesn't screech) who is always the first one to tell me what's wrong with my choices, as well as the first one to support them anyway (yep, that was a hint :-P) I hope you'll like what's in Buffy's mind,

XXX

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 01/08/2008 Title: Chapter 18: 18

Great chapter! Lots of hotness with a cute ending to their night. It's about time Buffy found the courage to tell him!

Author's Response: I'm happy you liked it! I thought it was about time too! If this relationship is going to last they have to have confidence in their feelings! :)
XXX

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 01/14/2008 Title: Chapter 19: 19

They're just too cute! Glad Buffy reassured Spike that her words were true. Sad to see bits of the reality of their situation creeping back in though.

Author's Response: I know it's sad that they can't live in their bubble for ever, but I'll try my best to keep those bits of reality from hurting them as much as I can (and I sooo can :P) Thank you,
XXX

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 01/21/2008 Title: Chapter 20: 20

Liked the insight into Buffy's past. Loved Spike taking the bathroom door down and getting that familiar scar in the process! Great to see them happy but know the summer can't last forever!

Author's Response: Glad you still like it honey... And don't worry, I'm all for round the year Spuffiness!!! ;)
XXX

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 01/28/2008 Title: Chapter 21: 21

Always lots of sex with these two! I absolutely love to read it! That was a great scene with the shower and the shaving. And poor Spike with his trademark eyebrow raise!

Author's Response: LOL! I hope all that sex doesn't put anyone off, but honestly Spike is a teen who gets to have sex with the woman of his dreams... It's only natural for him to wanna do it as often as possible :P As for Buffy... how could she resist him? I know I wouldn't be able to! LOL
Glad you still like it honey,
*hugs*

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 02/09/2008 Title: Chapter 22: 22

Sorry it took me so long to review, RL decided to interfere with my Spuffy fic reading. Well, you already know the smut isn't scaring me away, in fact, I think it helps keep me reading! I really love the possessiveness of Spike but I adore their tender moments too. Don't worry so much about what your readers are thinking and be true to yourself and your fic the way you imagined it.

Author's Response: Honey, you can take as long to read as you want since your reviews always make me smile! I hope RL interfering means it's sooo good you don't get the time to log on your PC, and not that it's hectic (as mine is :P)

I am really glad that you like QS, smut and tenderness, and want you to know I more than appreciate your words.

As I said, I am not going to change anything about it (I have a complete outline and I'm sticking to it) but, since I've only been writing since Novemeber, I need con-crit to help me improve, and if readers are leaving because of a specific reason I just wanted to know that reason so that I could improve in the future.

Again, thank you so much for the review and for your encouragement,

*hugs you tight*

The Slayers by dhwritertex Rated: AO-AdultsOnly Liked [Reviews - 115]
Summary: William ‘Spike’ Giles had a rocky past before he moved to America with his father Rupert Giles, which he put it back in the recesses of his mind as they began new lived in Sunnydale. A year after they moved , they met Joyce and a year after that, Rupert and the kind gallery owner entered a romantic relationship for which she moved into the Giles’ home. A year after that Buffy and Dawn entered into the picture, due to their father Hank, wanting freedom from the reasonability of having children. Thus began the love-hate relationship of Buffy and Spike. However, their junior year of high school turns into a rather interesting one.
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Rape, Child Abuse, Spike/Other, Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39389
[Report This] Published: 11/11/2007 Updated: 01/02/2008
Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 12/19/2007 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty Two

Love the story! I really like how you changed the whole first season to make Spike the slayer and Buffy the Kendra of this story. To top it all off we still get the Vamp!Spike that we all know and love! Great job, update soon!

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 12/22/2007 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty Three

Well, that went much better than expected! I suspect Joyce just wanted to clear the air and make sure she wasn't going to be a grandmother anytime soon. Besides, with everything else going on it's good they have one less thing to worry about.

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 01/01/2008 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty Four

Glad you decided to do Halloween! "I don’t see how, he’s got too large a forehead to be called an angel.” Love it! Onto the next chapter...

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 01/01/2008 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty Five

I always found that scene highly amusing! I like how Dru knows how it was supposed to be. I'm wondering how it'll work if Angel's costume makes him a vamp and then Darla tries to turn him. Guess I'll just wait and see. Also, looking forward to seeing what Buffy discovers about claims and how she reacts.

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 01/02/2008 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty Six

I'm wondering how important that info on claiming is going to turn out to be. Looking forward to more of Halloween!

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 01/02/2008 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty Seven

Nice mixture of BtVS Halloween episodes! On to the next chapter...

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 01/02/2008 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty Eight

Still loving the melding of Halloweens! Mostly expected, onto the next chapter...

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 01/02/2008 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty Nine

I foresee a Slayer pregnancy and lots of prophesy type chaos. I'm really anxious to know what happened to Angel after Darla took him and to Dawn since she's unknowingly out with a vamp. Hoping for more quick updates!

Summary: If you had one wish, what would it be?
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10588
[Report This] Published: 11/20/2007 Updated: 12/24/2007
Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 12/24/2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I started reading this ages ago on fanfiction.net, and I'm glad to see it's finally finished! It's a great little Christmas story made better because Spike wished for it. Especially love the end of this chapter, may read it again because laughter is good for the soul! Merry Christmas!

At It Like Rabbits by NautiBitz Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 77]
Summary: SEQUEL to Heart Don't Lie! It's the final chapter in the Bunnyverse: Thirteen years after the end-all apocalypse, Buffy and Spike are happily married with kids (and are just as frisky as ever). Ah, domestic bliss. It must mean something's about to change around here...
Categories: Serial Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: Love Bunnies Saga aka 'The Bunnyverse'
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16202
[Report This] Published: 11/24/2007 Updated: 02/03/2008
Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 01/02/2008 Title: Chapter 5: Hopped Up

After rereading that passage and the events since the initial meeting of the super friends last chapter, it feels like there's a lot to resolve in just one chapter. I suspect it will have something to do with Chance and her "magic ears." The "Great Peach Caper" wasn't upsetting on its own (several very hot images are flashing through my head), but the idea that it caused 2 years of problems for our favorite couple had the effect of a fire extinguisher. Loved that you threw in a magic peach as a nod to "Peaches and Herbs" since I'm a fan of that fic though!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, PG! Glad you got the peach reference. :) The last chapter will be the longest one yet, but things *will* be resolved... soon as I post it... :)