

Date: 10/21/2009 - 12:20 am Title: Twelve
Very funny chapter! I especially love when Buffy says she likes sex on the sand! Great job

Date: 11/23/2008 - 11:31 pm Title: Twelve
Hee, Buffy she get a clue

Date: 07/26/2008 - 11:57 am Title: Twelve
Oh my - the heat in my cheeks is not just from the mini-heatwave Norway is experiencing at the moment : )
This has gone from super sweet to super hot!!
Playground chappie soon - pretty please with sugar on top???

Date: 07/26/2008 - 11:55 am Title: Twelve
Oh my - the heat in my cheeks is not just from the mini-heatwave Norway is experiencing at the moment : )
This has gone from super sweet to super hot!!
Playground chappie soon - pretty please with sugar on top???

Date: 07/24/2008 - 05:55 pm Title: Twelve
So Faith is after Liam if Buffy is right (and I think she is).
Still enjoying their game :)

Date: 07/24/2008 - 05:33 pm Title: Twelve
Oh god thats last sentence "We're gonna play" made me want a Spike of my very own to play with..right..now.
I love this story so much with the great mix of snarky smirky Spike and bashful protective Spike.
I really like the Angel/Liam character in this story too.
More soon pretty please.

Date: 07/24/2008 - 04:03 pm Title: Twelve
Oh my! This is gonna be fun! ;)

Date: 07/24/2008 - 01:53 pm Title: Twelve
Loved Buffy's interaction with Faith, her mistake with the name of her drink made me giggle. :D Can't wait to read more, the playground scene looks like it's gonna be fun. Wonderful chapter!

Date: 07/24/2008 - 04:05 am Title: Twelve
Oh my! *lol* Loved it! But did you really have to end it there? ;) Can't wait for more.

Date: 07/24/2008 - 04:03 am Title: Twelve
Awesome chapter, I can't wait to read the next one.

Date: 07/24/2008 - 03:46 am Title: Twelve
Liked the Faith angle, and I can't wait to see what you have planned for the playground.

Date: 07/24/2008 - 12:49 am Title: Twelve
Aaaah! The teasing! Loved the appearance of Faith. Also, you just made "playground" an incredibly sexy word. Am anxiously awaiting the next installment.

Date: 07/24/2008 - 12:12 am Title: Twelve
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Date: 07/23/2008 - 11:42 pm Title: Twelve
Oh that was so short it was cruel. Lol
I can't wait to see what kind of fun they are going to have at the playground. :)

Date: 07/23/2008 - 10:58 pm Title: Twelve
haha interesting end to this chapter:) i can't wait for the next update:) hope it's soon

Date: 07/23/2008 - 09:44 pm Title: Twelve
Nice! :D That was a fun chapter. And good grief, how irresistible is William? Whew!
Only one thing jumped out at me: when referring to mixed company, it's "blonds", no e.
Looking forward to fun on the playground next! :)

Date: 07/23/2008 - 08:13 pm Title: Twelve
Loved it! Can't wait to read more!

Date: 07/23/2008 - 07:21 pm Title: Twelve
Hope they don't break the swings. Heheh. Oh second hand, have at it. May as well go up for a round on the teeter totter too. Buffy probably could go for some sex on the sand---in the sandbox.

Date: 07/23/2008 - 07:10 pm Title: Twelve
I couldn't find anything wrong, just a lot of right with a big dollop of mean - how can you end it there? I want to see them play. Another fab update.