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Reviewer: spuffylov Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2015 - 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Flee Response

I love Spike and Alex's moment! I was so happy when she called him Dad!

Reviewer: MarzBar Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2013 - 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Flee Response

Wowee!! I just read the first five chapters and I am stoked! Great to have Wesley with them; he is so gorgeous, smart and reasonable. Morre soon please.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2013 - 02:12 am Title: Chapter 1 - Flee Response

What a first chapter! I'm hooked!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2012 - 07:25 am Title: Chapter 1 - Flee Response

Fascinating. Sounds more like the Council than the Initiative.
Just one point. In about the 9th paragraph, I don't think 'foregone' means what you think it means. From the context, I think you mean 'too far gone'.

Reviewer: aduras Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2012 - 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Flee Response


Hello Dear,
My name is miss Aja, Colors may fade, the sun may not shine, the moon may not be bright, heartbeats may stop, lives may pass but our friendship, I'll treasure 'till the day my heart stops.please contact me through my email address (Aja.adura01@yahoo.co.uk) for more about me.
Aja. MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2012 - 05:37 am Title: Chapter 1 - Flee Response

It's like the horror of the Initiative, but it's probably something else.

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