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Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2013 - 11:24 am Title: Chapter 12 - The Romance of Train Travel part II

I'm not surprised Spike is upset, poor guy can't win.

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2013 - 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Romance of Train Travel part II

What Spike and Buffy need is a bit of communication.

Reviewer: ILoveLamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2013 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Romance of Train Travel part II

“Don’t ask.” He said leading Buffy away. “that’s what he wants you to do.”
I dig that line. It was very natural.

I can't wait for more


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Reviewer: waddiwasiwitch Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2013 - 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Romance of Train Travel part II

I'm REALLY enjoying this so far.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2013 - 06:45 am Title: Chapter 12 - The Romance of Train Travel part II

Love the way this is going. It's going to take a while for Buffy to get her head round what's going on, but then she should TALK with Spike! Yeah right. Like that's going to happen any time soon! LOL
Just one point: “It’s fine, I don’t except you to get it.” Should be "I don't EXPECT you to get it."


Author's Response: Thanks! I am trying to balance uploading the chapters as fast as I can while keeping the typos as a minimum! Thanks for the review I was a little worried about going that direction with this :)

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2013 - 03:27 am Title: Chapter 12 - The Romance of Train Travel part II

Very good, how they think and react about this situation. Buffy is of course worried about what they did to her. If Spike calms down and starts to think, then he should be able to understand her reaction.

Reviewer: ginar369 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2013 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Romance of Train Travel part II

I can see this from both sides and they need to talk. Buffy is afraid of what she might be carrying and Spike just wants a family. Regardless of what Buffy does about the pregnancy Spike does have a family. Alex is his. She might be from another dimension but he is the only father she will ever have. Her Spike is dead and not coming back. Those two need to bond and maybe the pain, if Buffy terminates the pregnancy, of losing the new child will fade knowing he still has her.

Author's Response: Thanks! I was a little worried about bringing it up, but I thought that there was no way it would not go through her head!

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