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Reviewer: jj Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2015 - 01:46 am Title: Chapter 14 - The Closer You are to Danger the Further You are from Harm

This story is really good. It's moving right along and has an interesting plot.

The only thing is that Alex has kind of gotten to be a pain-in -the-ass in this chapter and the last. Just being a teen, i guess but she's a little annoying. 

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2013 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter 14 - The Closer You are to Danger the Further You are from Harm

Love how this story is progressing, hopefully Buffy and Spike will start nesting together to make preparations for the baby.   Look forward to more.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2013 - 04:45 am Title: Chapter 14 - The Closer You are to Danger the Further You are from Harm

They had some good talking and interaction between all characters.

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2013 - 04:30 am Title: Chapter 14 - The Closer You are to Danger the Further You are from Harm

Nice bit of air clearing there, much needed, but no easy way out!

Reviewer: mike13z50 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2013 - 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 14 - The Closer You are to Danger the Further You are from Harm

I really am enjoying your story, it is always exciting to see a new chapter up.  Your OC are well executed.  I liked the little bit of spuffy about the new little bit.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2013 - 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 14 - The Closer You are to Danger the Further You are from Harm

It's good that Buffy has finally remembered that she's not the only person who has been affected by Genesis. And now they're going to be hiding under Genesis' noses? Wonder how that'll go.....

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