Date: 04/28/2005 - 11:09 pm Title: Dangerous
Well, I know that this is su[pposed to be wrong and all, but I so want to see them get together, but what about the baby? I wish I had teachers like that when I was in school, oh wait I did!!!!!! LOL! kuddos
Date: 04/28/2005 - 11:02 pm Title: Dangerous
Love this so much. The slow building of their relationship is just wonderful. Most teacher/student fics. are not like that and have them together immediately. I dunno...yours just seem more real, which is what makes it so outstanding, in my opinion. I doubt I made any sense, but I tried. I love all your stuff by the way...I am just always too lazy to review. Sorry :) can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 04/28/2005 - 10:49 pm Title: Dangerous
Love it. Awesome...can't wait for more!
Date: 04/28/2005 - 10:09 pm Title: Dangerous
that little bit in the classroom was so sweet.. Great chapter
Date: 04/28/2005 - 09:36 pm Title: Dangerous
Oh Wow. Will's yelling scared me!!! waht a great moment between Wil and Buffy. i loved the way he talked himself into admitting it and when she opened her eyes.....aaahhh...great moment. So, Cordilia is being kinda nice. hhhmmm...wonder if she understands. Can't wait for the next chapter. congrats on your awards. You deserve every one!
Date: 04/28/2005 - 09:14 pm Title: Dangerous
sigh....i'm like...almost crying...that was so romantic and at the same time so frustrating...you're doing an excellent job, no wonder you got nominated...keep it up...thanx...love this side of william
Date: 04/28/2005 - 08:38 pm Title: Dangerous
I don't know that song. Never heard it before. Don't know where it comes from... *wink* Will is so far gone. He might as well just throw in the towel, cause he's not getting over this one. Loved his reaction in the beginning. Stupid loudmouthed kids... I liked the little mention of Cordelia and how she isn't tormenting Buffy about it, but isn't going out of her way to be nice to her either. Very Cordy.
Date: 04/28/2005 - 08:31 pm Title: Dangerous
When i saw the chap title i was praying for those lyrics and there they were, it was great to add a song of his in a fic and such a fitting song for the story too.....This was a wonderful update, congrats on the nominations and i hope the next chap is up soon! (hope your arm feels better!)
Date: 04/28/2005 - 08:23 pm Title: Dangerous
I'm so glad Spike yelled at the class, bravo Spike!! Very good chapter, the sleeping part and the part where she rested on his shoulder... very touching, I loved it! Update soon!
Date: 04/28/2005 - 08:16 pm Title: Dangerous
I love this story. Some of the schoolgirl/teacher stories are pretty pervy (not that there is anything wrong with that), but this one is sweet. They like each other, have an attraction and since this is Spuffy will eventually love each other which makes the age difference not so ewww. Keep up the great work! Oh and hope you are feeling better very soon.
Date: 04/28/2005 - 08:06 pm Title: Dangerous
i love this fic!!! you write spike/will so incredibly, and i'm glad that you're not rushing right to the smutty parts (though i am definitely looking forward to those!). keep it up...
Date: 04/27/2005 - 01:51 pm Title: Mistakes are often the portals of discovery
Yay, another chapter! Glad you made it! Loved how protective Spike got; and Buffy's friends were helpful too. She'll need every help she can get. I wonder what they'll do against Riley ... TNX for updating!
Date: 04/27/2005 - 12:36 pm Title: Mistakes are often the portals of discovery
ooooo what a cliffhanger. that was a great chappy. poor buffy. willow helping her take one step at a time was great. and xander coming up with the hot chocolate...cool. i like tihs xander. aaahhhh Will...what a man....riley is in for a world of trouble and good. i hope he gets it and good
Date: 04/27/2005 - 02:43 am Title: Mistakes are often the portals of discovery
Riley should lose West Point! Idiot doesn't deserve it!! Awesome chapter... really well written! I can't wait for more!!
Date: 04/26/2005 - 10:48 pm Title: Mistakes are often the portals of discovery
SQUEE! *does the dance of new BL chap* So, so good... poor Buffy, and gah but I hope Riley gets his ROTC ass booted out of West Point and blackballed from any other military school--asshole. It's so nice to see Xander being nice to Will... and Giles and the cuteness of the Will/Giles interchanges. Grateful Joyce is also a treat. But the chap belongs to the boyscout preparedness and absolute darlingness of Will--I SO don't want to be pregnant without a Will. You know you've ruined me for childbearing, don't you? So, yeah, I loved it--as much as I've loved all the others. Great advancement on all plotty and relationship fronts, and a massive deepening of my admiration and love for Will and for Buffy. Great work!
Date: 04/26/2005 - 09:46 pm Title: Mistakes are often the portals of discovery
Man this is getting good! I am curious how you plan to incorparate spuffines in here, so you definitly have my undiyng attention. Please update soon! Kuddos
Date: 04/26/2005 - 09:43 pm Title: Mistakes are often the portals of discovery
I'm so loving this story.. I love the protective teacher and the caring mother but not unreal to think that she wouldnt be pissed at all.. Absolutely great story
Date: 04/26/2005 - 08:53 pm Title: Mistakes are often the portals of discovery
i'm so in love with this story...it's so angsty...but all in the right places...hope riley rots in hell!!! or well, go to west point (so he can go far far away) and fail at everything =P well hoping you don't take too long between updates...thanx so much, it was an awesome chapter
Date: 04/26/2005 - 07:22 pm Title: Mistakes are often the portals of discovery
Wow. Poor Buffy! I didn't think she'd take it that hard. I guess, being a 17 year old, she wouldn't expect her boyfriend to go all psycho on her. Bastard. I almost felt sorry for him at the beginning of the chapter. But when he kept going on and on about his West Point appointment, and didn't have one single thought about about anything even resembling a baby, I just got pissed. Will kept his temper much better than I would have. Wonderful rescue by Will, Willow, and Xander. So touching. Oh, and when Joyce walked in the door and Buffy broke down, I just about lost it. Her tortured, "Mommy", always gets to me. *sniffle* So glad Giles is the principal of Buffy's school. He's a good man, he'll make sure things are taken care of. Wonderful, amazing, moving, heartwrenching chapter Nia! Thank you for updating so soon after your last Origins update. I'm so happy to hear that your pain levels are manageable today. I hope tomorrow brings you as much relief. *hugs you tight*
Date: 04/26/2005 - 07:14 pm Title: Mistakes are often the portals of discovery
ohhh evil cliffhanger woman you. Will rocks with his tenderness towards Buffy. Willow still the jabbering idiot. Oh Christ Xander, some needs to speak very slowly so he understands what happened *laughs*. I am glad that Joyce was a maternal mother here and not a you got yourself into this mom. Ole Rups got his work cut out for him. Now such a thing to say to his nephew should of been thrown out with the wash water.. that was hysterical. Now for that stupid git lil pinheaded f'n asshole Riley. I hope he goes to West Point and they run his ass so hard that he drops. I have been to West Point and there are lots of cliffs he be dropped off of. *grins*. So glad you had a pain free day and that you were able to post. Now i will wait patiently for the next chappy.
Date: 04/26/2005 - 06:34 pm Title: Mistakes are often the portals of discovery
liked it and cant wait to see what happens next and loved the idea of william taking care of buffy
Date: 04/26/2005 - 06:05 pm Title: Mistakes are often the portals of discovery
i am loving this it is quickly becoming one of my favorites!!! please update soon
Date: 04/26/2005 - 06:04 pm Title: Mistakes are often the portals of discovery
god i hate riley, he deserves to get expelled!Or killed by a hot eng. teach lol, either way this was a great update!
Date: 04/26/2005 - 05:34 pm Title: Mistakes are often the portals of discovery
Riley, you rat bastard. I say put it on his permanent record, Rupes. He doesn't deserve to get what he wants. He deserves a life of misery. Poor Buffy... At least Joyce seems to be being a little nicer to her now, at least for the time being. I want bad things to happen to Riley....
Date: 04/26/2005 - 05:31 pm Title: Mistakes are often the portals of discovery
the only point he should get is the end of a pointy shoe first on his shin....and then up his ass.......and then then can go West and fall into the ocean........LOL
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